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Lil Rip 0 0%
D~Illar~1 5 100.00%
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Old 03-31-04, 12:38 AM   #1
D~Illar~1
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D~Illar~1 -vs- Lil Rip

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aight since u 2 pussy 2 spit 1st...i'll drop wen i get home
verse due in by 11:00 2nite

10 lines
no b/shit, d/ryde votes
may the best man win..lol
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Old 03-31-04, 05:19 AM   #2
D~Illar~1
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just got home...so i'll key this shit....
*smirks*
Fucking herbs these days.....

Lil Rip comin to RB.com was the world's worst decision/
He's gonna get the sack, like the blind guy who did his cirumcision/
You're dyin to be a G, prewritin your shit 2 look less whack/
Focussed on your image, when its lyrical skills that you lack/
~Hasty 2 mention~
The only time you see 'pussy' is by looking at your 'reflection'/
You'll get tossed-regardless I promise even if you drop-your-hardest/
Honestly I'll still set this herbicide (herb aside) like cautious-farmers/
So while you're assuming-positions ill formulate an attack-of-my-own/
cuz i'm shitting on this MC like mcdonalds served me a laxative-cone/


*Hands Lil R.I.P his ass*
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Overall Net Wrekord
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~ThInK I'm LyIn...TrY mE~

~Click 4 Classics 2 Open mic~
My Testimony

Don't Sleep.... or I'll prove whose ~Illar~
 
Old 03-31-04, 05:21 AM   #3
D~Illar~1
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i didnt see your other thread...
make sure u drop something...
pussy...
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Overall Net Wrekord
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~Click 4 Classics 2 Open mic~
My Testimony

Don't Sleep.... or I'll prove whose ~Illar~
 
Old 03-31-04, 09:53 AM   #4
Lil Rip
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rip

it rip time, time to put you in a grave*
if your last name was jesus your ass still couldn't be save*
you the king of puchlines i'm cool with that*
just know if your ass punch i'm gonna punch back*
cause punchlines are ill*
go mo ko then avander hollyfield*
you ain't shit just a bitch that deep throat*
and the only way you can win is by sucking dick for crew votes*
and tell that hoe you call mom to stop changing lipsticks*
cause the bitch is making a rainbow out of my dick*

now what bitch
 
Old 03-31-04, 09:56 AM   #5
Lil Rip
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil Rip
rip

it rip time, time to put you in a grave*
if your last name was jesus your ass still couldn't be save*
you the king of puchlines i'm cool with that*
just know if your ass punch i'm gonna punch right back*
cause my punchlines are ill*
got mo k.o. then avander hollyfield*
you ain't shit, just a bitch that deep throat*
and the only way you can win, is by sucking dick for crew votes*
and tell that hoe you call mom to stop changing lipsticks*
cause the bitch is making a rainbow out of my dick*

now what bitch

my bad had so typeos this is how it surpose to look
 
Old 03-31-04, 10:00 AM   #6
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d~illar: good punches and structure, i liked the line
You're dyin to be a G, prewritin your shit 2 look less whack/
Focussed on your image, when its lyrical skills that you lack/
that shit was tight anyways 7/10

lil rip: ya shit sounds like mine, it rhymes good but ya punches are weak, ya even honored him by saying ya was cool wit him bein the king of punchlines. what the hell are you doing worshipping someone ya battlin? don't drop ya nut like dat, anyways 3/10

win:d~illar
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Old 03-31-04, 10:08 AM   #7
Lil Rip
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thanks for the advice i'll use it in my next battle ........................mabye you
 
Old 03-31-04, 10:48 AM   #8
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[ D~Illar~1]
Open: 7/10 Good… Flow was off with the syllables…
Close: 8/10 Strong Closer… Felt It
Personals: 6/10 Didn’t Have Many
Metas/Wordplay: 9/10 You Had Nicer Form on the 2nd half…
Punches: 8/10 Came Out Swingin...
Multis: 7/10
Lines That Stuck Out:
" So while you're assuming-positions ill formulate an attack-of-my-own/
cuz i'm shitting on this MC like mcdonalds served me a laxative-cone/ "


Overall: Feelin This Verse… 45/60 Nicely Done...

[Lil Rip]
Open: 5/10 2nd Line Lifted Up The First… Not That Bad…
Close: 5/10 On The Weak Side, Wasn’t Great...
Personals: 4/10 Didn’t Have Many…
Metas/Wordplay: 5/10 Not Bad, Not Nice
Punches: 5/10 Im Being Nice Giving You A 5...
Multis: 3/10 Didnt Really Have Em...
Lines That Stuck Out:
" you ain't shit just a bitch that deep throat*
and the only way you can win is by sucking dick for crew votes*"


Overall: Not Bad… Keep Elevating… 27/60 Damn…

My Vote - D~Illar~1
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Old 03-31-04, 01:25 PM   #9
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i vote on battles based on punchlines so here it is

D~Illar~1:u got some skills on the punchline side i can't lie my favor puches were "He's gonna get the sack, like the blind guy who did his cirumcision" that wuz tight and this one "The only time you see 'pussy' is by looking at your 'reflection' that wuz tight to

lil rip:u good to man but u gotta get yo punchline game up cuz u came at him a lil weak but u still had a punch that stood out to me "if your last name was jesus your ass still couldn't be save" that wuz nice but u gotta be constant wit the punches and just so happen he had more that stood out, better luck neck time

so wit that bein said my vote goes to~Illar~1
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Old 03-31-04, 02:11 PM   #10
Lil Rip
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thank for the in put still uppin gor voters
 
Old 03-31-04, 05:20 PM   #11
D~Illar~1
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is this a k.o or not..

you ain't shit just a bitch that deep throat*
and the only way you can win is by sucking dick for crew votes
^^ i aint in a crew lol....
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...The King of Punchlines...



Overall Net Wrekord
~58-10~
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~Click 4 Classics 2 Open mic~
My Testimony

Don't Sleep.... or I'll prove whose ~Illar~
 
Old 03-31-04, 07:59 PM   #12
Lil Rip
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hey you got this ya you right to you got a lot of skill most respect
 
Old 03-31-04, 08:00 PM   #13
Lil Rip
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but you still need to more votes right
 
Old 03-31-04, 10:18 PM   #14
D~Illar~1
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k i thought it was 1st to 3-0 was k.o
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...The King of Punchlines...



Overall Net Wrekord
~58-10~
~ThInK I'm LyIn...TrY mE~

~Click 4 Classics 2 Open mic~
My Testimony

Don't Sleep.... or I'll prove whose ~Illar~
 
Old 04-01-04, 09:49 AM   #15
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post the thread in battle complaints...

or whuteva...

drop by this thread n drop a vote ...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117553

HoLLaH aTCHa Boi!
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