OH SHit! I forgot......yeah just drop 10-12 lines

My Guns Promote Cancer~You'll Get Your~Hair~Removed//
And Then Put You In A Box Like Your Body Was A Pair~Of~Shoes//
Come On Lets Get Serious~Bottom Line Is Im Ill//
Murderin Niggas Like I Brought Columbine To Tha Hill//
You Being Better Than Me? Thats Funny~Im Laughin~Despite//
Ill Leave You Lookin Like You Played Jesus In The Passion~Of~Christ//
This Kidd Is Thinkin Hes Hot~But Guess Again Cuz You're Not//
You Could Set Your Computer Screen On Fire~Your Verse Still Wouldnt Look Hot//
Ill Renegade~And~Rent~A~Blade..Basically Diminish~Your~Existence//
Kill You And Win This Gay Ass Battle Before I Finish~A~Sentence//
You Should At Least Studied My Past Before Pressin~Your~Luck//
Now Like R.Kelly Around Teenagers~I'm Guessin~You're~Fucked//

back the fuck back nigga back the fuck back
back the fuck back nigga back the fuck back

..I flow-Flames like spittin Propane to diminish ya health
You tried to run away from wack.... and got ahead of yourself
He'll have to rap with a boner if he plans to spit hard
A run for my money? this is more like a walk for a gift-card
He'll hide reality over the internet & play it cool like dude im stoned
Which is his excuse for bein on the net on saturday nites all alone
This kids head is the joke, so i thought i'd give it a crack..
Im puzzled how he takes every dope concept and spits it wack
Scare to post you pussy but u aint gone pass me tho,
But Damn!..,. i seen braver "bitches" on a "lassie Show"
This D is going to hit hard n also cave in passin,
Cuz i just "serveThis Joke" like the "circus Main attraction"

dont sleep on this battle yall drop a vote on this shit......

ok just remember no hate ok guys honest vote here both had flow and structure tie in those two multis were gone up to murder along with the punch lines sorry leon but he took this one dude .........
return the fav guys...honest vote on the front lines the asshole posted my name as stinky fingers but look for that battle on the front lines please and vote

alright alright

but what kind of punch is this
Come On Lets Get Serious~Bottom Line Is Im Ill//
Murderin Niggas Like I Brought Columbine To Tha Hill//

Mc Murder . .
Erm you had good multi`s that made no sense
And Then Put You In A Box Like Your Body Was A Pair~Of~Shoes//
That is wackness there .. I dont understand man dont think you can get away with no making sense multi`s anyway you had good flow and decent punches but you`re rap sounded really weak And dawg use pseronals so we know itas not bitten


Deleon
Erm i`ve seen better from you but you were maing better sense in you`re verse i think your punches were the same as him decent pretty weak thought & you used no personals auctually you made sense more

Vote = D

MC murder you made no sense at all looked like a clear bite . .

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nice to see a vet vote...lets get some more votes in here.....

D - your verse was aight. you had pretty good personals...but your punches were average. I know you could probably do better.

MC - You gotta get the automatic "L" just for bittin' off someone. The link is below. "You Could Set Your Computer Screen On Fire~Your Verse Still Wouldnt Look Hot" that line is kinda played. It's just used in different ways. You gotta be original. You also gotta get some more personals in there. Be original dogg.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121816

My vote goes to D

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MC Murder: flow was aight.....punches are decent.......my fav line was

You Being Better Than Me? Thats Funny~Im Laughin~Despite//
Ill Leave You Lookin Like You Played Jesus In The Passion~Of~Christ//

but I clicked on the link left by $MOKESKREEN & it's true you bit off one
the the battlers....but you weren't gettin my vote anywayz

DeLeon: got better punches flow was better, not that creative.....
you could do way fuckin better that wat you spit

fav line was the opener:

"I flow-Flames like spittin Propane to diminish ya health
You tried to run away from wack.... and got ahead of yourself"

vote goes obviously to DeLeon

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WEAK..you win
i say that you won..i like you avatar and your abs, they look tasty
can i have a bite, i guess yoiu can call me a biter. 10/10

n you sucked all over this aint a lolly ... pop hoe 0/10

return the favor, it is a hot battle of mines
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124208

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mc murder should be disqualified for bting. and get this, HE BIT OF A BITER!! hahahaha. anyway,Dleon go this since mc murder bit.

DAMN! even when i didnt try my best on a drop a fuckin herb gots to bite
fuckin fake ass bitch