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COUNTREE JAY 3 37.50%
JackOFAllTRaDeS 5 62.50%
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Old 04-28-04, 03:15 PM   #1
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JaCKOfAllTRaDeS VS CountreeJay

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House rules !!!!!!!
due whenever aint trippin
or sometime soon
 
Old 04-28-04, 03:18 PM   #2
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Aight, just let me say no feedin'.
And would niggaz on this site not dick ride, whoevaz shit is betta, say that shit, regardless of your crew affiliations or feelinz towardz the fuckin' mc.

And enuff wit the fuckin' two fuckin' sentence explainations 4 your votes too.

Jack, I'm checkin' in, Good luck to you man.
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Old 04-28-04, 03:33 PM   #3
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My first battle in Elevated

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My first battle in Elevated. Let's give these niggaz a show Jack.

(Well, Ima try at least, no guarantees)

It's like this, peep his profile, it claims that he the iiish,/
Well U in Jay'z lyrical doghouse, and that means you the bitch./
Finally took the step up dogg, so 4 yo sake, I hope you elevated,/
You rose fast, U can fall just as quick, another nigga I faded./
Another wanna-b g, come back at me, talkin about what your gun do,/
Puttin' through a lyrical tannin' bed, findin' different ways to Son you./
So you Jack Off All Trades, Ain't particular, damn youz a dirty man,/
I be clownin' you, winnin' and grinnin', U think I'm usin' a dirty hand./
Nah man, no cheatin' just skill, No woman, you beatin' for just thrill,/
No one 'gon remember U, U can scream your name till your voice gets shrill./
The name U use might leave niggaz confused, Falsely implyin' you got skills,/
Heard a Jack of All Trades is a Master of none, That's why rap won't pay Ur bills.


Just a lil' sometin'. Tried my best, If people don't like it, tell me how to make my shit hotter at least. Do you Jack, good luck fam.
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Old 04-28-04, 03:39 PM   #4
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Oh, and when I say Talkin' about what your gun do, I don't mean what you 'gon do, as in what are you goin' to do, I mean it as in sayin' you gonna shoot me, as in bang mufukin' bang. Just so y'all know.
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Old 04-28-04, 05:50 PM   #5
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Yo man, I give you more credit than that, so I ain't gonna bytch, but I just hope you ain't pre-writin' that shit man, you said you was gonna drop in a lil' bit, what happened?
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Old 04-29-04, 02:57 AM   #6
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checkin in.......
i had to do testing at skool i couldnt get on the computer
my teacher was bitching
but whatever let me flow this shit
 
Old 04-29-04, 03:29 AM   #7
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NO FEEDING, you fed off all my shit and ate it as a meal, This CAPS twisted and sealed
You showed me nothing new "ELEVATED" but ur rap wasnt revealed
I Kid NOT, This kid cant STOP, embarassing himself he aint the real HIP-HOP
I'll depict ur lyrics stem by stem, making your peeps Da Branch you from the click
My RAP Ryhmes and it sticks the type of physical bond like when ur hand touches dicks
I'll splatter your brain matter, Lyrically stomp you so your whole face shatters.
My undestructible style, got you smerking a smile,
making you add another loss to your Rap Battles File.
Moving your mind frame with my Lyrical telekenesis, Destroying your Rap Thesis,
and putting more pushed pressure than your Nose when it sneezes.
My mind just coached my lyrics to perfection, placing you where you directioned,
in the rap battles losing section, have any other lasts requests None too Mention!!!!
 
Old 04-29-04, 03:37 AM   #8
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uppin this shit for some responses and votes iiight den yah know the drill
 
Old 04-29-04, 08:05 AM   #9
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Here we go....

CJ came with a good flow and punches were OK.......... could have used more wordplay. That is what his whole verse lacked.......wordplay and metaphors. He did come with punches though.......JOAT had a very uneven flow..... stretched lines in some places and short lines in others......made it hard to read it in any kind of rythem. He didn't really have any punches either.....personals were near invisible and wordplay wasn't evident. I have heard a lot about him bein good but it didn't show in this battle...........my fav line was....

Another wanna-b g, come back at me, talkin about what your gun do,/
Puttin' through a lyrical tannin' bed, findin' different ways to Son you./

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Old 04-29-04, 03:02 PM   #10
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upppin this shit for some votes iiight yah know the drill
 
Old 04-29-04, 03:11 PM   #11
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look im gonna have to give this to JAK

JAK: you came hard just alil hard to read...need to work on your structure....but everything else was good,....need to work on your personals and meta4s..veryone likes a good personal....so if you do that then you will become real good...also work on you punches...all in all 8/10

TREE: you was coo ez to read but to simple next time come alil harder ive seen beta from you..so just come harder..make it a lil mo komplex and betta vocab....you got everything else down tho...all in all7/10

thanks for battlin in elevated...

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Old 04-29-04, 05:55 PM   #12
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upppin this battle for some votes iight den peaces
 
Old 04-30-04, 07:56 AM   #13
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Old 04-30-04, 01:12 PM   #14
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Old 04-30-04, 01:47 PM   #15
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It's like this, peep his profile, it claims that he the iiish,/
Well U in Jay'z lyrical doghouse, and that means you the bitch./
you definetely could have done better with that set up, but ok.
Finally took the step up dogg, so 4 yo sake, I hope you elevated,/
You rose fast, U can fall just as quick, another nigga I faded./
ok, not great again, punch doesnt live up to set up
Another wanna-b g, come back at me, talkin about what your gun do,/
Puttin' through a lyrical tannin' bed, findin' different ways to Son you./
awesome, best bar of the battle.
So you Jack Off All Trades, Ain't particular, damn youz a dirty man,/
I be clownin' you, winnin' and grinnin', U think I'm usin' a dirty hand./
first line better... good concept but you could have done more with it i think
Nah man, no cheatin' just skill, No woman, you beatin' for just thrill,/
No one 'gon remember U, U can scream your name till your voice gets shrill./
ok, ok
The name U use might leave niggaz confused, Falsely implyin' you got skills,/
Heard a Jack of All Trades is a Master of none, That's why rap won't pay Ur bills.
this is nice play on words.


NO FEEDING, you fed off all my shit and ate it as a meal, This CAPS twisted and sealed
You showed me nothing new "ELEVATED" but ur rap wasnt revealed
kinda stretched... not that great either
I Kid NOT, This kid cant STOP, embarassing himself he aint the real HIP-HOP
1 line bar? not great... just a useless multi
I'll depict ur lyrics stem by stem, making your peeps Da Branch you from the click
My RAP Ryhmes and it sticks the type of physical bond like when ur hand touches
dicks
yeah... too stretched and again kind of a weak punch. dont let multis get in the way of developing a punch
I'll splatter your brain matter, Lyrically stomp you so your whole face shatters.
again.. 1-line bar? better multi i guess...
My undestructible style, got you smerking a smile,
making you add another loss to your Rap Battles File.
could have done way better than that with the concept... gotta flip it cuz its played
Moving your mind frame with my Lyrical telekenesis, Destroying your Rap Thesis,
and putting more pushed pressure than your Nose when it sneezes.
ok.. kinda sounds like "Infinity" there... and the nose line is bleh
My mind just coached my lyrics to perfection, placing you where you directioned,
in the rap battles losing section, have any other lasts requests None too Mention!!!!
nice rhyme, could have used it for an actual punch though.

JoaT.. I was disappointed like enygma... heard you were good but you just didn't bring it. I'm not feeling that multi shit at all... you gotta bring actual punches if you want to win.

v/ CJ for that tanning bed line alone.
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