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Old 05-16-04, 02:16 PM   #1
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t-storm vs L.I.

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Okay this guy is a joke....
RULES
10 Lines
No biting
No hate votes
No Crew votes
No dickriding
Loser must stay off of Elevated Front Lines for one month
Verses Due 15 minutes after check in....

Say bye bye to elevated frontlines....
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Old 05-16-04, 02:22 PM   #2
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ok chk........................innnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnn
 
Old 05-16-04, 02:23 PM   #3
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checkity check check..............
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Old 05-16-04, 02:34 PM   #4
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my verse

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Read your old verses, damn man, why’d you bother to come here…
With a wack rhyme scheme, no punches, ended your elevated career…
Battled six herbs, didn’t even KO all of them, man you’re a joke…
Claimin he vet, betta call a mechanic, cause you seem lyrically broke…
Grab the dictionary, look up some big words, add some complexity
Times your skill level by a hundred and still wouldn’t be next to me…
This bitch an herb see, look at his verse, it counts as a punch against him…
And with the high stake of a battle, your elevated life looks very grim…
Why did I go this hard, left you in trauma, oh yeah I remember why…
Cause you don’t belong here, come back in a month and give it another try…
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Old 05-16-04, 02:44 PM   #5
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ok

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ur verse cudnt fuck wit me if i woz ur whore ...n u paid me 50 cents/
changing tha rulez at tha last minute uz a cheap-wench/
fukin young ass niga u think uz a vet?...u cudnt touch me/
in fact the only way u can claim that is u stole..ya scheme from ma pet dog/
this cat wack...postin shit behind ma back....
u cudnt get ma heart pumpin...if i gave u heart attack/
fuck u dog...if u think im not cumin back..../
think ima listen 2 a snitch like u changin tha rulez behind ma back?/
 
Old 05-16-04, 02:50 PM   #6
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yo

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fuck this battle...u fukin young prick...i`ll battle in elevated all i want..i didnt agree to this shit...yeh u did fukin win..but rite now i jus wana rip ur fukin head off u fukin prick...ima cum back n merk ur fukin ass.......n by tha way u won...but ur shit woz fukin weak 4 a vet..bitch
 
Old 05-16-04, 02:52 PM   #7
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^^ haha finally he realizes he is wack...i didnt even try dumb shit.....so get ur ass out of elevated.....uppin this ish....if u didnt agree than u wouldnt have checked in....so shut the fuck up and get out of here once u lose.....ur the type of herbs that ruin elevated....and i just got rid of you....bye bye....
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Old 05-16-04, 02:56 PM   #8
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fuck u

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haha bet u didnt try.......ur fukin weak..............dnt u worry ima merk ur ass............dnt fukin tell me what to do cockface............i chkd in coz u already set it up.....u the type of fukin ignorant twat that ruins this site................so fuck u think i`ll b back wen i please......
 
Old 05-16-04, 03:03 PM   #9
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^^He got merked.
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Old 05-16-04, 03:05 PM   #10
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fuck u as well

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in fact fuck all u haters..............merk u all b 4 2 long.............................
 
Old 05-16-04, 03:07 PM   #11
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^^Merk who? Can u do that?

Set it up. We go quick 6 lines.
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Old 05-16-04, 03:57 PM   #12
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upping
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Old 05-16-04, 04:25 PM   #13
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Simple one way battle. And i am not saying this cuz i kno LI...

Because:

Punches: LI
Personals:L
Wordplay:L
Structure: both was streeeeeeeeetched.
Creativeness: L
Complexity: L


..........I cant poll vote but seriously "u got merked".....lol
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Old 05-16-04, 04:31 PM   #14
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Can I Get A Merk????? MERK!!!!!!
ha ha ha Damn!!
alirght how do i break this down it wasnt even close
LI just hit way harder with his punches and trust me..i can tell he wasnt tryin
LI had better everything
T-Storm you need to elevate alot....dont battle herbs....Im tryin to elevate
im battling Re$tricted-Countree Jay-Deadly Visions-i might lose but i dont
give a fuck-its all about respect and your a joke just by your name

vote=LI
 
Old 05-16-04, 06:35 PM   #15
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li
had s strong verse strong punches and good strcuture
example:Read your old verses, damn man, why’d you bother to come here…
With a wack rhyme scheme, no punches, ended your elevated career…
^^good^^^
nice flow
work oon your punches a lil more
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t-storm
kinda wack, bad structure not good flow wasnt feelin your verse or punches
example:Read your old verses, damn man, why’d you bother to come here…
With a wack rhyme scheme, no punches, ended your elevated career…
u cant beat someone even close to good with that what were you thinking
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my vote goes to LI
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