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05-03-04, 10:42 AM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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L.I. vs. shadow's edge
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up monday check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 bar min. 16 bar max.
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-03-04, 11:42 AM | #2 | |||||
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
ugh... we just battled last week... and blah... is it too late to get this changed.. i want someone new
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05-03-04, 03:38 PM | #3 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: D5EA 4189
^^^fasho...we just battled 3 days ago........
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05-03-04, 03:55 PM | #4 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
like i knew that rematch then really who won last time?
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-03-04, 04:10 PM | #5 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: D5EA 4189
its still open........
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05-03-04, 04:24 PM | #6 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
feed off that match for beef then whatever either way i've already had to change one match i'm not changing another
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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05-03-04, 08:16 PM | #7 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
Aight... I'll have mine up by tomorrow, sick of getting nothing but herb votes
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05-04-04, 03:04 PM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
I’m just fucking around with this one folks… check it:
Yo I got a predilection for superior diction, your skills – just fiction And here’s some funny shit about that dirtboy’s prediction: Quote:
He made that after I told him "I'ma no show"... I don't even gotta drop You should be used to being underdog though... you girl like it on top Must I re-iterate? This whack kid is just fourteen Audio L’s iterate because his voice sound like a queen 0-1, peeped your battle son, no wonder you dropped out Hey maybe you can try again… …when you get pubes to sprout Flip scripts? Best flip the pencil and erase your text My train of thought alone leave your tracks in wrecks Man.. y’all know I really hate to be the one to tattle But if you wanna see how his line gonna end… … just peep my last battle Take all five days g, you might as well earn this defeat I leave you so lazy… that even your heart is dead-beat Together we nasty… cuz I’m sick and just left you twisted And my punches hit so fucking hard your mom just got fisted Read this verse and you star struck…cuz you just got sonned Face the facts son, there’s no need for me to run You couldn’t drop an ill verse if you had all of MM enlisted And your audio must be ahead of its time… ... cuz your fans still haven't existed Aight, take your five days to try to match this shizzo
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Last edited by Shadows edge : 05-04-04 at 05:33 PM. |
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05-04-04, 07:01 PM | #9 | |||||
Miss Me?
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My Verse
IP: D5EA 4189
I just love how this guy thinks he can beat me...alright man....heres sumtin to shut you up.....
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^^All feedback was the same on our last battle, only negativity was directed at your verse... Cockiness got him sayin crazy shit, take all ya winnin predictions and see them reversed... Loss by loss added up when against skill, seems like your losses are in sync as the rockettes.... Sarcasm shows the fear because of a rough road schedule, and u dont perform well wit vets... Than you rep ya crew, only four members, it aint even large... No wonder your crew fucking sucks, they have you in charge!... The way your record’s goin, theres no chance of bein an expertise… And it doesn’t help that you loss category is more populated than the Japanese… And how you gonna edit your verse post and than act like no one will notice... Its straight, you can edit after i dropped, still get the loss afta feedin off this... Stead of visitin tutorials afta ery battle, receivin losses by the bunch... Grow fists, maybe you'll have a chance at landin a real fuckin punch... For real this bitch knows deep down he loves me, dog im like an idol to you... I make peoples 'heads' turn when my 'shoulders' brushed off so he copped the shampoo... Shoulda at least tried against enygma cause you had no chance in this one... 14 vs 18, punches, flow, personals, and metas...merked you and i aint even begun... Explanation for closer....14 vs 18 = ages....jus so yall understand that lol....
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05-04-04, 08:12 PM | #10 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 552E B87B
tight battle
flow is a tie...both y'all dropped nice spits and i felt it easy to get into both, i was feelin them both. structure, givin this to shadow cuz L.I ure lines were stretched in parts and others were fairly short. shadow didnt have a perfect structure goin on but it beat ures. punches was the hardest to call cuz both y'all came wit hard punches u know, both showed a lot of creativity, especially L.I utilizin them links as you regularly do well. some hard punchlines in there and sum nice personals to with a few aight multis in there i think. i judge this one down to who had the best line in the battle cuz it was so close BEST LINE And how you gonna edit your verse post and than act like no one will notice... Its straight, you can edit after i dropped, still get the loss afta feedin off this... that was a gud funny line from L.I. giving him my vote!! gud spit from both y'all tho. NUFF RESPECT!! V/ - L.I. |
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05-04-04, 08:16 PM | #11 | |||||
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
wow ^^ that shit's gay, i edited my post because the quote from dirtyboy was fucked up. cry me a fucking river. and it was an hour and half before you posted. seriously...
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05-04-04, 10:22 PM | #12 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: 0F7A 2931
I thought this battle was OK.....
Shadow came pretty hard with a good flow..... His punches were hittin well and his shit was kinda personal....Overall he had a solid verse.......L.I came OK but his stretched lines made it flow awfully. His punches suffered because of it. And I saw that punch about the # of members in his crew......cause I made it up. Best line: Together we nasty… cuz I’m sick and just left you twisted And my punches hit so fucking hard your mom just got fisted ^^^ This one made me chuckle a bit.... Vote - Shadows Edge
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05-05-04, 08:44 PM | #13 | ||||||
Flyweight
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win
IP: 4C99 D992
i think L.I won dis battle coz he had betta punches and his flowed alot betta. Plus he wasnt too cocky.
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05-05-04, 09:19 PM | #14 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
^^ that doesn't come close to counting kid
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05-05-04, 10:34 PM | #15 | |||||
The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
this was a hott battle shadows edge u had some killer punches and that hott personal your wordplay was sick and some nice multies..structure was a lil messy but it flowed well so that dont matter...
best bar:Flip scripts? Best flip the pencil and erase your text My train of thought alone leave your tracks in wrecks worst bar:Must I re-iterate? This whack kid is just fourteen Audio L’s iterate because his voice sound like a queen overall: 7.5/10 L.I also had a ill verse but i just wasnt feelin it as much as shadows some of your bars were stretched...you had some ill punches and some good personals..good meta's and wordplay was good..i think if your structure was better u would have had a hotter verse best bar:The way your record’s goin, theres no chance of bein an expertise… And it doesn’t help that you loss category is more populated than the Japanese… worst bar:Loss by loss added up when against skill, seems like your losses are in sync as the rockettes.... Sarcasm shows the fear because of a rough road schedule, and u dont perform well wit vets... overall:6.5/10 vote:shadows edge i just think he had a better overall verse with better punches...L.I had a sick verse too but shadows took this one ~!1!~
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