we alreadi got tha rules..
ur spittin first
no crew votes
no b/s or d/r votes
unlimited bars..but yeah 10 bar minimum
check in b4 u spit
ur herb butt has been beatiin unprepared newbs but i'm different

aight im checkin to let you know im here but i have to type up my spit

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that's coo
checkin in...waitin on your spit which is due in 10-15

aight check it

Young star this is nothin personal,//
But ur leader got scared of my arsenal//
Coz im 8 and 0, he started to tremble//
But since ur here im bout to dissemble.//
Are you really a recruit bitch don’t lie to me//
I bet ur gonna put my lyrics in ur little diary//
d.j em sce musta been smoking crack//
oh well say it with me youngstars shit is WHACK!!//
Haha the newest recruit to the posse//
Lets revise ur shit, it’s a lil too sloppy//
Forget average this coverage is above ur leverage //
Ur stunted so you cant reach up n’ enjoy the beverage//
Ur shit is weak, and what is wit the name young star//
Your like hilary duff forced at 18 to retire//
But your demise will come sooner than that//
In fact its now bitch, we’ll get you to the hospital stat//
Like I said it was nothing personal, just business//
Go back to d.j em sce and ask for repentance.//

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aight like you said ya got 10 min to spit.........

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i'm bout to drop now
h/o
i type slow
sorry
lol

you like going on 15 min late.......................but thts coo

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Man u whack as hell,,suprised that the leader wud have it
ur fucked up structure and flo is tha only thing causin havok
lyrically ur a faggot, trynna find ya man's dick to grab it
ur rankin is so low that they still call u a maggot
but i don't wanna ryde ya fake ass herbish skill
i mean ya fake ass repentence is tha only thing i will feel
yet still i spit, constantly fillin in tha gapz of ur mind
i don't kno y i fuck wit herbs like u..i really ain't got tha tyme
i don't like tha fact that u choose young newbs to smack
sound like u scared of vets that's tha fact
ur vocab is whack, its kinda scary
i mean u come as soft as a 10 year olds gums..waitin fo a tooth fairy
but like i sed i gotta end this shit
I'm sik, check ya ass fa STD's az i spit

ok well i though Lyrical Havok had better vocab and better flow... but youngstar u stood ok pretty good from both sides...
my vote goes 2 Lrical Havok

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UPPINNN..pleez expalain more when you vote ya heard...UPP UP UPPPIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

go vote vs chalk clorox..and vs j mob ya heard...do that thurrrrr

youngstar hit that shit of
even though lyricals flow had some hits they werent a match
mine goes to young

good battle lyrical havok...let's git some votes..*whisper* herb

we need some more votes in this bitch ya know us newbs need some winz too....

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yo both verses were koo
gud punches, gud wordplay, gud personals
but i felt like yungstar fell off a lil at the end
and it started to sound repetetive, maybe due to lack of diverse vocab
anyway havoc came smooth and consisitant so he gets my vote
peace

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