Aight realistdoggy11 :

- 16 lines max, 10 lines min.
- No crew votes or d/r votes
- 25minutes max to spit after check in
- I'll spit first

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alright hit me up wit ur shit

Here we go:

This muthafuckin' doggie has me guessin' if he is a new breed/
Bitch try to bite my style, you'll be at the vet's with fuckin' rabies/

Real bitchy emcee's are usual on my dick, but your just humping my leg/
Yo, I'll crack shell's open and cook you raw just like scrambled eggs/

I know you never wanted this battle in the first place/
You'll be walking out of here wishing to have your birth erased/

Wiggle, Waggle, his skills are just like his bone/
Because he ain't spittin', he's just slobberin' over the microphone/

Bitch I write shit on the spot, but you could become filled with my lead/
I didn't ask this bitch to do a trick, he just decided to play dead/

He walked in cocky, thinking he would adapt/
Your getting socked up like a man, but I already called him out as he got bitch slapped/

It was a new rap house I was also leashed upon/
But now I'm off and it's your first loss I feast on/

This is a small chapter while it's the end of the story/
I know I made you wet your fur, But please believed I marked this territory/

Reply realistdoggy11!

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118449

need 2 votes to win...vote honestly, I'll return the favor..by the way....nice verse...good multies and good punches and personals...good everything

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

Come on man, spit your verse. You have been Online forever. Don't be pre-writing shit now.

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whoops u dun said it/bitch u gonna regret it/dis battles funny cause all ur wack rymes r pathetic/ur a nerd and when u read dis its gonna be scary/dog u spend all ur time wit ur nose in da dictionary/and u right, i piss on shit to mark my territory/so i pissed on ur grave thats the end to all ur storys/im a dog an i bite/my grips real tight/ im the realistdoggy but ur the bitch tonite/i dont have a diease ur da 1 wit da rabies/u hooked up wit a smut and gave it 2 ur babies/how u gonna say that load bout me slobberin on da microphone/i wasent slobberin, i was laughing, cause my ears r faggot prone/when people vote they aint gonna feel any or ur shit/cause ur ice cold and im fully lit/

Alright. Nice verse mine. UPPIN ON VOTES^^^^^^^^^^^

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what

Aight man, I'm telling people to vote dawg, that is what UPPIN for votes mean.^^^^^

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o alrite dogg good luck

aight...i liked both your verses...but here is my vote

Punchlines: I gotta give this to Oc6...his punchlines i felt hit harder

best and worse: oc6 best line "Wiggle, Waggle, his skills are just like his bone/
Because he ain't spittin', he's just slobberin' over the microphone/"

worst line: "He walked in cocky, thinking he would adapt/
Your getting socked up like a man, but I already called him out as he got bitch slapped/"

best and worst for doggy....best: "whoops u dun said it/bitch u gonna regret it/dis battles funny cause all ur wack rymes r pathetic"

worst: how u gonna say that load bout me slobberin on da microphone/i wasent slobberin, i was laughing, cause my ears r faggot prone/

basically, i thought his Oc6's best was better than your best, as well as his worst was better than your best.

Structure, hands down goes to oc6...

Multies...oc6...you didn't have any multies doggy

flow, i'm gonna say doggy...you had better flow

and personals...definately Oc6, his whole verse was at your name...thats hard to do

I really liked your verse doggy, i just liked oc6's more...but much love and respect to both emcees

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Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate.

"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew

Thanks for the Honest vote and input Wildfire. Keep them votes commin' people.

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Yo, hit us up with a vote. You wanna vote in return? drop a link, holla.

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Breakdown,

Real..AAAAAAHHH SHORT LINES...I hate short lines your structre sucked so it was hard to flow i didnt see that many punches for the half a paragraph you had sorry dawg elevate 4/10

Caustic..Hotness flow struc punch personals metas and multies all hot ness ...verse flowed off da tounge pretty well punches hit hard and personals
This muthafuckin' doggie has me guessin' if he is a new breed/
Bitch try to bite my style, you'll be at the vet's with fuckin' rabies/
^^^Opener was tight as hell good to start off killen this guys 8/10

Vot Oc6 da caustic

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