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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

Spul, ya dull nigga, I come on cuttin in deep wit a sharp blade/
Only thing I could trade tha remains in for is shit, ya bitch-made//
Lyrical Crooks nigga, believe that, I kill trick ya wit powerful lyrical words/
I'm not shook by ya best intrest is tha sport of suckin dick, thats upsurd//
I ain't 'rappin', I'm 'wrappin' ya up in a rug so I can throw ya in a grave I just dug/
Ya not goin down 6ft, ya goin down 10, I beat in ya record ya lil wannabe thug//
You can't feel this level, ya level is shit, so I don't have to spit to win in tha end/
I just mend together a weak verse, yank ya purse then send ya dead ass to tha bend//
Trick, get off tha subject of dick cause ya ain't got one, I'll beat ya critical wit a brick/
Stick to this, you want Rick to stick his dick in ya ass, crew:in one, u ain't in a clique//
All you bout is losin, like my rhymes abusin' ya, so ya whole family feel it, in conclusion/
I'm confusin ya amusin ya wit these rhymes so last time sit ya ass that Im done bruisin//

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Murdered:

LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

pretty good battle.....you guys both came hard.....

spul well i liked your verse it was pretty funny flowed pretty well....and had some good personals....

cept the last line was pretty generic and crappy

nephew good battle man....cept that you were talking only about hard shit...you need to throw something a little more funny in there....but you did well too....flow good....

overall i liked spuls verse a little bit better...

but my respect to both mcs///
vote SPUL

hit me up with some votes thanks
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119254

Ok its like this.. punches spul has a slight advantage becase he had personals with the city, crew and name disses. They weren't great, but they were there. Nephew J had nice multis but the flow was kinda off, lines too long especially ones without multis. Also not much creativity, so although the mutlis were there I wasn't really feeling it. Spul kept his lines better lentgth I think, gets it for edge in personals and better flow.

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tight battle

Spul you came strong with some nice flow and some ten star rips.
the last 2 lines were my favourites
good solid punches to give an overall good performance.

Nephew J had a good start but then tha flow dropepd and the structure went a bit wack. u had some good punches but Spul had u beat.

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Spull takes this just because he came a tad bit harder Good battle from both

Please vote on mine Spul Da Solution vs. Spitfire

i liked both verses both of yalls flow was off the chain 4 reel

spul-had good struture,good multis,good vocab and some hott punches 2 match...yo flow was crazy man was feelin it 4reel...u had a good start which i always look 4 when i vote and u impressed me wit urz..

best line-You go around reppin’ L. Crooks… what kind of crew is that?
The “L” is for losers, cuz they are full of n*ggas that can’t rap

dat was ^^^ crazy ass helll nice shit homie nice vocabn and using his crew name against him

worstline-u didnt have 1 at all yo shit had me sayin oh shit datw as tight i didnt stop 2 think about wat u meant on none of it

line that caught my eye-I f**k yo family up... and I don’t even need to ask you
I did yo aunt last night… I guess that makes you my nephew

good way 2 end yo verse nice job

punches-9/10
struture-9/10
vocab-8/10
multies-8/10
personals-9.5/10
opening-10/10 loved it
closing-9/10
disses-9/10
overall-9.6/10


J-didnt have good structure but it was where i can read it u aslo used good vocab and had some tight punches but yo structure still was da worry....yo start got me 2 like i said if u start good dat can help and u did dat jus like spul so u get thumbs up on dat

bestline-

Spul, ya dull nigga, I come on cuttin in deep wit a sharp blade/
Only thing I could trade tha remains in for is shit, ya bitch-made//

^^^ 1st impression da best yo start was good

worsteline-u didnt have 1 like spul both of yall had some nice shit yo flow was on point

caught my eye line-Trick, get off tha subject of dick cause ya ain't got one, I'll beat ya critical wit a brick/
Stick to this, you want Rick to stick his dick in ya ass, crew:in one, u ain't in a clique//
All you bout

^^ real good shit that caught my eye

punches-9/10
struture-7/10
vocab-9/10
multies-7.5/10
personals-10/10
opening-10/10 nice
closing-10/10
disses-8/10
overall-9/10

winner-spul by structure J if u wouldve structured better then u wouldve had it rapped up but spul had flow and struture and hott shitt no hate J u did yo thing 2 but vote 2 spul

spul got this 1 wit a better flow j man ya linez are to long cut em down a few wordz an it make it look and sound better but u both had solid punchz spulz hit a lil bit harder and he had better personalz pretty good 1z 2 good battle though
best linez
After this battle’s over … you might as well leave town
My record after this will be like yours is now, jus turn it around