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5 | 62.50% |
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05-19-04, 08:40 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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.::Re$tricted Vs. King Solo::.(Topical)
IP: 3A45 611B
.::.Rules.::. 20 Lines Max 5 Votez Winz No Crew No Hate No Dickryding Spits Due In 30 Minutes .::Checkity Check::. TOPIC: Troubled Mind ~R~ |
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05-19-04, 09:34 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 3A45 611B
Is This Bitch Ever Going To Check The Fuck In??
He Calls Out Anybody and Then Doesnt' Check?? LMAO FUCKING HERB!! ~R~ |
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05-19-04, 09:36 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: DBEC 8786
Here's my spit
in case some ppl don't get it it is bout a guy who becomes an accomplice to murder and then he can't decide whether to tell the truth or not - TROUBLED MIND I’m just your average guy, I have always took life as it comes But then my world was rocked like a used up set of drums The new guy on the block arrived moving into the street next door Then that night we hooked up right outside the liquor store He showed me he was packing heat so I kinda realised the score Next thing I know shots were fired and a mans dead on the floor Now there’s a police inquiry and my whole life has turned to hell I mean I want to help them out but I swore that I wouldn’t tell And the worst thing of all is that my father is working the case If he found out I was an accomplice I’d be just a big disgrace I mean this guy really trusts me and that trust I don’t wanna abuse it But if I don’t tell someone I’m certain that I’m gonna lose it Now my dad is giving me strange looks and I keep thinking that he knows He stopped me the other day wanting to talk seriously and I just froze I was ready to let it all out and you know, just flat out confess When my dad said they caught the guy and the arrest was a success I thought they had my friend in custody; turns out they got the wrong guy And my friend just says “Forget it man we got off, let’s just let him fry.” But that is not the kind of person I am, I can not be forced to live a lie So it looks like my friends going down for murder and me as his ally.
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05-19-04, 09:37 PM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: DBEC 8786
i'm done playa
get ure spit down
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05-19-04, 09:38 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 3A45 611B
*Troubled Mind* I See Shadows That Scream and Move When My Eyes Are Closed.. Problems That Are Undefined, Not Even My Psychotrist Knows.. My Brain Waves Shift In A Zig-Zagged Directional Form.. Since I Was Born My Reality Has Been Torn In A Devilish Core.. I Swore All Those Who Doubted Me Would Be Denied Salvation.. I Slur The Devils Words and Praise Hate In Procastination.. As My Temper Enrages My Eyes Roll Into The Back Of Head.. I Can Feel The Evil Building Up Wit Every Negative Thing Said.. My Arms Transform Into Crucifix's With Sacred Subscriptures.. The Oppresion, I Was The Cause Of Everything In Those Pictures.. Known For The Blue-Print Of All Destructive Methods Known To Man.. Annihilate The Mankind On Earth Was The Devils Initial Plan.. He Takes Control Of My Celestrial Brain When I Am Not Focused.. Inflicts Pain For Pleasure, Places My Hands Around My Neck and Chokes It.. Till The Other Day When I Ate The Bible and Drank Holy Water.. Killed The Priest Cause My Mom Gave Him Head and I Caught Her.. The Demons Were Released Cause Satan Thought I Was Beyond Mental.. Knew From My Sins God Would No More Towards Me Be Sentimental.. For My Sins I Was Paralized From The Hip Down and Turned Blind.. So Now These Pills Will Have To Help Me Control My Troubled Mind.. ~R~ |
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05-20-04, 05:07 AM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 07E8 779C
Uppin On This Tight Ass Topical Battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-20-04, 04:13 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3A6D 6FF6
lol i cant vote but i if i could i would vote king
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05-20-04, 04:20 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E7E 4D00
*Swaying?* Must Be One Of Kingz D/R...
Look At His Rapperz Name...LoL.. Go Away You Fucking Herb.. ~R~ |
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05-20-04, 04:24 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3A6D 6FF6
im not one of king d/r i felt his spit was hotter then urs....bitch
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05-20-04, 04:30 PM
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: 068B E360
i thought kings was alot better, better story, structure and flow. It was tight.
restricted's shit was hot also, but i didnt feel it AS much. u know flow: king structur: king creativity: restricted ( fo sho ) flow: King vote king
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05-20-04, 04:31 PM
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IP: 7C6F 690C
yea dis was a nice topical both had diffrent stylez of doin it but i was feelin both
king-nice drop stayed on ur topic nice story nice flow vocab was off but yo shit stayed consistant thru out the verse bestline-u had alot but dis 1 stands I thought they had my friend in custody; turns out they got the wrong guy And my friend just says “Forget it man we got off, let’s just let him fry.” nicee worsteline-none juss vocab lacked but good enuff ~R~rated-nice drop vocab was excellent stayed on topic flow was thumbs up consistant flow bestline-My Arms Transform Into Crucifix's With Sacred Subscriptures.. The Oppresion, I Was The Cause Of Everything In Those Pictures.. nice worsteline-none eirthing on point r rated-overall verse gets a 9.1/10 king-overall verse gets a 8.9/10 winner-re$tricted
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05-20-04, 04:40 PM
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The New King Of New York
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IP: 9E83 C44F
Wow, both of y'all need to take a bow. Well, storyline, definately owned by King, very original, thought the wordplay was much simpler than Restricted's however, his flow was better too. Everything else was about equal. But your storyline killed it, so don't be ashamed, both of y'all did real good. Actually, after I read King's, I figured he won, but ~R~ came wit some really good wordplay, just really enjoyed both of them, but his a lil' more. Tight battle, niggaz need to stop sleepin' on this one.
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05-20-04, 07:53 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 6804 D41F
creativity r
flow tie both were good structure tie both could use alittle work ok im gonna give it 2 r his story vocab and flow was better good verses from both
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05-21-04, 05:54 AM
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Skadoosh!
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IP: 41A0 7B80
aight playaz
keep these votes comin tight battle Re$TricTed and yo whitey man, quit followin me around dude chasin me like a rabbit...i must have carrots up my ass
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05-21-04, 08:51 AM
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GrOwN aSs MaN
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IP: C1DA C961
I’m just your average guy, I have always took life as it comes
But then my world was rocked like a used up set of drums The new guy on the block arrived moving into the street next door Then that night we hooked up right outside the liquor store ^^ good story telling so far I See Shadows That Scream and Move When My Eyes Are Closed.. Problems That Are Undefined, Not Even My Psychotrist Knows.. My Brain Waves Shift In A Zig-Zagged Directional Form.. Since I Was Born My Reality Has Been Torn In A Devilish Core.. ^^ Nice descriptive imagery... I see this is a battle between Story telling (King) and Imagery (Res) hmm...let's see who'll win I thought they had my friend in custody; turns out they got the wrong guy And my friend just says “Forget it man we got off, let’s just let him fry.” But that is not the kind of person I am, I can not be forced to live a lie So it looks like my friends going down for murder and me as his ally. ^^ nice lyrics in terms of abstract imagery...good story telling The Demons Were Released Cause Satan Thought I Was Beyond Mental.. Knew From My Sins God Would No More Towards Me Be Sentimental.. For My Sins I Was Paralized From The Hip Down and Turned Blind.. So Now These Pills Will Have To Help Me Control My Troubled Mind.. ^^ once again...very nice imagery DAMN...this is tough..it's hard to vote because both are excellent in their own rite hmm Flow RES RHyming Tie Vocab Res Lyrics Tie So i have to go with RES. 1...premium on imagery and he took it there |
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