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G euce
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5 | 55.56% |
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4 | 44.44% |
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05-14-04, 07:49 PM
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G:Deuce vs. Mike12Ikeda
IP: E556 E93E
rulez: should be obvious...
no crew votes, d/r, hate 10-20 lines CHECK IN and you got 1 HOUR max. to spit ya best verse..... keystyle...no prewritten shit....peace...may the best emcee win |
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05-14-04, 07:54 PM
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#2
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Artist, that simple
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IP: 4289 77F4
fa sho, checkity check my nigga, let the best mc win, fa sho
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05-14-04, 07:55 PM
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IP: E556 E93E
gonna go eat dinner in between but im checking in.................................
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05-14-04, 07:58 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: 4289 77F4
fa sho, same here........................................
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05-14-04, 08:40 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
okay hmm while you guys go and eat lets have a word from our sponsers lol this is gonna be a great battle
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05-14-04, 08:59 PM
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IP: E556 E93E
hmmm....dont count on it ive fallen off a bit....
Every voter thinks a win for Mike12Ikeda is just-a-wish But I got a “shot” if Los Angeles could-be-saved-by-“Fish” Even deaf people wouldn't wanna “hear” G. Duece spit every-word Damn straight you from “the Underworld” cause you should never-be-heard You ain’t the king, you the “queen” of this ring, have you heard-of-Sable?// G: Duece is one emcee that I’ll hurt-n-disable If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables”…. Only way you’d find a win is if you take-my-spits Don’t like poo for dinner, but I’ll bake-ya-shit And rape-ya-bitch, I like her body, so I will take-her-tit, and shake-the-clit…. Your rhymes are like Nike shoes, you don’t know what’s “inside-the-threads” Your rhythms-dead, make your computer screen turn crimson-red After I punish-and-torture you like Iraqi POWs You will never take home a W even though you rap all serious Get this emcee a tampon cause I made this pussy bleed like he was having-his-period…. |
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05-14-04, 09:00 PM
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IP: E556 E93E
damn wish i coulda come harder....but meh....good luck...feel like u got this already!
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05-14-04, 09:27 PM
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IP: E556 E93E
gduece drop ya verse i thought u check ed in already...peace yo
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05-15-04, 01:31 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: F494 BF3D
Ight lets do dis...
Let me hit you wit that word usage first…. Breath take when I spiritualize, these lyrical lines Speaking tumors wit words that reduce brain size Nose bleed by venom lines like a lyrical handstand I fill my bars to his lungs, making lyrical hand fans (like them church fans) Come wit it nigga…. Words relaxin, I lay back, my lines divide and rip rhymes to fractions I’ll "roll the credits", cause Mike’s lines are "missing all the action". Mike reminds me of “Cosby”, he spits “pudding”, his words are just not “hard” hittin My lines melt out his eye sockets and have him seeing nothing but “jello” vision I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find (X-Files –read it again) I could spit through your mind, break down my rhymes to teach you how to use it Move down your spind, quick stopping your heart, now that’s acoustic I will merk Mike's ass this first time, and leave his carcus under lead ground (Bullets) And have his mind scattered than them pics of DP (Disaster Piece) in webcam You say your rhymes bring clips and gaps in black pens Nigga Please, I think you need to reload your raps man 16 lines, 8 bars....Quick right
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05-15-04, 01:43 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: F494 BF3D
uppin for votes for dis.......................................good drop Mike
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05-15-04, 01:46 PM
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#11
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP: D666 F54C
Yo I think this was a decent battle here
Mike: I like the verse with the DJ "turnin tables"- Unfortunately it was your strongest punchline in this one... I can obviously see you get all the concepts but in this battle I don't think you implemented them to apex ability. G Deuce: While I think you had alot more punchlines in your verse none of them were really that strong... However I think the metaphors you used in this helped you edge out the narrow Victory. I give Mike a 6.49 Out of 10 and Ima give GDeuce a 6.50 Vote GDeuce. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124310
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05-15-04, 03:00 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: 2848 FCDC
uppin for more votes for dis...................................
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05-15-04, 07:49 PM
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Suspended: Biting
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IP: 9F8E E530
this wasnt that great of a battle but here is the break down
g:duce best line=Words relaxin, I lay back, my lines divide and rip rhymes to fractions I’ll "roll the credits", cause Mike’s lines are "missing all the action". --nice multi worst line=Breath take when I spiritualize, these lyrical lines Speaking tumors wit words that reduce brain size --wack nuff said.. mike best line=Even deaf people wouldn't wanna “hear” G. Duece spit every-word Damn straight you from “the Underworld” cause you should never-be-heard --shit that line might have won u the battle ahha^ worst line=Only way you’d find a win is if you take-my-spits Don’t like poo for dinner, but I’ll bake-ya-shit --no comment iight think mike came alot harder in this battle i liked his flow and some of his punches expecillay that uunderworld line damn that line was funny so thats y i mike gets my vote nuff said... |
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05-15-04, 07:57 PM
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Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
Mike12Ikeda: ok.......well the verse wasn't that bad you needed to
throw more punches in the rhymes cuz battles to me revolve mostly on punches.......multis aren't important. your flow was good only one line stretched. the vocab was a bit basic...it was creative in a way by mentioning celebs & dat kind of shit... the effectiveness wasn't that good I would say only this line was effective: "If you ever get a contract, I will burn-the-label You need a DJ in this battle to come and “turn”-the-“tables" G euce well the verse was a lil above Mike12Ikeda's....punches way morethan Mike12Ikeda and as I said b4 battles revolve around punches.... flow was good..... vocab well you said bigger words than him but vocab ain't that important either.... creativity well you mentioned shows not many people do that & effectiveness was half decent most effective line in my opinion would be: "I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find" Punches: G euceFlow: tie Creativity: tie Vocab: G euceEffectiveness: G eucehonest vote...... goes to: G euceword of wisdom: up the punches a lot more & make it more effective like more personals...........
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05-15-04, 08:36 PM
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Heavy Lies The Crown
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IP: A672 D5E3
^lmfao
mike your opener was nice good wordplay and creative but punch didnt hit that hard though your closer wasnt to good to me either last long was stretched not very creative either not much of anything in it i liked and the rest of your verse was inconsistent it started off tight an fell off bad to me in the middle an never really picked back up first 8 lines where nice the rest where weak to me just work on stayin consitent and not stretchin out ya bars cause it kills the punch most of the time deuce your opener ummmm tumors make your brain swell so that didnt really make no since to me so not much there but good wordplay an your closer .... decent i guess didt really see much i liked in that either and the rest of your verse had good wordplay and all some good punchs and some not really connected i was fealin less then half of your verse only liked about 6 lines the rest where off to me Words relaxin, I lay back, my lines divide and rip rhymes to fractions I’ll "roll the credits", cause Mike’s lines are "missing all the action". Mike reminds me of “Cosby”, he spits “pudding”, his words are just not “hard” hittin My lines melt out his eye sockets and have him seeing nothing but “jello” vision I’m stitching up his rap cause my verbs left too many holes in his mind Mark an “X” on that spot, but your wackness made “files” hard to find ^ all sick but not enough vote mike
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