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05-19-04, 08:11 AM
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This is my first post!
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fine mind s Mad Dog
IP: 509D 5063
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05-19-04, 08:15 AM
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Checkin in as u called me out first...............
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05-19-04, 08:44 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: DF7B C8F7
mad dog you an't gonna murk a cat cuz im another dog ready to bite heads off/
this fucker needs 1 day for him to reply back for another shitty rap/ don't wanna here it bound to be crap, like you should quite rap altogether/ you don't show no tallent only someone for me to fuck up, with balls hung out to lik/ the mad dogs got rabies need to be urgently tested dribblein from mouth like foot and mouth/ put the dog down taken to a vet to give it the lethal injection/ you never use similes in words as or like, like your a hermathidite/ shitty rapper with a stammer, a wannabe claimer humping tupacs cd out/ leave his shit alone better den your shit will ever be, fuckin sissy i could call you all the names under the sun/ my first pun murked dis ugly dog thats looks like a dog from the muppets/ your on a puppet string dangleing from a ceiling tangled the fuck up/ twisted in knots made crafted, you now look like ponicio in wooden blocks/ |
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05-19-04, 09:09 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Round 2...head not spinnin this time (Check round 1)...ok he stepped up but time i smacked him down!
(Verse) Round 2 and less lines equals less rhymes but results still the same/ Fine Mind why did u ask me to put u through the same sorta pain?/ Ok u got the structure in ur raps, but the rhymes still lack/ Tryin to rhyme 'off' and 'rap' hows about i hit u 'soft' and hold 'back'/ Fuck that u's wack and ima expose ya/ If u were a bitch...ur skirt would be lifted above yer shoulder/ Take this boulder...tie it to ya feet and jump off the cliff/ U think the definition of gaangsta...is listenin to Will Smith/ So remember me sayin about me 5 & you none/ Well i got de ja vu coz its about to happen again son/
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05-19-04, 09:22 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: D75F 6997
my vote goes to mad dog becuae he had a better verse......punches hit hard and everything and most important your shit rhymed
mind-you need to elevate and work on making your lines rhyme and shit.....none of your words rhymed......your verse was just a bunch of filler lines and talk......ELEVATE v/mad dog |
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05-19-04, 10:01 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Uppin.............................................
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05-19-04, 10:12 AM
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IP: C80C AEE2
mad dog you killed him i didn't like fine minds very much cos it was boring to read, mad you had better punches n flowed well...
v/ mad dog... p.s return the favour link in the sig... |
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05-19-04, 10:30 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6099 9647
*breakdown*
-fine mind- flow- 4/10 punches- 5/10 structure- 3/10 rhymes- 4/10 total- 16/40 -mad dog- flow- 6/10 punches- 7/10 structure- 7/10 rhymes- 8/10 total- 28/40 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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05-19-04, 10:31 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6099 9647
ma vote definetly goes 2 mad dog he ripped fine mind good shyt guys
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05-19-04, 11:59 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 1E03 B472
Alright, Both Verses Were Weak As Da Devil Fine Mind, U Need 2 Work On How U Wryte And Know How 2 Put Up A Blow Mad Dog, U Were Weak But U Had Blows In There And Mad Dog?, U Said Fine Mind Had Structure, Were u Thrown In Da Floor As A Baby? U Probably Were Battlin One (Fine Mind) Cauze He Had No Structure And No Blows And Can't Wryte Well Scarface87's Rating Opener...Mad Dog Structure...Mad Dog Blowz...Mad Dog Closer...Mad Dog Da Winner Is...Mad Dog, But Try More Better Next Time, Dawg And Fine Mind, Learn How 2: Wrtye, Throw Blowz, use Better Structure, And What Else?, Oh Yeah, And Win Check Out My Battles... |
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05-19-04, 02:04 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: F87E C296
Flow:Mad dawg
Structure: mad dawg Punches: mad dawg Vote goes 2 mad dawg...Yo fine mind u need 2 elevate u didnt even rhyme in ur verse...go like ask somebody for help on how 2 rhyme iight ~1~
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