hey house rules
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yo,im spittin this now,holla back quick time yeah

ya chest exploded cos my mic was loaded wit murderous words/
You no i'm tha illest MC from across the world/
I aint even heard ya rhymes but i already no i hate em/
I dont even think biggie died u fat fuck, i think u ate him/
leavin ya bleedin, needin assistance/
I listen but keep my distance for instance/
Ur a fucking diseased rat, u got fucking herpes/
U spit ya shit but bitch ya cant hurt me/
listen to my flows, u think "it's sick this"/
dont mess with or diss, i'm the human version of cyphilis/
u dont even no the words u listen to/
ya fat fuck too dumb to realise i'm dissin you/
wud ya mother b missin u wen she realises i got the skills/
I'ma go back in time and feed that bitch birth control pills/
i gave u a sample of how i be doin it/
now this bitch wil try to copy my style, but he'll just ruin it/
listen bitch wen u hear my name/
attack wit lyrical flame, like glass i'll shatter ya game

Dis guy is gonna beat me? C’mon let’s be-rational
When he jack off together is the only time you’re ‘sensation’al//
THugzy brags about being able to spit off-the-dome
Making orders at McD’s is only itme you speak into a microphone//
Your rhymes are ‘out of this world’ cuz I punched you off-the-earth
It’s pretty sad when you’re so ugly that your mom scoffs-yo-birth//
This fag’s been asking me for rap and battle tips almost every night* (true)
The 22 year old loser needs to get some friends outside the site!//
You think you’re on some dope shit? You need to lay-off
You don’t ‘run the streets’, even your name says I broke yo heart//
I must be eating Nestle bars, cuz it’s your Crunch-time
It’s sad to see him having lines longer than school lunch-lines//
And using fake personal on me? That’s pretty sly,-dude
I hate dealing with fractions, so let’s not discuss your IQ//
He not smart if all the English classes can school dis herb
He thinks he’s dope? He needs to know there never was a cool-nerd//
Mayne, the only ‘rap gift’ you have is the one from Christmas (get it?)
And the way your ego ‘fits’ your skill level just proves you’re a ‘mis-fit’//
Thugzy already dead, so I’m gonna have to roast-his-hearse
Only reason why you think you’re ‘on top’ is cuz you posted-first//

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tight rymes gal,but believe thugzy dont be needin to ask 4 no tips,and whos 22 years old.

nice battle though,get votin people!

aight lets get some votes

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dude its just a rhymes

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lol,i know i know.jus jestin ya.tight rhymes aswell

Nice battle, defientely... Lil Nae 2.. you brought the heat.. crazy sick punches:

"
I hate dealing with fractions, so let’s not discuss your IQ//
He not smart if all the English classes can school dis herb
He thinks he’s dope? He needs to know there never was a cool-nerd//
Mayne, the only ‘rap gift’ you have is the one from Christmas (get it?)
And the way your ego ‘fits’ your skill level just proves you’re a ‘mis-fit’//
Thugzy already dead, so I’m gonna have to roast-his-hearse
Only reason why you think you’re ‘on top’ is cuz you posted-first//"

I posted that whole thing... cuz damn those were hot bars.. all great punches.. some multis but not great and the rhyme is a bit weak at spots. Work on that, but what really matters is the creative punches, and Lil Nae was all over that shit, also had some nice personals early on. THUG, this wasn't a bad battle for you, she just came way too hard. You gotta use more personals, work on your structure man.

v/ Lil Nae

Hit up my battles...

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thx fo da vote can we get some more

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Uppin fo some votes

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upin fo votes

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uppin up on votes

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yo,come on we need more votes on this battle,come on gs

yo hit up my battle wit quick.. and then I will return the fav, I'd vote first but no one ever returns the fav.. so hit this up: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120303 once your done I will come back here and vote.. thx

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