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05-16-04, 10:05 PM | #1 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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**Championship match** kingz(champ) vs. enygma
IP: 275E DC37
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern check in by wedsday verses due by thrusday votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse bar limits: 4 line min. 30 line max.
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05-17-04, 02:42 AM | #2 | ||||||
Street Royal-T
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IP: 08FE 4ABA
check
its on
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05-17-04, 01:13 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: EE6F A14C
Check.....a rematch already.......just to let you know, I plan to skull drag you this time.
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05-19-04, 12:59 PM | #4 | ||||
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IP: 3499 9DC2
It's over......
Kingz, your reign is over...you're in the eye of the storm This champ is publicly fucked...now he can rely on his porn I'll put you over my knee and leave your ass abused Win?.....C'mon....seems like he already plans to lose Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch Lets face it, I’m diss regarded while you’re just plain old disregarded He’s bout to drop some hot shit…my mistake, the kid just farted I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head Or I could run up in your spot…..with two guns a blazing And you’ll be screaming JESUS CHRIST when I bring your crew suffocation And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit Kingz battles like he fucks……..he just ain’t up to it Cause like your crew predicts…...dawg, you just blue it
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05-19-04, 01:19 PM | #5 | |||
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch
But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch ^ Very Clever . . Awaits for kings.
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05-21-04, 06:07 AM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 2D46 820F
you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef this aint an 'Enigma'...you aint no 'man of mystery' your punches go no 'powers'...they jus dont do shit to me u jus started audio...but ya 'hot shit' has never been heard i'll disorientate you son...leaving your deadly visionz blurred u aint earning cash money...you need a 'buc'...so go south like Luda ya reputation came from...ya own 'word of mouf' check his propaganda...like Rakim says he's got lots of 'soul' i'll leave ya 'mind and body' in paralysis...you've jus lost all control this is the second time i have had to murder you..its getting old like ya mum in ya avatar...but i believe thats already been told (line 2) its played...jus like ya wholse verse...like you sed 'its over' i've beat ya...like roc did nas ....so jus call me J Hova Blueprint Baby
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05-21-04, 08:26 AM | #7 | |||
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you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief
as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef LMAO . . I honestly thought kingz won . . but no - show . . . You posted on friday.
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05-21-04, 08:41 AM | #8 | ||||||
Street Royal-T
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IP: 2D46 820F
i had my verse dun but my comp didnt work - the internet wudnt work, it cudnt be helped. i was like 10 hours late, u can let off surely?
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05-21-04, 10:54 AM | #9 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 41A0 7B80
Kingz, your reign is over...you're in the eye of the storm
This champ is publicly fucked...now he can rely on his porn 7...nice opener, gud punch but pretty basic vocab. I'll put you over my knee and leave your ass abused Win?.....C'mon....seems like he already plans to lose 7...gud line, nice meta in the first line. Personals about your crew?...yeah I could send a bunch But I could type like this and you still wouldn't get the punch 6...average punch, wasn't really a strong diss. Lets face it, I’m diss regarded while you’re just plain old disregarded He’s bout to drop some hot shit…my mistake, the kid just farted 8...LMFAO!! Funny shit man funny shit!! I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head 6...not really gud, pretty basic i think. Or I could run up in your spot…..with two guns a blazing And you’ll be screaming JESUS CHRIST when I bring your crew suffocation 7...nice punch, pretty average vocabs. And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit 9...SICK!! Best line u spit straight up!! Kingz battles like he fucks……..he just ain’t up to it Cause like your crew predicts…...dawg, you just blue it 6...pretty weak closer!! you say your 'gangstarr'..but ya 'skillz' got me in disbelief as ya avatar shows...ya got ya mum handling ya beef 9...LMFAO!! Funny as hell, one sick ass opener!! this aint an 'Enigma'...you aint no 'man of mystery' your punches go no 'powers'...they jus dont do shit to me 7...aight punch, first line was better i think. u jus started audio...but ya 'hot shit' has never been heard i'll disorientate you son...leaving your deadly visionz blurred 7...nice punch again, pretty good personal Kingz. u aint earning cash money...you need a 'buc'...so go south like Luda ya reputation came from...ya own 'word of mouf' 7...gud punch again, nice wordplay in there. check his propaganda...like Rakim says he's got lots of 'soul' i'll leave ya 'mind and body' in paralysis...you've jus lost all control 6...pretty weak compared to ure other lines man!! this is the second time i have had to murder you..its getting old like ya mum in ya avatar...but i believe thats already been told (line 2) 7...nice punch, liked the way u linked back to the beginning!! its played...jus like ya wholse verse...like you sed 'its over' i've beat ya...like roc did nas ....so jus call me J Hova 7...nice closer, nowhere near as good as ure opener tho!! POINTS TOTALS enygma - 56/80 70% Kingz - 50/70 71% V/ - Kingz...just edged it!! |
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05-21-04, 11:15 AM | #10 | ||||
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IP: 8C87 A6B0
wtf?^
Engyma got this one I felt came decent, but often to corny or played engyma, I have to say, beat him..rather cleverly The Blueprint line was dopeness v/engyma
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05-21-04, 11:53 AM | #11 | ||||
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IP: 20B5 2D66
Doesn't really matter when he posted his verse.....lets go with the votes.....Ohh, by the way, If you looked at my avatar you would see that it is a man cooking on the grill. It was a pretty clever punch (the only one), but why use it twice?
Kingz - 1 Enygma - 1 *not to self....If I lose, bitch about the late drop*
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05-21-04, 12:00 PM | #12 | |||||
Still Sick
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IP: 8C87 A6B0
Quote:
shouldnt it be note*, and not not?
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05-21-04, 12:05 PM | #13 | ||||
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IP: 20B5 2D66
It was really just a joke.....I don't really care when he dropped. It is kinda suspicious that he always waits 'til the last minute probably trying to fix his verse of look for better personals or whatever.....I'm pretty confident that his verse was garbage and everyone will see it....
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05-21-04, 03:07 PM | #14 | |||||
retired.
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IP: 919D 9DA1
His verse was garbage, and the avatar is a dude handling burgers. Kinda ruined the punch for me, although it was still pretty nice the first time. not the second time. rest of verse = crap. no real nice punches, no wordplay or nice metas.
enygma had a couple nice concepts and some good punches. the blue print line.. i really liked the concept and wanted the punch to be nice, but the wording let it down. it was nice, but could have really won this easily for you. then you kinda grasped with your first card wordplay diss: " I’m known for the jack of hearts…..I’ll take you life with my pen And you could be the king of clubs……with a knife in your head" ^ boo-urns. " And what the fuck did you Blueprint? There's no need to conceal it A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit" ^ far better. your closer was pretty decent. enygma wins hands down for better wordplay and punches.
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05-21-04, 09:55 PM | #15 | |||||||
i changed my title !!
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IP: 275E DC37
just cause i don't wanna see a no show in the title match ands it's my fault for the threads being left open i'm a let this go and on to the vote
breakdown for enygma: flow:straight flow worked through the whole peice 7/10 volcabretty good i've seen better in past title matches though 6/10 punches:some pretty good personals best line,"A crew with Kingz and a Jack., no wonder they're easy to deal wit" good job 7/10 overall:20/30 pretty good verse breakdown for kingz: flow:nice feeling this through the whole peice 7/10 volcab:good use edged enygma here 7/10 punches:a bigger amount of punches then enygma had and a solid quality of them in the entire peice best line,"like Luda ya reputation came from...ya own 'word of mouf'" good job 8/10 overall:22/30 vote--kingz took this just a notch above enygma
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