10-20 lines
house rules
bla bla bla
it is set

checking in-.................................................

check the mic, phat mic

i'll be back in 1 hour to rip this bitch

Yo I hop over railroads like your tracks-been-skipped
You like a prisoner’s asshole cause you’ve just-been-ripped
Watch me spit, I’m the Jesus of this game, the best-styles-divine
I’m iller than mad cow, SARS, and west-Nile-combined
You rhyme for the image, after this battle, you’ll have ended-a-fad
I’m a master like Phil Mickelson, just with pen-and-a-pad
This fag is poor with verses, he is outta-ma-class
Your verse is straight shit which means they were pulled outta-ya-ass
Your rap is played out like an ol’ school joint when Jam Master Jay-raps
You could call me a queer or faggot, but you the one that’s getting gay-bashed…

I dont care if you rap cuz i'll still spit in ur grill
Phat mic don't give a fuck. neva have, neva will
You think u a lunatic, and u think ur ill or sick
the truth is ur rhymes arn't hard, they hit like plastic
i'll choke u till u die, untill your last breath
or just squeeze the shell untill theres no slugs left
leave you bloody and brused from raps of denile
I do things right and my moto is service with a smile
and canadians cant spit and dont make mony like jiggas
if you spit for money your figures would rival a wiggas

ok uppin and nice verse

some gud shit goin down there
mike had some ok shit goin on the first 2 lines were his best.
a good opening, an average finish and the in-between was aight.

phat mic, i've heard ure shit b4 and it still is fresh
u ripped mike 2 shreds with ure lyrics
good flow, good punches overall good performance
not ure best but gud enough to beat this guy.

Hit me back and vote on my battles then maybe u and i can hook up 4 a battle
franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 0-1 Shadows edge
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119290
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 0-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

uppin for some votes in this bitch

Punches:Phat Mic... you were lacking. I give you a 10/35 for trying man, but all you had was that "plastic line" the rest was just flat as fuck. Mike I give you a 25.. you gotta work on yours for sure, get some set up lines so you can hit harder, you had only a couple nice punches (trap been skipped, pull out of ass and an ok last line). A good punch with a lead in set up is better than 2 mediocre punches.

Creativity: All Mike again, your verse was nice and creative and Phat your verse was just kinda..meh. Pretty basic rhymes, nothing original on your disses... disappointing.

At this point.. its over... when you crush in both punches and creatity do like Mike did, battles over. Mike, you gotta work on setup like I said, otherwise pretty tight.

Return the favor on Shadow vs East Miles.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

Mike had the wordplay and punches. Phat did have that bad of a verse, it was actaully pretty close to me. But Mikes punches hit a little harder and put Phat down.

V/ Mike.

Hit up the battle in my siggy.

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do your research.

easly win 4 mike he came strong in my opinion he started off right from da gate

bestline-Yo I hop over railroads like your tracks-been-skipped
You like a prisoner’s asshole cause you’ve just-been-ripped

^^ nice start

worsteline-didnt have 1 at all

bestline-didnt have 1 i didnt like the fact about talkin bout gunz and shit when its a battle u suppose 2 emabarass who u facing not talkin bout killing him

worste line-
i'll choke u till u die, untill your last breath
or just squeeze the shell untill theres no slugs left
^^ like i said

punches-mike
structure-mic
vocab-mic
flow-mike
open-mike
close-mike
winner mike

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FLOW: Mike the reason is just plain to see although your structure you alil weak
VOCAB: Mike
PUNCH: MIKE
Yo I hop over railroads like your tracks-been-skipped
You like a prisoner’s asshole cause you’ve just-been-ripped
Good line
Overall: it was pretty much one sided mike stole you ez

VOTE MIKE

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119690

For real...mike definately ripped it,mike had him in every category in my opinion...

Vote-Mike

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im gone for 3 centurys 2 decades and five years...
then the name De' appears and queers start sheddin tears...
catchin peers,man's sweatin of shear fear...
when i interfere,im closer than i may appear like rearview mirrors...

yo both came off aight
mike 12 had the advantage here with the better punches, wordplay and word choice in my view. his lines were more precise, and creative
"Yo I hop over railroads like your tracks-been-skipped
You like a prisoner’s asshole cause you’ve just-been-ripped"

phat mic was koo but just needs to elevate the diction a lil bit, and some harder punches and personals wpoldnt hurt

hit my battles yall
i just call it how i c it
peace

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