I set it up.. like you said
10-16 Lines
3-0 means KO
first to 5 votes.. N E thing else I forgot put it..

drop yo verse

naw u good....give me a min 2 spit my shit....wont be long ........good luck...pce....and dont come at me like u better than me eva again

Threatz only flow is the sperm in his sack
Like every bitch who talks shit…u deserve 2 get smack(ed)

Any shred of skill you might possess is somethin you paid-for
By beggin for elevation tips, I didn't know RB trained-whore(s)

Like train-doors, your reputation is slidin' shut
Your tryin to 'rip' me, but you can't 'make the cut'
And my lines are deeper than the vagina of a slut

No Need To Go Off, This Bitch Is Layin On The Ground
He Heard my Voice And Started Relayin My Sound

Dr. Pepper Couldnt Give This Kid A Taste Of Originality
Wont Murder Ya, Dont Want Ya Mom To Face A Real Catastraphe

Do u really think ur a threat?
Dawg battling me is something I kno later on u’ll regret

WENT REAL SOFT ON U...HAHA pce

yo u have 30mins 2 drop otha wise...i'll kno u cant come back 2 wht i just gave ya....next time u'll show gratatude 2 ur elders....dont go fuckin thinkin u hott...im far from hott but u just pissed me off by talkin shit....

yo man come on spit ur fuckin shit....wht u ran out of shit 2 say....THIS SHIT SHOULD JUST END AND SAY I WON...CAUSE THIS NIGGA FUCKIN GARBAGE.....pce

Nigga I got gunz.. tha fuck I need wit a quickpunch
beatin me, shit you got a better chance at being the next Captain Crunch
never once, have you managed to impress me
thinkin you hard but your really a "Goodfella" like Joe Pesci
don't test me, talking down on threatz
hatin an talkin shit, call me what you want just don't call me collect
and have respect, when you mention my name
when I grab dat tek, better "dash" like your dame
nigga recognize who da boss, step in tha ring
you get tossed an broken off

nigga wha tha fuck is you talkin bout.. i ain't worried bout you
you tha only 1 talkin all dis shit.. dayum shut tha fuck up
ackin like a lil HO cuhz all you do whine

umm need for an explanation
quick got this wit his rhyme scheme, wordplay, punches, flow but no multi's
threatz u had multi's but u need punches that hit hard....use personals....work on not stretchin lines....elevation needed
v/quick
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118045

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

umm need for an explanation
quick got this wit his rhyme scheme, wordplay, punches, flow but no multi's
threatz u had multi's but u need punches that hit hard....use personals....work on not stretchin lines....elevation needed
v/quick
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118045

__________________

That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

mayn get tha hell outta hea.. talkin bout returning a favor
is dat tha only reason you votin

above average verses for both of you...

when quickpunch started off his verse, i was looken for greatness, his first bar was real good with a nice multie. Then his verse fell off just a lil, and his punches quickly started dying. Though he had some nice multies throughout the verse, they were not consistent, and neither were his punches, but when he did drop a punch or a multi, it was nice.

threatz, exact opposite. First captain crunch line, lame as hell. But your battle quickly became better, and had some nice punches throughout the battle. Both somewhat lacked personals, and i think you had like 1 multie, but like quickpunch, you often started a bar with a rhyme.

v/threatz

i forgot this lil thing...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117604

there we go

i thank quick punch had better structure both flowed well punchz did fall off some were kinda weak shouldnt never go eazy make em cry when he read it
threatz some good punchz and better personalz

vote threatz

no bad blood quickpunch shouldnt went soft though brah 1

lets go ahead n get some mo votes..