bravheat773 to spit first
10-12 lines
no crew
no hate votes
verse due by sat nite

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ight first you will catch a rite then a left then catch one in ur eye then in ur chest i eat bitches like u for breakfast man go home ur hill billy mom just got aressted man u can rest in peace or like ur cuz did rest on dees u pussy eaten hoe ur shit is whack u like chedda bob u cant flow killen niggas like i no u two face hoe in the ring ill show u how its done sopposely u the king well in my mind ur the queen the queen of the pussy ight ur turne no d/r

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Im the Illest and that being why is because im from the Illstate or i should say Chi ill beat you with one eye closed step up and get your ass toast

Dog wot was that?…A lame excuse for a verse
If I wrote mine in ‘reverse’…yours would still be worse

You say you from Chicago?…that’s cos ya rhymes were Bulls (Balls)
I could just post one word…and it would still be better than yours

Son for someone called brav’heat’… ya rhymes weren’t too hot
I had trouble finding them…like wen u try to find ya lil dick next to a spot

You ‘new to rb’…thinking ya gunna stand strong
But like premature ejacuation… you wont ‘last long’

Dog its ‘embarrassing’ battling someone this bad…I’m ‘blushing’ too
Problem is…I wont improve my rep by crushing you

I got to hand to you though…cos I will remember this battle forever
The time I got to face…the worst rapper ever

‘Brav’O

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kingz got this he had betta structure...and i felt his flo betta u kno
go vote cuz ain't no hatin..cuz brav u spit a damn good verse

GO VOTE DUDES
good battle YoungStar* vs. J-Mob
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117602

there is no dick riding so i can't vote for bravheat even though that wigga lost bigg time. what happen. kingz came ready and you were like dead. shit. sorry wigga but kingz got you. he had 2 punchlines to your none. foreal were your playin or is that you best holla at me 1.

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KingZ Had Better FLow, Stucture, Punches Hit Harder, Nice Vocab, Alright Wordplay,

Bravheart You Need To Stick To Your Own Level Of FreeStylers' ....!!! Competition

Vote: KingZ

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lol ok last time i put so and so won just cause of this i got introuble....so heres the thing Kingz had a better punchlines...."Dog its ‘embarrassing’ battling someone this bad…I’m ‘blushing’ too
Problem is…I wont improve my rep by crushing you" i think that killed it...
As for braveheart....u need to write like kingz did no 1 wants to read str8 across i made that same mistake....ur new so am but i felt ur lines were a lil weak....could have come harder and had better multies....

VOTE KINGZ

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