here's da rules:
10-15 lines
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no bullshit votes
no unexplained votes
u spit first playa


DQ'ed. No feeding rule here
-strobe

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My flow is developing like a polaroid picture/
my "rhyme book" is the "bible" and i'm just "writing" my "scriptures."

Checkin in. oh yea one more rule.. u have 1 hour to spit

this bitch A$e aint even in this, just another victim on my win-list..
i insist you enlist with rappers to assist your game, to me you dont exsist..
the more you persist i resist and put you 'under water' quicker then a baptist..
im sicker then this half-bitch i laugh quick son dont make me get graphic..
i already see this win you cant have it with your wack shit cuz im telepathic..
are u gonna try and sound deep? I will defeat your profound speech..
and pound your ear to the cement in town streets..
like your hearin the ground speak, ending your planned play like downed knees..
how bad can you be!never rap agian please! or you'll get smackedin da teeth..
because your post aint hot, they lackin degrees..


ight its ur turn...

iight.....nice shit.......but look...

u can still feel da "heat" when it "rain" when i "cock dat thunder"/
i'm bout my "bread dog, it's about you i "wonder"/
me and my crew motto is no I n da team/
u fuck around wit dat, we'll make u feel da heat like sunbeams/
it's more than a "track" how i run things, it's a marathon/
n when i pull dat "piece" out, i call dat louis farakkan/ (get it?)
dis nigga Mixx think he hot, well he still can get handled on/
and this battle to me is practice so i'm having fun/
and why da fuck do you call yourself mixx?/
and i'm a repairman, but this is a broke rapper i can't fix/
and u talkin bout u'll put me underwater like a baptist? NIGGA PLEASE/
u like da congregation n my chruch, so i'll "aim and plea"/ (get it?)
and i'ma tell you somthing right now, and im'a settle da score/
nigga u got a "purple heart", but u ain't get it for war.



IT'S A WRAP NIGGA!!!!!!!!

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My flow is developing like a polaroid picture/
my "rhyme book" is the "bible" and i'm just "writing" my "scriptures."

Ight man.. lets get these votes cmin in.. i wasnt feelin that shit cuz half of it is forced and U FED LIKE A BITCH

uppin for votes,

ay yo, dog, i ain't fuckin feed, dat came straight off da head dog....where da fuck did i feed off at?

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My flow is developing like a polaroid picture/
my "rhyme book" is the "bible" and i'm just "writing" my "scriptures."

that line dogg... i said it in my rap.. u took it and used it to make a punch w/e... thats call a feed.. how can u rap when u dont know wut a feed is

lmao @ u, yo i don't feed or bite off anybody, and plus, dat wuz just a reply to yo line

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My flow is developing like a polaroid picture/
my "rhyme book" is the "bible" and i'm just "writing" my "scriptures."

and thats called a "FEED" wtf about a feed do u not understand... live it up u fed.. but its okay THIS TIME... just let the votes come in

uh huh, yea dog, wtf ever u say, actin like i know dat was your shit.

COME ON YA'LL, GET DA VOTES ROLLIN IN!!!!!

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My flow is developing like a polaroid picture/
my "rhyme book" is the "bible" and i'm just "writing" my "scriptures."

OMG ur a fucking noob.. now i see why ur 0-3... ""like u dont know thats my shit?""
nigga look at exactly the way u wrote it.. in a question nikka...

VOTES PLZ

ok a$e stole dis 1 4 da simple reason he came wit beter punches way better mix yo verse was simple as it can be u a elavate u used good vocab tho

a$e-

bestline-u can still feel da "heat" when it "rain" when i "cock dat thunder"/
i'm bout my "bread dog, it's about you i "wonder"/

nice

worsteline-nune
your verse gets a 8/10 overall

mix-


this bitch A$e aint even in this, just another victim on my win-list..
i insist you enlist with rappers to assist your game, to me you dont exsist..

all right but slacked after that

worseline-u fuck around wit dat, we'll make u feel da heat like sunbeams/
it's more than a "track" how i run things, it's a marathon/

not 2 good

punches-ase
flow-mix
structure-both
creativity-ase
personals-ase
winner-ase

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Yo Yo Lets Get Down To Bizniss

A$e

Punches 9/10
Flowz 9/10
Struture 8/10
Multi's=5/10
Personals 7/10

Overall=38
Mixx

Punchlines 10/10
Struture 9/10
Multi's 7/10
Personals 8/10
Flowz 9/10

Overall=43

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

IIGHT THIS IS HOW IT WENT DOWN I THINK THIS WAS CLOSE A "LIL"

MIXX
this bitch A$e aint even in this, just another victim on my win-list..
i insist you enlist with rappers to assist your game, to me you dont exsist..
-NICE MULTI

im sicker then this half-bitch i laugh quick son dont make me get graphic..
i already see this win you cant have it with your wack shit cuz im telepathic..
OK PUNCH


A$e
and why da fuck do you call yourself mixx?/
and i'm a repairman, but this is a broke rapper i can't fix/
nice punch!

u can still feel da "heat" when it "rain" when i "cock dat thunder"/
i'm bout my "bread dog, it's about you i "wonder"/
ok ok

flow=a$e
punches=mixx
open=mixx
multis=mixx
close=a$e
vote=mixx

i think mixx just did a lil better in his punches if a$e had a couple of more good punches i would have voted 4 him but... sence he didnt mixx gets my vote