Yes, As U wished.

I made a new on in Elevated FL because. We both have over 5 wins.


Rulez:

10 lines
Due: 20 min from now.
No show: DQ

blah!!

Goodluck.

We gonna talk about MM Vs Da Army. After we dont with this.

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Checkity......Check....

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check.........................................innn n

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blow yo brains out head,and spit yo lame shit back at u instead..............
u cant think of creativity in yo verse cuz yo vision is dead...............
go 2 msn n chats and work on yo lyrics then come back with better skilling........
yo visions is fake u prolly thought Dp was 4reel when she said u her sexual healer........
da computer a freeze on yo verse it get so embarrased of u acting..............
so go do a new username when i make u disappear like the otha 4 jacksons.........
even yo hippo avatar tellin u 2 leave he waving u 2 get off wit his hand..........
deadly vision beat me???? dass when ali stop shaking and christopher reeves stand......
yo shit need practice,yo open mics not hype,shit is wat MM about.............
i reverse yo verse,cuz da day u beat me is when grand master flash come back out....

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^^Faggot!! ,Even hawaians got sweeter Punch!~youz on usher nutz like a chipmunk..
I guess its true what they say,"FAGGZ HANG WIT THE WEAKER BUNCH!"..



^^I'll have a heater crush ya thoughts cuz you winnin this is only in your imagination..
Even P diddy aint FEELIN YA SHIT,when youz sprung off dylon ya MASTERBATION!..
14-2 rec? dont Fidget bitch, Im "Dropping" All Over The "Bedrock!!" Like "Pidgeon Shit"...
A Warrior?? C'mon ua bitch And Slit Your Wrist, You To Easy To "Penetrate" Like Your Girl's "CliT"...



^^Dont Stay Shocked You Aint Benevelant...
You On A "Strict" "Diet" Of "Gay Men" So Stay On Ya "Read-Ya-Men-t"...
There Goes Ya Reign…I’d Steal Ya Girl… But I know Her “Head-Bites”..
You a fag yo whole Flow Makes Me “url” and I aint Talkin about Web-sites..

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Votes Please

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uppin the votes nice drop................................

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punches vison:14-2 rec? dont Fidget bitch, Im "Dropping" All Over The "Bedrock!!" Like "Pidgeon Shit"...
A Warrior?? C'mon ua bitch And Slit Your Wrist, You To Easy To "Penetrate" Like Your Girl's "CliT"...

personals vison:14-2 rec? dont Fidget bitch, Im "Dropping" All Over The "Bedrock!!" Like "Pidgeon Shit"...
A Warrior?? C'mon ua bitch And Slit Your Wrist, You To Easy To "Penetrate" Like Your Girl's "CliT"...

metas vison:^^Faggot!! ,Even hawaians got sweeter Punch!~youz on usher nutz like a chipmunk..
I guess its true what they say,"FAGGZ HANG WIT THE WEAKER BUNCH!"..

multies vison:There Goes Ya Reign…I’d Steal Ya Girl… But I know Her “Head-Bites”..
You a fag yo whole Flow Makes Me “url” and I aint Talkin about Web-sites..

^^^not really multie but somewhat

structure choppa: bars wasnt too stretched

wittiness choppa: his punches didnt hit hard but was funny though

overall i gotta go with deadly vison
peep links

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Huh china.

UppUN

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yo both these were good verses but i was feelin choppa's verse betta

punches choppa had like a 8.5 and deadly had a 8
vocab goes to deadly
flow and structure goes to choppa


vote=choppa city

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^^Playa am sorry to say this but,U have to have 5 wins to vote in here.

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haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa uppin dis shit .........

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Mannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn What HAppened to Elite voters man. Didnt kno it take that long fo people to vote in elevated.

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damn lol choppa i think this was a weak verse from u u could of came alot harder..ur shit was simple a newb could of spit that..it was nice but sum shit did not make sense and i was like huh..and sum shit didnt rhyme

but all in all it was pretty good 5/10

deadly...nice idea on quoting his lines..that shit was sick im feelin dat idea..........ur lines was pretty sick too....nice punches...ok vocab...shit was nice

7/10

vote deadly

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