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.::N-Sight::. 5 100.00%
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Old 05-25-04, 01:27 AM   #1
.::N-Sight::.
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N-SIGHT .::\\V//::. Lil-trip

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Old 05-25-04, 01:47 AM   #2
Lil-trip
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aight...

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The only shit tite, is when you close yo mouth durin a freestyle fight
Dogg it aint cus yo white, but fisher price shouldnt be handin tikes mics
0.5grams is all you weigh i jus need a light, my gun is the fire ready to Ignite
I got pussy "N-sight" n it aint feelin right, you chose "Heads" i chose Life

Mova ova you wont ever have a carer like H.O.V.A, only if you mean bein ova
cus while im spittin this shit soba, your spreadin 14 cheeks playin Red-Rova
I didnt start spittin or learned to freestyle, after poppin in the DVD of 8-mile
Im content wit my Freestyle, like lloyd is makin both yo [Pussy-Lips] Smile

Dont listen to Britney n jus "Do it again", you more of n Em Feminine
youll never be n M-A-N, funnel that shit up n enjoy a mixed up [Acronym]
I kno i leave you inspiried but dogg retire, you the joker or more the squire
Cus how can you take yo lines like a tampon n admire, after its wet n expired

Quit wit yo frontin thinkin yo somethin, bitches like you come a dime a dozen
death is comin, you tryin to be so dark its easier if you get cooked n a oven
the way im spittin now i deserve to be paid, n im makin yo name in vain
if I was a mixed drink of Orange Juice, i guess in a [Minute I was Made]...

Holla back
 
Old 05-25-04, 03:14 AM   #3
.::N-Sight::.
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**walks in..sizes up comp..dies laughing**
mhuahahahaaaaaaaaa

Let's do dis..



First Off,

Lil Trip is a Lil bitch..my radar shows that he's just a lil BLIP..-
Strip ur whole face off for a lil LIP..how u rippin' me askin' for a lil Tip..-
Kid, I'll give u one real quick..quit pickin' battles you can NOT win..-
Ur a joke, ur flow is rotten..in about 5 votes u'll be gone AND forgotten..-
I could stop now but the rules say..10 lines the minimum, I'm bendin' him..-
If 'wackness is no kin to him'..they're best friends, that's why it's defendin' him..-
Ur punches come at me in SLO-MO..slim, I'm too swift for them to hit home..-
I could make you part of 'Pimp's Voting Ring' you..still couldn't get votes..-*
Ur possibly the worst rapper that's crossed me..nigga, I'm quite ravenous..-
Another body for the pile up..any and all 'beef left' is for the scavengers..-
Cuz I'm damagin' you amateur..haven't ya had enough of me stabbin' ya..-
PRESENTING: A CLASSIC vs. WACK SHIT..
.................................................. ...y'all figure out who "be which" like Tabitha..-**



Get the FUCK outta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuur!
 
Old 05-25-04, 03:58 AM   #4
~Babylon~
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this battle was kinda close cause of the way you both used multies in the same way..........
but when it came to punches n - sight won this his punches were a little more thought out......
and the stucters were diffrent but neither was any beter than the other I dont like that spacin' in between every few lines........
but I just thought that n -sights punches hit alot harder......
so my vote goes to n-sight........

vote........n-sight..........

one love..........
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Old 05-25-04, 04:00 AM   #5
Proliphik
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A good battle is one where two guys spit hot lyrics and one is marginally better than the other. IMHO only one guy was spitting decent lyrics (not his best shyt, but frankly it didn't need to be)

Critique:
Lil Trip
Opener: 1/5
Flow: 1/5
Personals: 1/5
Multis: 2/5
Finisher: 1/5

N-Sight
Opener: 2/5
Flow: 2/5
Personals:2.5/5 (you were saved by the "If 'wackness is no kin to him'..they're best friends, that's why it's defendin' him..' line)
Multis: 2/5
Finisher: 3/5

My Vote?

N-Sight


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Old 05-25-04, 04:01 AM   #6
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lil trip- you came kinda weak dawg,,punches were simple and basic
ur structure was ehhh,and ur flow well i wasn't feelin it dawg....you need to elevate man...

n-sight-i didnt like ur structure either it was boo boo,ur punches were nice,and ur flow was coo,you had a lil wittieness and creativity in your verse...and n-sight gets this battle for harder punches

v/n-sight
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Old 05-25-04, 04:09 AM   #7
Mad Dog
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Aight peeps we up in here today to witness the battle between N-Sight & Lil Tip let me analyse.

Lil Tip: Put in an ok verse had good disses and ok wordplay most of ur lines were stretched and flow was a lil off it was an ok verse

Fav line:
The only shit tite, is when you close yo mouth durin a freestyle fight
Dogg it aint cus yo white, but fisher price shouldnt be handin tikes mics < Nice opener

Worst line:
the way im spittin now i deserve to be paid, n im makin yo name in vain
if I was a mixed drink of Orange Juice, i guess in a [Minute I was Made]... <weak self glory for a closer na na

N-Sight: Wasnt ur best but still a good verse nice wordplay verses were readable and less stretched thsn lil's...Used decent punches and came harder in this

Fav Line:
Cuz I'm damagin' you amateur..haven't ya had enough of me stabbin' ya..-
PRESENTING: A CLASSIC vs. WACK SHIT..
.................................................. ...y'all figure out who "be which" like Tabitha..-**

/\ Thought it was funny usin Bewitched

Worst line:
Ur possibly the worst rapper that's crossed me..nigga, I'm quite ravenous..-
Another body for the pile up..any and all 'beef left' is for the scavengers..-

/\ werent feelin it much not really a punch

V/N-Sight: Came harder and had more experience to scrap out a win
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Old 05-25-04, 08:23 AM   #8
Killah Bwoy
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Yeah Yea.....N-sight got this....im out....lol j/p

N-sight your shit was pretty nice but i dont think i saw any punches..all personals this was an aiight battle ive seen you do much better but you still merked this kid..you gettin up there with the big dawgs mayn...i say stop battlin weak kids like lil trip and hit the elevated and battle some bigger katz like accomp or me or L.I or..flow intelligent could be considered as a big kat LOL but jea do u

lil trip: u got potential i give u that...but u gotta stop makin ur verses look weak ur structure is weak instead of u puttin sumthin like
"i am going to kill you and then i am going to chop you up quick" Put
I'lL KILL YOU BITCH AND CHOP YOU UP QUICK" see the different emotions jus keep doin you though i got respect for u but up ya game dawg check out the EFL and see how its done

vote: N-SIght
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Old 05-25-04, 08:30 AM   #9
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aiight its like this
Lil Trip...man ya vocab could be decent but you fail to word ya shit properly...
and ya punchlines start off straight...I mean I be excited readin it...then it just goes whack....
Example...Mova ova you wont ever have a carer like H.O.V.A, only if you mean bein ova
cus while im spittin this shit soba, your spreadin 14 cheeks playin Red-Rova
^^Wtf?!?that last line was whack and homo as hell fam...
PUnches-4/10
Flow-5/10
Metaphors-4/10
Overall-4/10....elevate son


N-Sight....it was an aiight battle...but I can telll you didnt really put effort into it fam...and I wouldn't either...
Punches....they was aiight....more metaphors than punches though.But this punch right here sealed it...
I could stop now but the rules say..10 lines the minimum, I'm bendin' him..-
If 'wackness is no kin to him'..they're best friends, that's why it's defendin' him..-
^^^^LMFAO....
Metaphors were often and cleaver...best one?
Ur punches come at me in SLO-MO..slim, I'm too swift for them to hit home..-
I could make you part of 'Pimp's Voting Ring' you..still couldn't get votes..-*
^^^whoa!thats all Im a say
Punches-7/10
Metaphors-8/10
Flow-8/10
Overall-8/10
my vote goes to N-Sight
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