topic: what you do after u wake up....

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spit due by 7:00 p,m eastern

blind spit good luck nolost

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ok ok ok ok checkin in checkin in good luck nolost

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OH yea....spit due in 20 min. dawg..u forgot to add it after check in..so i'm checkin in right now..lolz...

eyelids open,i rub my eyes and take a big yawn then scratch my head..//
then grab sheets and spread..... pull em' off....and step outa bed...//
walk down to the kitchen then grab a plate,then get bacon and eggs.//
then i sit down at the table yawn again and stretch my arms and legs//
then i get some oarange juice...pour a glass .......and then take a drink//
finish my food , then take my dirty dishes then i put them in the sink//
no basketball...... im pissed cuz right out the window....... i see rain//
OUCH! .........stepped on my dogs bone, so now im in "major-pain"-//
im pissed so i go into the livingroom.... nigga what do i see........???//
my DOG is taking a pee.., and then i see..bugs and daffy on my tv..//
itsto early, so i go take a shower and a "long-awaited" morning piss//
get out and read: KILL NOLOST : and its next on my "to-do" list....//

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good luck dawg..this is wut i do after i wake up.....

First Sleepin, then I wake up right wen I hear the alarm//
Then take a shower, get in my car, then my actual day starts//
But my car breaks down, gotta walk ta work or don't get paid//
Then on my way this chick comes up to me n wants ta get laid//
Should I keep walkin or just stay for the day//
If i walk, then i'll have ta agen wait for a babe//
.............................But wuts better
four hours of sex play, or workin for cowards untill eight//
So right now i jst decided to put my whole entire career at stake//
First walked in her house then started ta kiss her then lick her//
She compared me to her ex and sed my big dick was way bigger//
We never had time for relaxin, first two hours of orgasims//
But realized it wasn't two hours, 4 hours it has been lastin//
........................But shyt, i jst woke up
felt like jst had sex and the girl was ment for me//
hoped it wasn't dream, hopen it lasted endlesly//
And my hope came true, the girl was right next to me//


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Im lucky huh

good drops y'all
Dis....good drop you painted a clear picture of what yo do in the morning, you stayed on subject throughout whole verse, had good flow an structure tight shit, rhymes were a little simple coulda upped the vocab though, an threw afew multies in there, but overall good drop

Nolost..........you started out shaky cuz ya first two lines didn't rhyme man, then you didn't stay on subject throughout the verse, your vocab was good, you had good rhyme scheme once you started rhyming but the fact that your story was kinda unclear, I'd say you lost man
Vote: Discharge

Lost....it was good man, you trying to be me, only difference is it woulda been three gurls not just one...haha

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break down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

discharge

best line=itsto early, so i go take a shower and a "long-awaited" morning piss//
get out and read: KILL NOLOST : and its next on my "to-do" list....//
--LOL THAT MADE ME LAUGH HARD AHAHHAH

worst line=to me all his lines were iight so no bad line

nolost
best line=four hours of sex play, or workin for cowards untill eight//
So right now i jst decided to put my whole entire career at stake//

worst line=Should I keep walkin or just stay for the day//
If i walk, then i'll have ta agen wait for a babe//
--^^ just wack nuff said....


ok nolost i know u could have done a whole lot better cuz iv'e seen alot of ur battles but this is defentily the worst lol na im just playing but i know u could have doen better....discahrge u came tight in this battle like everyline had me craking up that was some good shit welll thats all i got to say

vote=discharge

aight ppl..uppin this plz

Aiigh nolost I've heard betta shit from you. Discharge made me laugh my ass off. NOlost had good flow but there was some wahck shit

Vote-Discharge

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I've Been Gone Longer Than You Been Writing

Aiyo..

Decent Drops By The Both Of You...

You Both Need Better Word Usuage, More Emotion, and More Direction With Your Topics. Um.....Discharge, don't start every other sentence with THEN...that gets mad annoying and is shittay.

NOLost You just Need To Elevate On Word Usuage and The Emotion. You Straight Though.

Nice Drops Kids

Vote - Discharge

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