aight since u wanna mess wit me
10 line minimum
i'll go first against ya weak ass
u spit when i'm done

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aight:

yo i'm come wit lyrics to make ya head spin/
cuz i'm B-A-L-L-E-R/
u know who i am, the next superstar/
murdera ya fake, fake as can be/
and ya still claimin to be a tight ass mc/
but i'ma spit the truth let everybody know/
that u and ya punches are missed like shaqs free throws/
ya probly a geek wit glasses, workin for microsoft/
u fantasize about gettin laid, playin wit digital lara crofts/
murderas a name for somebody who spits hard/
u as soft as a rent-a-cop security guard/
i'ma done wit ya ass, and i didn't have to try/
i killed u and easily hit u as if u were a bulls eye/

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Yo ur a disgrace to the human race//
u make my head spin cause when i saw u i was like GOD DAMN//
u say my punches are missed like shaqs free throws//
at least i didnt have sex with a super ho//
when u got her in ur care u were like, use a ho, what, use a ho, i said i used a ho,HO//
stop acting like u black or white//
u killed me and easily hit me as if i was a bulls eye//
Please bitch this aint taget practice//
Sorry fagget

Yo im done, i dont care if my shit didnt rime, im just glade i could get that of my back

uppin for some votes, please dont let this kid win

Baller! East Miles is calling ya number so come on and battle me ed and oh if u want to evaluate Check out open mic "This is hard shit"

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East Miles

Ma bad both u niggas is so garbage dumpsters wouldn't even let u throw your rymes in it. Damn oh my god ya'll so horrible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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East Miles

This is simple. Baller, your rhymes and punches were kinda simple, not really complex or original, but they served the purpose. murder.. even feeding off all his shit you couldn't get a good punch and half your lines didn't rhyme. Not great flow or structure really from either, nothing special but Baller definetely won this. Return the favor, honest votes on these:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118554
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118568
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...680#post1224680

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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ok first off.....rhyme ur lines
baller...ur opener didnt rhyme....i laughed at the lara croft line that was an ok punch....werk on usin personals and multis....get sum metaphors in ur verse.....u won it barely jus for havin an ok punch...
murdera...u had a lil bit of multis in u opener....ur shit didnt rhyme at all....get more direct punches....u basically jus restated baller's verse...if ur gonna feed learn how to do it first....learn personals...
v/baller
return the favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...324#post1225324

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easy

this goes to Baller

For better flow, better rhymes, better style and way better punches.

No offence Murdera but that was really week, there was no flow what-so-ever, not even any decent rhymes, and what did rhyme was simple, you had no vocab at all, and even though I'm only amature myself it seems that you need some help with construction and with decent punches, all that shit bout ho'ho's? Dude come on, you can do better than that, you could have found better lines!

Anyways, without a doubt BALLER takes this!!!


Can y'all vote in

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118313

Thanks in advance peeps!

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breakdown for baller_84106:

flow:mah nothing special on for the most part but there was some weak spots 5/10

volcabretty average up this if you ever want to compete against the top of the site 5/10

punches:you talked way too much at the start about your self what was that about four or five lines of it?? really you shouldn't do that in battles especially in a short text battle like this best line,"that u and ya punches are missed like shaqs free throws/" played topic but most of your lines were 6/10

overall:17/30 alright verse you should enter the battle league on this board that would be a good place to tighten up your skills

breakdown for murdera:

flow:basic and off for the most part really gotta work on this 4/10

volcab:nothing great again work on this 5/10

punches: nothing that hurt your oppenent at all the best line was that flip on his shaq line and even that was feeding off his verse and your not suppose to do that so 5/10

overall:14/30 really needs alot of work but you should sign up for the battle league the experience will help you there

vote--baller_84106 took this he kinda ran away with it being that murdera didn't really throw much for punches

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

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