12 Lines (6 BaRz)
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Spit By Monday...

Tha "Only" way dis cat "Cummin Hard" is if a "Ghost Write His Lyrics"
Ya~a "Lonely" fucked up "Limp Retard" who couldent give "Beef" only "Frozen Chicken Fillets"
Like "Supermarket Attendent's" ya always "Cheatin Ya Shelf" (self)
Spittin at~a "Mirror" is tha "Only" time ya "Beatin Ya Self"
A "Flip Ya Life Around" now tha "Future's" lookin "Straight"
Then~a "Dip Ya Up 'n' Down" eat ya of ma "Plate"
Ya "Grip On To Ma Crown" like its time ta "Masterbate"
I pop~a "Clip In Ya Town" thats tha "End" ov ya "State"
I'll "Rip Ya Eyes Out" well ya still "Think How Ya Lost Site"
Replace tha "Sockets" with ya "Testicles" that'll look "Tight"
"Nibble" off tha "Eye Lids" so ya carnt "Blink" all "Night"
"Dribble" out~a "Syllable" but ya cant "Drink" ma rhymes, tho ya could be "Oriental" bitch, but ya still couldent get a rap "Korea" iight

..........uppin for you verse...........

this bitch is comin up to me like i'm a pussy, wrong move kid
how do you expect to be better when ya linez be with limbs
that's right you sik, cauze ya flow is irritable
but it's harmless to me, my retaliation be my medicine pill
you a rookie who doezn't know how to rap yet
you tell ya friendz to wryte'em, that's why you overdebt
i'ma a mailman da way i deliver murderous threatz
that's my verse, fuck da sun cauze i make you wanna sweat
you should've tried harder cauze i got that defense of yours overshadowed
now you beggin me to stop, wish you waz da luckiest man like micky mantle
you be gettin fucked all da time like a wife and i ain't lyin
you be raped and done, now you know never underestimate a new york state of mind

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AAight..

$ik-that was a bad verse man none of it made cence, but you did have good vocab.
and work on your set up and flow alot more..

NY-that was an aaight verse man good set up but very few punches, you made it all come togeather in a few lines, but now try to add some metas. and use more than two rhymin words..

V/NY

aaight i did it for you now you do it for me PLEASE DONT SLEEP ON DIS.. its on me
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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

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..........0-1 NY.........uppin for more votes.....

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Aight, $ik, you really need to work on your flow. Your vocab was ok, but you butchered your flow to pieces so you should work on that.
NY, i wasnt really feelin your flow but your had some decent punches and everything else was goos enough for you to take this one.

you tell ya friendz to wryte'em, that's why you overdebt
i'ma a mailman da way i deliver murderous threatz
^^Best Line^^

PS
$IK, im settin up our battle so hit that up when you see it cause you spittin first

This one goes to NY

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Win #3 - Thug Nation; 5-0
Win #4 - Cityboi; 5-1
Win #5 - $ik; 5-0
Win #6 - BillyGunz; 5-0

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