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04-19-04, 09:35 AM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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franchize vs. lost child
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 bar min. 16 bar max.
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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04-19-04, 10:19 AM | #2 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3240 794D
Holla at yo boy Checkin in
no disrespect but i guarantee my firstwin against the franchise see yah on wensday |
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04-19-04, 11:24 AM | #3 | ||||
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IP: EA84 036D
yo yo this is franchiZe checkin and the only guarantee is that this fool is gonna get slaughtered
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04-19-04, 11:51 AM | #4 | ||||
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IP: EA84 036D
check it i've checked in and i dont know if i'll be on 2moro or the day after so i'm gonna spit rite now. this fool cant feed off my verse but even if he cud he wud still lose
Check it as I get ready to spit my fly shit....................................... I step into this battle throwin beats like I’m Run DMC// Beatin u to a pulp like I’m Tito Ortiz from tha UFC// Ure the LostChild and u must have forgot ure way// U betta get this straight this aint no child’s play// This will be ure only spit so u betta make it class// Cuz u’ll be leavin with no votes and my size 12 up ure ass// I’m Ali, like a butterfly I float, like a bee I sting// I’ll hit u with 100,000 volts makin u look like Don King// U can’t rip, its like u got a bad case of lockjaw// I’ll make this battle one sided like a fat guy on a seesaw// Me, I’m the Jack Nicklaus of rap, spittin hole in ones on the range// Ure a ho on the streets, here’s a dollar………where’s my change?// This battles about 2 end cuz I’m the freestylin dominatrix// You’s a hop-a-long midget, I’m Neo from the Matrix.// Thats my shit, cant wait to see childs!! |
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04-19-04, 03:57 PM | #5 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
I cant even wait he disrespected me I got to beat him now
I don't even feel right having to murder this guy He wanted to win but came up short like Dee-Bo's eye Claiming he gone put his foot up my ass He the type go to jail and get rapped like a fag Betta step yo game up ball to you fall I'm a drop you quicker than Halle Berrys draws in that movie Monsters Balls Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee He scared thats why his bitch ass shaking like Ali Wanna be G trying to spit at me I'll leave you laying on the ground like you was touch by preach I know you reading the flow and don't even feel safe Yo best bet is to runaway and leave the game like Mase Beating niggas like you is my only bad habbit I guaranteed my self a victory, AND LOOK I JUST GOT IT |
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04-20-04, 05:25 AM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 4724 F45F
check half way through of childs spit, he fed off my verse and ripped one of my lines
This is the original line I spat: I’m Ali, like a butterfly I float, like a bee I sting// And this is where Child ripped my line: "Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee He scared thats why his bitch ass shaking like Ali" |
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04-20-04, 08:05 AM | #7 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 6CFE 1779
Both guys came with it this time but I think Franchize came a little harder. LostChild started off strong and had me chuckle wit his opener but then he fell off. If he would have stayed on track he might have got this one. Franchize came wit good punches in just about every verse.
Vote- Franchize
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04-20-04, 09:46 AM | #8 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
that's not really feeding off your verse it's one line and your winning anyway so i'm not gonna close this but i will vote:
breakdown for franchize: flow:good job nothing too complex but no off spots 7/10 volcabretty basic it seems like you didn't really seem to try on this one 5/10 punches:nice job here you threw punches almost everyline my fav,"I’ll hit u with 100,000 volts makin u look like Don King//" ha ha ha anyway good job 8/10 overall:20/30 breakdown for lost child: flow:good flow not quite as good as franchize though 6/10 volcab:alright job still pretty basic though 6/10 punches:a couple of good ones your problem was you didn't throw enough of them my fav line,"He wanted to win but came up short like Dee-Bo's eye" 7/10 overall:19/30 vote--franchize gets the win better punches
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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04-20-04, 10:18 AM | #9 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: BF56 CF93
vote franchise he came more creative and his ounches hit harder
both need to work on personals and vocab and yo that kid tottally fed read it un til u get it child is basically sayin u can float like a butterfly u can sting like a bee i allready got u scared thats y u shakin like ali
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04-20-04, 06:27 PM | #10 | ||||||
THE COUNCIL
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IP: 6D9E 466F
Franchise takes this one hands down, betta metta's punches opener, and personals. And yes that is feeding off your lines, which is kinda funny cause it was stated right at the top NO FEEDING he musta been hungry, anyways...
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04-21-04, 10:26 AM | #11 | |||||||
New to RB
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IP: CCBA F63E
FRANCHIZE takes this for me... better punches, I loved, and I say love with love... I loved this punch
Me, I’m the Jack Nicklaus of rap, spittin hole in ones on the range// Ure a ho on the streets, here’s a dollar………where’s my change?// Overall Franchize had better flow, better rhymes and better punches... Lost child - good good dude, but you didnt have as much strong punches as Franchize and nothing of urs stood out as anything to me... So, franchize takes it for better punches and flow, both y'all had ok vocab, but not great... PLS return the favour at vote when and if CakeKiller gets his ass together in my battle
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Total Wins - 1 Total loses - 0 Albi (5) - missfiyagrl (4) Current battles needing votes - Hydrophonic Buzz Vs Albi |
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04-21-04, 10:57 AM | #12 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4289 77F4
Franchise you got it But it ain't over yet
I felt like I had you but people say I didn't But whats real cuz when I'm gone see that rematch thats right I'm calling the franchise out |
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04-21-04, 03:26 PM | #13 | ||||
Still Sick
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IP: 5130 1CF2
This was one of the weakest fuckin battles I ever seen
but I say Franchise got this he came LESS weak with less weak punches and all that other bullshit Lost's shit was too..elementery too oridanry |
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04-22-04, 03:21 AM | #14 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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IP: 95FF 1D86
good battle...some original shit...i enjoyed it alot....
okay this is my break down I step into this battle throwin beats like I’m Run DMC// Beatin u to a pulp like I’m Tito Ortiz from tha UFC// 9 nice opener...the only thing is lot's of people don't watch wrestlin...including me...soit took a second for me to get it Ure the LostChild and u must have forgot ure way// U betta get this straight this aint no child’s play// 7 decent...not original but fine This will be ure only spit so u betta make it class// Cuz u’ll be leavin with no votes and my size 12 up ure ass// 7 decent...but not really a punch or personal I’m Ali, like a butterfly I float, like a bee I sting// I’ll hit u with 100,000 volts makin u look like Don King// 10 tight...good liine....hahahhahahahaha U can’t rip, its like u got a bad case of lockjaw// I’ll make this battle one sided like a fat guy on a seesaw// 8.5 funny, not really original...but well written Me, I’m the Jack Nicklaus of rap, spittin hole in ones on the range// Ure a ho on the streets, here’s a dollar………where’s my change?// 8.5 ahhah...funny shit dog This battles about 2 end cuz I’m the freestylin dominatrix// You’s a hop-a-long midget, I’m Neo from the Matrix.// 4 boo,, bad finisher...so played...but good shit and now for lost childs I don't even feel right having to murder this guy He wanted to win but came up short like Dee-Bo's eye 8.5 tight nice opener... Claiming he gone put his foot up my ass He the type go to jail and get rapped like a fag 5 you can't spit shit against his.... Betta step yo game up ball to you fall I'm a drop you quicker than Halle Berrys draws in that movie Monsters Balls 8 great line...just bad structure...tight though Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee He scared thats why his bitch ass shaking like Ali 5 again you can't spit shit against his...it's in the rules Wanna be G trying to spit at me I'll leave you laying on the ground like you was touch by preach 7 good...but not great I know you reading the flow and don't even feel safe Yo best bet is to runaway and leave the game like Mase 9 haha that's good... Beating niggas like you is my only bad habbit I guaranteed my self a victory, AND LOOK I JUST GOT IT 7 decent...common though step up and now for the totals franchize....(54/70) tight battle...your better then your record... lost child....(50/70) some good shit...but also some bad shit... good battle v- franchize
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04-22-04, 10:15 AM | #15 | |||||||
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 522F F919
.:: Aight Check It ::. Lost Child: 3/10 Your Verse Was Weak. Punches Weren't Hitting Hard and Your Flow Was Horrible Threw-Out The Whole Spit. Just Elevate and Continue To Drop. Franchize: 5/10 Your Punches Were Ok, Played But They Still Were Hitting Harder Then Lost's. Nice FLow but Structure Was Off. Just Elevate and Stay Dope. .:: There Wasn't Really Any Mulits or Metaphors In Dis Shit ::. Vote - Franchize ~R~ |
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