No crew votes
no d/r votes
5 votes win battle
3-0 KO
8 line min
12 lines max


Check in due:15 mins
Verse due 1hr

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Check check. Have mine in a bit. Good luck homey..

Check it heres my verse. Good luck to you dude. Here it goes.

Im going to exclude ya rhymes, excuse ya mind, so i can abuse ya lines, I amuse ya kind, Throwin ruffa punches then you shootin a nine!
The only way youll reach '20-20' is ya 'vission', my missions to seek and destroy, reach my peek and explode, stop ya breathin and meet tha mode.
your being 'scalped' battlin me you 'lost ya brain', 'Malibus most wanted' was the closest you been to a 'gang' you wouldn't pack a punch if you was tang.
this 'bitch' is more 'pussy' then a 'clitarous', I'll spit venomous lines leavin ya shakin nervous like singin as Elvis!
Facing anyone? thats why double losses are tracin, pacin time, tell me dude how my ass be tastin? this verse im fuckin wastin!
This kid's sadda then a fat old 9 yr old rolin a cigarette, sweet strolin till you soakin wet, kid you only braggin.. you done provoakin yet?


6 bars were you at kid. Let's get it poppin in dis bitch.

i see this is ya first battle, and your gonna be history//
its easily seen you against me is an automatic victory//
physics you'll never get any pussy you'll always stay a virgin//
and u couldnt get dome even if you was a brain surgeon//
you say you're hott, but it aint ya skills its ya temperature//
you think u rappin like a vet when really your an amature//
i'll shoot your elbows and dare ya to throw a punch//
fit ya back wit "broad bars" that'll make you grow a hunch//
I'll short circuit ya fuse before you even have time to switch ya flow//
an itch below, better check that, at your age pubes are a bitch to grow//

the one

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Ma BoI Is SiCk WiT It....SoRrY FoR FrEe-PoStIn....GoOd BaTtLe BoTh Of YoU

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

iight. lets get some votes in this bitch. Nice verse.

God damn. Let's get some votes people. This shit been up fo atleast an hour.

Uppin. People dont sleep on this shit. Start votin!

Why does this keep gettin on tha second page. Mods dont get madd i just want it to be seen. Delete all my post befo this one.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125767
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...357#post1304357

ok im gonna give it 2 cam with a better struture and punches botha had good flow both need 2 work on vocab and personals

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Killa Cam
Best Line-Was Ya Closer...
Worst Was Ya Opener
Overall Liked Ya Verse Nice Punches......Flow

Physics
I Cant Really Say Any Good Lines Cuz Ya Structure Was Off.....But Nice Flow

OVERALL KILLA

KillaCamFlow/u] Vs [u]Physics
Opener~ Phy
Punches~ Killa
Structure~ Killa
Multi's~ Phy
Meta's~ Draw
Humor~ None
Vocab~ Killa
WordPlay~ Killa
Complexity~ Phy

Overall Vote KillaCamFlow...5... Physics...4...

0-3 your lead. Nicely done. Keep em comin people!!