10-15 lines max you spit first

bitch your a newb how u call yourself class a
fuck with red dot the ground is where u'll lay
cause im the realest mc' here what can i say
i throw punches so hard i'll bust your face
man you battle me your such a disgrace
your dick so small cant even make penetration
its called puberty nothing comes out with ur ejaculation
bitch ur rhymes so sick they throw u in juve dont drop the soap
mess around and get molested by john paul the pope
man this battle is done ur just a newb

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

are you gonna spit back or what.... i want you to hurry up so i can get some votin on this

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

Reddot06 i aint ever heard of cuz your rhyme aint shit no drop lines unreleistic shit
Are crush and destroy your no punches simply rhymeing with good timeing and pure rhymeing

Your names worst than your rhymeing i felt like crying or dieing see that
Cuz lets cut the crap this battles as good as done ive just KO'd this chump

You wanna talk bout my dick you sure you ain't faggot?little maggot are squash you
someday soon your gonna relise your raps are crap so there aint no way your winning this battle

lets end this here cuz this shit is over what a push over no punch loser
this guys a loser and the battle almost done cuz ive left this guy crying on his knees

you say im a newb id rather be that than a guy from a place called butler
Ive just rushed and crushed you try coming back in a year or two

your shit didnt even rhyme how bout you try another time class a

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record~9-2 (6 ko'z)

aight this was an easy decision class a u made no sense and u didnt even rhyme reddot ur stuff was good but keep practicin like u been doin u gettin better
v/reddot

my vote goes to reddot cause his rhymed and he had structure.

Class E excuse i mean Class A was just whack the structure was nasty, ugly

u need to work on that and word play, metaphors

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STAND UP

Wow Reddot Had Better Everything No Explanation Needed
Class Is Ass

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ok basically Class A didn't rhyme & that throws off the entire verse.....

Reddot06 you had better rhymes, structure well basically everything
was better in your verse than in Class A'z

vote goes to Reddot06

do me a favor & drop a honest vote on my battle like I did on your's:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126013

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OH I ALMOST FORGOT....RETURN THE FAVOR PLZ
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126378
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125426

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hands down reddot held it down da otha cat wuz strugglin wit his ryhmes and didn't know wut he wuz tryin 2 attain

both verses need work
punches could have used more similies or metaphores
if i could vote it would be reddot tho, his flow and punches were better, please vote on this.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126383