10 lines
no dick rideing
1 post
find mind spits first

shady baby, your not a man your a ladie, you get played in my game easerly/
Im gonna teach this boy a lesson till he can't hear him speaking/
this boy better flee cuz im like a killing spree, im fine mind wild my shit an't mild/
you get your face knocked off like door hinges till i start hearing painful winges/
this boy can't rap, he's like steped back for my foots ready to stamp/
im underrestedmated, you can't never test me baby, i'll jump your charts off like they just jumped off stage scared/
i'll coeme out from the night to light a firework stiked with a match, set the match back pulled n ready to strike fire set off n collided into your window burnin u living/
this boy's already done this was fun while it lasted, you just bin out runned/
stunned bitch listen your wishin i think you got a death wish/
im being rushed now plz hush i got ta get of the internet, cause everyones pissed off/
fuk it i'll let my flow finish you off/

U think you hot....but you look like u bout to orgasim all the time/
Esspecially since "mat,rat,gat,and sat"......are ur only ryhmes/
U white,yet you act black,talking in slang and rocking Sean John/
Ur mom probably wish you weren't born,cause she acts in porn/
Maybe if there was cure for STD,she'd be able to get some real shit/
And if she could get rid of flabby tits and hanging down clit/
But that won't ever happen......... cause ur pops got no legs/
But to get with ur mama...... he ain't even have to beg/
You like to act all tough,but you a queer,who get pick on by his peers/
I got rhymes longer than DOCTOR OCT.,so don't even try to block/
See,my list goes"Em,50,Nas,and Jay",yours go "dick,prick,cock n schumk/

come on............................ket's get some votes

breakdown:

fine mind:

shady baby, your not a man your a ladie, you get played in my game easerly/
Im gonna teach this boy a lesson till he can't hear him speaking/
this boy better flee cuz im like a killing spree, im fine mind wild my shit an't mild/
you get your face knocked off like door hinges till i start hearing painful winges/
this boy can't rap, he's like steped back for my foots ready to stamp/
im underrestedmated, you can't never test me baby, i'll jump your charts off like they just jumped off stage scared/
i'll coeme out from the night to light a firework stiked with a match, set the match back pulled n ready to strike fire set off n collided into your window burnin u living/
this boy's already done this was fun while it lasted, you just bin out runned/
stunned bitch listen your wishin i think you got a death wish/
im being rushed now plz hush i got ta get of the internet, cause everyones pissed off/
fuk it i'll let my flow finish you off/

i wont comment on your rap because it wasnt a rap it was a story u need some structure u had no flow and half your bars didnt even rhyme well im lying MORE THAN HALF YOUR BARS DIDNT RHYME!!! no im lying again NONE OF YOUR BARS RHYMED!!! stop rappin damn

overall:10/50

shady1132:

U think you hot....but you look like u bout to orgasim all the time/
Esspecially since "mat,rat,gat,and sat"......are ur only ryhmes/
^^nice ass punch felt that 8/10
U white,yet you act black,talking in slang and rocking Sean John/
Ur mom probably wish you weren't born,cause she acts in porn/
^^ok but im sorry to break it to you john and porn dont rhyme lol 5/10
Maybe if there was cure for STD,she'd be able to get some real shit/
And if she could get rid of flabby tits and hanging down clit/
^^ok punch 4/10
But that won't ever happen......... cause ur pops got no legs/
But to get with ur mama...... he ain't even have to beg/
^^gay bar 2/10
You like to act all tough,but you a queer,who get pick on by his peers/
^^this goes with nothing so im not counting it
I got rhymes longer than DOCTOR OCT.,so don't even try to block/
See,my list goes"Em,50,Nas,and Jay",yours go "dick,prick,cock n schumk/
^^ok finisher 6/10

overall:25/50


vote:shady....like it wasnt obvious...shady u didnt havea hott verse so against almost anyone else on this board with that battle u would have lost u got potential but u need to elevate if your gonna battle vets or at least people wit more skill....as for fine all i can say is put down the mic and pick up a book

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

haha this is the NEWBS OF ALL NEWBS JUST READ THE FUCKING BATTLE MAN....sad shit...yall keep elevating...aint gonna vote....but if i had to id say shady...but wont vote cause i dont wanna hate...pce

uppin

And come on guys,don't shit all over the newb.

uppin 4 votes

uppin

what tha fuck was yall on when yall did this shit.
Yo fine mind you didn't even make no sense at all that shit was ridiculous.
No disrespect homie but damn.

Shady you just got this by havin da hottest line of da battle and it wasn't all dat.

Mat,rat,gat and sat are your only rhymes.
It was TRU

vote=shady
yo swing thru and peep this fellaz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122743

uppin

I got 2 people sayine that they would vote for me,yet I got only one.

uppinnnnnnn

I have to agree its unfortuante that you don't get points for storytellin. Fine Mind, you need somthing other than mettas to win a battle. Punches all your rhymes were like this
this boy can't rap, he's like steped back for my foots ready to stamp/
-Where is the punch??

Shady, I've some of your other shit and I've seen you come hotter, it started out good, but then got weak, still funny though! When you were talkin all that shit about his mom and dad, but try to swtich it up a bit, if you had been battle'n someone else they may have beat you cause they came more versatile.

Vote cause of punches goes to Shady

Oh and vote on my!!!! NOW!!!!
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122892