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chekc drop then i will

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Accomplished aint acocomplished shit, the nerve of this dude/
10-8 record? You gotta be the herb of your crew
Michigan cat now next he'll be from Detroit/
I'm gettin it now, why this fag perfers to be with the boys/
But Smooth stay nice I'll write life in my lines/
You garbarge no reason for you to fight for your pride/
This kid can't spit if lame was more words hed be the acronym/
Battlin with adjective and lyrical javelins tills he walks away furious cause his boy are laughin at him/
What thought I only kept one in the clip/
I keep styles reserved trash the last one that I spit/
And this is for your kid's kid's to really get/
Trust it'll be 10 more years for u to understand if I really spit/

Corrections
The very first Accomplished(word) should be Accomplishment

Killen I'ma bring dis herb-to-his-fame, outcome of dis battle are da words in his name...
I'm workin-his-game, cuz each "letter" i'm typen is just a "Key"-to-my-flame.../

Steppin an settin da bill, like porky this bitch got murd..murde...murde..i mean KILLED...
Next i get ill cuz my verses contain some excellent skill.../

I kill dis bitch da worst-way he jacks off in his thesaurses to say he gets word-play...
I merk gays and rap da shit outya ass like its ya birthday.../

Diss my crew we leave ya in plastic bags, blastin fags, fuck ya lil 9 we all packin 4-5's and mags...
we like to cutcha and leave a mess of who dress in drags,.../

non-stoppin leave ya body rocked cuz my ten lines is i'll like you bar-hoppin...
finisher is murderin glock-lockin shott ya in ya face gotya brain matter drip-droppin.../

YO dats it ten lines getcha votes in hurr people

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VOTES VOTES VOTES .... I need some Kool-aid

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Accomplishment Took This Battles Fairly Easy He Had Better Flow, Structure, Punches, and Vocab!!!!

K.O. - You Need Some More Practice!!!!!!!!! Wasnt Really Feeling Your Shit!!

Vote: Accomplishment

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yo thanx uppinf or votes yo

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aight the breakdown........

Opener - Accomplishment...the words in your name shit was hot
Flow - none...didnt feel neither of ya flow
Punches - Accomplishment....the proky line was hot n ur otha punches hit way harder than k.o.'s
Personels - neitha of ya had any or decent personels
Multi's - k.o. had the better multi's so he got that category
Closer - Accomplishment had the better closer just because it rhymed but it was hot neways
Sustainment - Accomplishment kept the pace up the whole time so he got this
Enjoyment - Accomplishment had the overall better verse n came way harder n i liked his betta

ADVICE....

Accomplishment work on not stretchin ya lines (only a couple were stretched), you had nice structure,punches, n u had the sustainment. work on the flow, it woulda flowed but u had sum stretched lines. otha than that if u keep gettin betta u could be 1 of the top heads on here.

K.o. - id say u shouldnt battle a cat of his level of skill. u had a nice verse overall. work on not stretchin ya lines n that will help ya flow. your verse started off hot n afta 4 lines it jus fell of the cliff. u need the sustainment to get that categort n enjoyment. ya structure is straight. deliver harder punches n that will get u wins. ur llast 4 lines jus clinched a loss for ya so jus work on sustainment. aight man elevate n ull get betta. no hating jus givin advice. goodluck

VOTE - Accomplishment

return the favor please........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117844

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

thanx yo uppin you know we be poppin dem thangs haha

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yes could not agree more with everyone here accomplishment you definitely deserve my vote on this one 1 i'm not going to give you much advise due to the fact that i feel that i am not much better than you peace

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aight thanx for da votes stilll uppin yo

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yo upppppppppn

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uppppppppppin folks i'll return da favor

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