10 lines
no crew or hate
no bittin or feedin
i spit first

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They call me eric89 cuz that’s the year I came in this world
A kid with down syndrome can spit better then u and hes mentally 5 years old
The times iv KO’ed these veterans on here is countless
I murder emcees day in and day out on a regual basis
Yo battling me is like playin uker but I have all the power
Its not possible for u to win cuz I have the right and left bower
They call me emcee freshness cuz I have the freshest spits
They call me lay-u-out cuz thas what ima do when I bring my strongest hits
I spit so fast by the time ur done spittin I’ll be gone for miles
Why don’t u just switch to country music cuz that is ur style

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Eric 89 dont u know it takes a man to battle...
i jus ride u like my bitch with a saddle...
i dont wana hurt u cause a baby cant part wit its rattle...
do wat u skilled at,go on boy, run and skedaddle...
for u this battelin stuff a little too rough...
im a DON and i dont play around much...
a skilled italians is somethin a boy like u cant touch...
lets see if i step on him will we hear a crack...
you a fake white craka wat u gona say next, gat?...
maybe u be urself weak and smart,and jus not write bak...

don won dis easerly because of his consistant flow ness makin eric stop in his tracks because of the punchlines, eric didn't seem to make as many and don had the better verse rippin erric apart. Sorry eric dat was wackness.

vote don

lol he only voted against me because i voted an honest vote on one of his battles. o well. lets get some HONEST votes and not HATE votes people.

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Honestly there was nothing spectacular about either verse. Unfortunately someone has to win. I give this one to DON because he came with harder punches. Also some of Erics rhymes didn't make sense, or maybe its just me? (whats uker and bower?)

Suggestion: Eric man, you shouldn't set yourself up, when you go first. All that does is give your opponent somethin easy to start with, that is relevant at the same time. (by the way I'm talking about you mentioning how young you are) You could have spit somethin like this instead..." they call me eric89 cuz thats how many emcees I've slain,after I slaughter you eric 90 will be my name."

Just a suggestion, take it or leave it

My vote: Don

I Gotta Go With DON NO PUNCHES PERSONALS NOT EVEN MULTIES IN THIS BATTLE BUT FLOW GOES TO DON

Eric U Messed Up BASIS DOES NOT RHYME WITH COUNTLESS....IF U MADE IT RHYME UWOULDVE Won

DoN-FLOW AND Vocab

Eric-Flow

ok nyce 1 uker is a card game and bowers are the two highest cards in that game. and as far as "eric89 thats how many emcees iv slaughterd..." that was better then what i put thanks for the suggestion

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No biggie eric, by the way don't count my vote because I just realized that I can't vote till I have 20 posts. Either way I hope the suggestion helps.

peace

DON

Eric 89 dont u know it takes a man to battle...
i jus ride u like my bitch with a saddle...
^weak opener.....both filler lines no real punch

i dont wana hurt u cause a baby cant part wit its rattle...
do wat u skilled at,go on boy, run and skedaddle...
^^filler lines once again

for u this battelin stuff a little too rough...
im a DON and i dont play around much...
^^rough and much dont rhyme

a skilled italians is somethin a boy like u cant touch...
lets see if i step on him will we hear a crack...
^^lines dont blend and they FILLERS...also crack and touch dont rhyme

you a fake white craka wat u gona say next, gat?...
maybe u be urself weak and smart,and jus not write bak...
^^first line......WTF was u thinkin....second okay but really noobish

elevate man....all filler lines and 3 of you bars didnt even rhyme....lol





Eric

They call me eric89 cuz that’s the year I came in this world
A kid with down syndrome can spit better then u and hes mentally 5 years old
^^first line filler second weak punch but you tryed

The times iv KO’ed these veterans on here is countless
I murder emcees day in and day out on a regual basis
^^....first line i know isnt true cause umm you aint half as good as me or ne other vets.....second was okay but still a FILLER

Yo battling me is like playin uker but I have all the power
Its not possible for u to win cuz I have the right and left bower
^^ummm not sure bout this line.....FILLER

They call me emcee freshness cuz I have the freshest spits
They call me lay-u-out cuz thas what ima do when I bring my strongest hits
^^dont ever use shit like that again!!!! thats a big NO NO

I spit so fast by the time ur done spittin I’ll be gone for miles
Why don’t u just switch to country music cuz that is ur style
^^haha not a bad closer you learning

both you really need to elevate and throw some real punches and ad some personals........without those you aint gunna win against somebody that has even one punch....eric if this kat came with a punch you woulda been kod....but you probably will cause all these wack peeps is voting and dont know how the fuck to....take it from an Old RB vet....eric one this battle

v/eric

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thanks uppin still

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yeab but thats only one opinion u can c it both ways

uppin for some more votes we need more to end the battle

help me out and post some votes on here so we can close this battle thanks to u that helped out