good luck patna

10 lines
you spit first
no d/r cv or biting
no feedin
check in
good luck

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KiLlAh BwOy

yo can u hit this battle up.....i'll return the favor when yall both droped ur lines....

quickpunch vs L.I.

also congrats killahbwoy for bein the 1st to beat me.....

Here's my shit

I b da boy, beatboxing...jugglin bowling

balls, levitating//
Here, hold shit like a toilet, don't

need to flush, your mind's vacant//
I read your score backwards....just for

the fun of it//
and I read your style backwards...like

I'm f*ckin dylexic//
U say u was rolling, cap backwards,

hitting a honey from the back//
I see u moaning, cap fowards, with a

dildo in your crack//
U say u Killah bwoy, da B Boy, who b

killing mcs tonite//
I see Michael da bwoy Killa quenching

thirst impaling a sprite//
Picture yourself, winning, but while your head's spinning I'll tell u you're frontin//
smashing mirrors with precision I'll teach ya "Image is nothing".

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Killa bwoy...Come out and stop hiding. You called me out and now u running.
Come and show what u got.

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oh shit lmfao i didnt see that u dropped

aiight here lets go:

Fuck this kid you get merked easily......../
I'll enjoy merkin' you but your rhymes aint pleasin me......./
Kids playin' with fire, So sick im the reason why Jay-z retired...../
In this game you aint goin no where like a car with flat tires...../
Like shaq vs Jason Kidd Im snatchin' these "boards"....../
You aint underground I jus smashed you through the bottom floor...../
Kid you a beginner in this game im a vet............/
After this battle you gon' regret we ever met...../
Ya rhymes couldnt be clean if i spilled laundry detergent on them...../
You winnin' the wackest rapper award im winnin' grammy's like Em.....


and its ova

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KiLlAh BwOy

ok this was an aight battle

killa takes it cuz his punches were harder and he had better connection. ure flow and structure was on and u had som gud punchlines and u used some gud vocabs.
strini ure flow was aight but i had to read ure spit three times b4 i actually understood the structure to it. ure punches were ok but they didnt really connect and really killa took it easily. i wud try a different approach next time cuz that structure u got goin is really to difficult to get into. use multis and personals more to and with sum originality u cud go far.

Vote - Killah

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No.. this was not an aight battle. Strini.. I realize you like poetry and what not, but come on.. that's not a battle verse. A battle verse involves punches against the guy you are facing, and very little else. You didn't bring it at all. Killa, you brought it with generic disses, boring rhymes, and no great punches. But at least you had punches, so you get my vote.

Hit back my battle with J_Rip (link in sing)

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

aight this was kind of a weak battle...strini damn u need to work on elevatin'hiting harder punches work on ur flow cuz that was weak ass shit u should of at least tried well any way no on to killa...killa it seems like after u read his verse u didnt even try but anyways u still could a came harder and elevated so my vote goes to strini lmao just kidding goes to Killa this battles probably gon to be a k.o u should just add em to ur merk list already

ok this was a no brainer strini didnt have anything that imporessed me or caught my attention it wasnt a good verse at all killah definately merked this kid good wordplay punches/personals flow was good and definately structure compared to strini overall this was a good battle.......for killah...strini u need to elevate if your gonna keep battlin people who can kill u with one punch..

vote:killah

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