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ayo battleing jay dog is easy, just give him a bone and sends him asleep easerly/
these verses are to embersed upon you, to make your ass afraid laid down in the shaddows/
this bitch an't no dog, he's more like an afraid cat, he's afraid of my foot ready to stamp/
my lyrics are like clamps, ready to grip hold of your skull crushing it till it's descintergrated and gone/
jay dog hasn't lost his verginity, still takes viagra pills for his gay porn reading amuzingly/
im so angry i could turn this nasty into a ram page, shoot you when your poping shit on stage/
you'll never find me im like camoflage, thinking your in a dessert in a merage/
my lips are deadly, ready to kill, i'll drop your whole body down on spine parolysing/
remeber me cuz i bring nasty chills, you'll never find a rapper as ill as me/

im gonna kill this mother fucker popa doc/
n ill do it all before he can find his cock/
hit so hard ull think its an electric shock/
this bitch thinks he can shoot/
mother fuckers still in his birthday suit/
hes still sixteen years old/
put this kid in a wrestlin hold/
so before this punk gets to old/
imma show him how shits done/
imma go get ma gun/

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alright lets get some votes on this

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thats a nice battle.some close shit there.i think my vote has to go to popa doc for a better wrote verse and some nicer puches.the gay porn one as good but more work needed.jay dogg,you had some nice punches but try extending your verses and hitting harder,maybe take the piss more rather than gangstarise,but keep going at it.......peace......

alright lets get more votes on this and popa doc or should i say fine mind you better not be dickridin again

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This Battle Was.... Ehh... U Both Need To Elavate... Alot.... But Based On Complex Bars Tho... I Give This One To Popa Doc... Jay Dog.. U Need More Content In Ur Flow.. Sounds Like A Nersury Ryhme... I Aint Tryin To Put U Down Tho.. Jus Try To Make Sumone Think When U Write..

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-Jae Gutter-
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Box Of Hollow Tips.. $30.00

Look On Your Face
When You see Me... Pricless

RETURN THA FAV... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123609

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.:LyricalLegends:.
-Jae Gutter-
.40 Caliber Gun...... $550.00
A Few Clips........... $100.00
Box Of Hollow Tips.. $30.00

Look On Your Face
When You see Me... Pricless

papa doc...

wow there is no werd called easerly what is that crap... you would lose just for that crap but then i read jay doggs verse.. prolly one of the worst i have seen on this site poppa doc takes this one easy regardless of the corny name and the made up words... vote papa doc

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I wasn't a fan of either verses really. Not to say that they weren't good, just my personal preference.

Jay-Dogg came too simplistic. I mean, look at something like this:

"this bitch thinks he can shoot/
mother fuckers still in his birthday suit/"

Wtf?

popa doc needs to check his spelling but he at least was using Jay_dogg's name against him. He actually had personals as opposed to Jay-Dogg who spit generic.

Vote is for popa doc.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123621