10-15 lines
no d/r
no crew
u spit first

checkinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn in drop yo verse man

Yo solution how do u setup a thread to battle some 1? cuz i been tryin and askin peepz they dont tell me how do u set it up??

Yo..yo..Check it..

im holdin Chrome-Traits, when lyrics Blast..ya Dome-Breaks/
cuz you know 'I-Land' more "Punches" than ya 'Home-State'/(hawiian punch)
and like a 'Drunken Housewife' im 'Bringin Bars-To-this bitch'/
i'll have this 'Hoe Stuck In The Dirt' like a 'Gardener'/
pardon-him, he dont realize how wack-he-is/
grabge verses 'Eat Yaself' like 'Subtractin-Ribs'/
you rap-wit-fibs, and you think you 'Holdin-Truth?'/(Solution?)
i got more Lines for 'Call Outs', than 'Phones-In-Booths'/
so stop actin like ya rappin does some harm-to-me/
...i got more Heat than Fires in an "Armory"/
like Mexicans that got Xzibit yo i 'Scar-Mcs'/(watch pimp my ride, X got cut up, lol)
im bout to 'Elektra-Cute' ya, like 'Carmen-Be'/
so dont step-to-me or i'll unleash the weaponry/
this 'Bitch Lacks Creativity' like 'Hysterectomys'/

ok uppin fo your verse theres mine..

Here i go

Call me Sherlock Holmes cuz Im teachin simple elementary
you'll never beat me/not now/not never/or tha next century
It's science/u a low level/Im a king claming higher defiance
youre' right u r a house wife and this is domestic violence
If spat my best shit at you it just would'nt be fair
I don't do harm you? bitch I'll leave u in intensive care
yo mama like my rhymes and da way that I spit it
After i fucked her /every dude on da block was sayin
I got more flow than you kid /add it up/and stack it/
if this was a tourny u would'nt be qualified 4 tha loser's braket
Truth be told killin this kid is becomin boring and unfun
U got firepower?/whatchu packin? a slingshot and a watergun
I don't know why this stupid homophite even got involved
But I'll end on this/ I merked him / and problem sloved

aight fellas vote on this battle......peace................................. ......

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breakdown for truth:

flow:nice work a little off at the end of some punches but overall 6/10

volcab:average nothing to say 6/10

punches:some real good personals my fav,"cuz you know 'I-Land' more "Punches" than ya 'Home-State'/" good job 7/10

overall:19/30

breakdown for da solution:

flow:alright a few multis to help it along in the start 6/10

volcab:nice job through most of it kinda leveled out by the end though 6/10

punches:nothing really great here 5/10

overall:17/30

vote--truth gets my vote

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

aight tanx for the vote ok vote fellas....peace.................

aight... truth, I really liked your worldplay. stuff like the carmen electra line, that's tight. problem is, the punches were kinda lacking in your verse, thought that personal was real good. getting a good punch in there is more important than wordplay, this is a battle.

da solution.. first of all, cut the smilies out. now you had some good punches, like the watergun/slingshot thing, but your wordplay, vocab were all ementary and your punches weren't all that creative. so you gotta work on that.

tight battle, but i give it to da solution because punches kinda make it in a battle this tight.

vote back on my battle against franchiZe in my sig.

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word play is important in a battle man it ups ypur level alot to win a battle its not just
about punches...lol anyways vote on this battle fellas peace...

He forgot to vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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