10 -14 lines

no crew votes
no hate or dr
and dont be pmn folks to vote for your weak ass

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some people that are mods on here

YO HOOK DA NIGGA WITH SOME VOTES I'LL RETURN A FAV JUST MAIL NAH MEAN


http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120276

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

Only dickriders vote for you in battle givin' meaning to the fake Idolatry/
call your shit "wonderful" when it's more like public bathroom poetry/
givin you lyrikal destruction just call my verses armageddon/
have you thinkin its winter the way your family tree shedin/
dont come at me relentlessly in actuallity you just a bitch defenseless/
i'll rip out your nose eyes ears and mouth and really beat you senseless/
you was quick to battle me, the thought of gettin beat must thrill you/
you nothin but a gimmick, rockin a d12 but yet you still rep fubu/(05)
couldnt even kill gz(gkillaz) if you did a drive by on crenshaw son/
sweating bullets is the closest you ever gotten to holding a gun/
now you wanna run knowin the desert eagle showin any minute/
and put a hole in ya head so big that fat joe can jump in it/(big ass hole)
im the savior of rap so under your loss colum just put Jesus/
okay you got talent ........You should...... your a rappin FETUS/

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^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote


some people that are mods on here

suppost to say chain behind d12

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A Queer That Voted On my Battles Constently


^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote


some people that are mods on here

iight man, I told ya it would take awhile before I am on next.. well here I am, I gun spit soon

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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two...
The

TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

I am on the first line, yet this battle is already comming to its end...
You could intertwine, wit 2pac and rap you still couldnt comprehend...
Thats why your done, Im beatin you wit shit that I'd use on a noob...
This has only begun, but by the end you gun be eating threw a tube...
Im about to change, changing up my style to put you in the graveyard...
You should exchange, exchange your style cuz you sound like a retard...
So get yourself ready, cuz the end is near killin you wit my little friend...
Hold onto your teddy, Im about to stear you off the bend this is the END...
Everyone know Ima win, put your money on your flow so I can take it...
Losing cuz you use a violin, for yor beats dawg your never gun make it...
Overall your just a fake, So this win will be easy one like the first grade...
ONE BIG ASS MISTAKE, Is what your labeled couldnt be saved if your prayed...
Cocky bitches die first, thats why Im killin ya and ya want my help you mooch...
How do I lose to the worst, about to finish him, This is the 'END OF E LOOCH'

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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two...
The

TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

I am on the first line, yet this battle is already comming to its end...
You could intertwine, wit 2pac and rap you still couldnt comprehend...
Thats why your done, Im beatin you wit shit that I'd use on a noob...
This has only begun, but by the end you gun be eating threw a tube...
Im about to change, changing up my style to put you in the graveyard...
You should exchange, exchange your style cuz you sound like a retard...
So get yourself ready, cuz the end is near killin you wit my little friend...
Hold onto your teddy, Im about to stear you off the bend this is the END...
Everyone know Ima win, put your money on your flow so I can take it...
Losing cuz you use a violin, for yor beats dawg your never gun make it...
Overall your just a fake, So this win will be easy one like the first grade...
ONE BIG ASS MISTAKE, Is what your labeled couldnt be saved if you prayed
Cocky bitches die first, thats why Im killin ya and ya want my help you mooch
How do I lose to the worst, about to finish him, This is the 'END OF E LOOCH'

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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two...
The

TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

read either or, forgot to bold the END and E LOOCH at the end of the second one.. but the lines line up better in the second one.. so lets get some votes goin

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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two...
The

TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

Only dickriders vote for you in battle givin' meaning to the fake Idolatry/
call your shit "wonderful" when it's more like public bathroom poetry/
Funny punch...
givin you lyrikal destruction just call my verses armageddon/
have you thinkin its winter the way your family tree shedin/
decent...
dont come at me relentlessly in actuallity you just a bitch defenseless/
i'll rip out your nose eyes ears and mouth and really beat you senseless/
multi in 1st line...ok punch
you was quick to battle me, the thought of gettin beat must thrill you/
you nothin but a gimmick, rockin a d12 but yet you still rep fubu/(05)
nice flow in this punch...
couldnt even kill gz(gkillaz) if you did a drive by on crenshaw son/
sweating bullets is the closest you ever gotten to holding a gun/
okay punch...could use work...
now you wanna run knowin the desert eagle showin any minute/
and put a hole in ya head so big that fat joe can jump in it/(big ass hole)
hahahaha...
im the savior of rap so under your loss colum just put Jesus/
okay you got talent ........You should...... your a rappin FETUS/
coulda been betta wit that set up line...

I am on the first line, yet this battle is already comming to its end...
You could intertwine, wit 2pac and rap you still couldnt comprehend...
decent...
Thats why your done, Im beatin you wit shit that I'd use on a noob...
This has only begun, but by the end you gun be eating threw a tube...
waiting for real punches...
Im about to change, changing up my style to put you in the graveyard...
You should exchange, exchange your style cuz you sound like a retard...
still waiting...
So get yourself ready, cuz the end is near killin you wit my little friend...
Hold onto your teddy, Im about to stear you off the bend this is the END...
tic toc...
Everyone know Ima win, put your money on your flow so I can take it...
Losing cuz you use a violin, for yor beats dawg your never gun make it...
gettin better...
Overall your just a fake, So this win will be easy one like the first grade...
ONE BIG ASS MISTAKE, Is what your labeled couldnt be saved if your prayed...
not all that great...
Cocky bitches die first, thats why Im killin ya and ya want my help you mooch...
How do I lose to the worst, about to finish him, This is the 'END OF E LOOCH'
ok closer...

Okay e looch....u came pretty hard....u had maybe 2 bars wit a multi in it....so werk on those....personals need to be worked on....punch category is pretty straight for you....just keep elevatin wit u punches cause theres always room to get betta....flow was pretty hot...

GKillaz...this was the worst battle i have seen you done...but u tried a new style so i understand why u didnt do to great....battles r the only way to elevate tryin new things....so stick wit it....u had sum multis but they didnt matter without hard hittin punches....so jus keep elevatin cuz this was the worst perfomance ive seen by you...

Vote - E Looch

Keep elevatin guys...

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Im liking both rhymes...
I gatta give it to GKIllaz cause he has a ton of multis.. and i liked how he spelt out E Looch... that was dope

Ne ways I liked E's rhyme.. It was pretty close


But i gatta give it to GKillaz for the style.

^^ NO. STOP VOTING. Battles are won by punches, the rest is fucking window dressing. Who cares if he got a fuckign style? GKillaz, your verse lacked punches... they just weren't there. The forced internal rhyme scheme made it clunky as hell, and fucked up your flow with the constant commas.

E Looch, I think you had a couple nice punches (family tree shedding.. I really like the wordplay there). You did waste a nice setup line at the end with the fetus thing which was weak, but overall you had a pretty decent verse, with nice punches and good rhymes.

v/ E Looch.

Return the favor on my battle with Killah Bwoy.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

tried usin that same shit killah bwoy did white powder you need to get offf that white powder


Uppin for votes

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some people that are mods on here

E- Had nice punches betta wordplay some played lines but overall it was nice verse.

G- U tried to drop yo punches but some didnt land i dont like the way u bold it is herbish, 2 many damn comma's overall aight verse.

V/E

cuz punches were betta.

return the fav

me vs iNsidious

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http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...73&page=1&pp=15
vote here and il return the favour