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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Its about time...hahahaha

Enyg.....u ready to do this homey.

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What's good? Lets get this shit cracking..........checking in

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I'm bored.....here's a quick 12 for ya

You have no leverage in this battle...can't even crank the fulcrum
One look at his avi and you can tell that he ain't spanking no one
Deadly Vision is blind to the fact that I made his eye big
Only reason he's heard of....is cause his name's in my sig
Talks about the land of the sacred like he's been livin it since birth
But the only Mecca you seeing....is printed on your shirt
Deadly Vision ain't a vet....he still constantly developing
And he jumps more crews than someone robbin Tom and Penelope
Why gamble with your garbage....I bet it gets tossed
Must got lots of alias'....he's only Deadly When Crossed
I'm stomping this cat so much....my fucking feet hurt
Now it's back to pussy for you...
...time for another Re-Birth

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hot drop, awaiting deadly visions

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Hahaha.........I taught u should know me betta...enygma...

Queereye Consume Ur Thoughtz Like Wit My Nose Wen Coke-Cane Is Broke...
This Enigmatic Bitch "Talks More Shit" Then When My "Anus-Spoke"...
U lost tittle to Kingz?I Aint Even Gotta Battle Kid You I'll Let The Seiko-Win...
And Ya Must Be Lookin To Blow Ya "Back-Out" again Becuz Ya "Front-In..
First you never commited a cryme, u dont even rhyme and u a sindacate?..
How u gonna be dope audio, and u sound like "she bangs dude" fuckin illerate..
Cookin up some Hot Shit?Goin NoWhere Wit Ur Shit Betta Bite-Pac's-Battle...
Deleted his Pic Faggot!! A White kid tryin to Rap In Black-Legend's-Shadow..
Crhyme Sin?Ya'll Style's Like "Albino's In Tha Dark" Ya Shits "Plain-Ta-See"...
Im Like A Person,Already Commited Suicide None ya''ll Cant Hang-With-Me..
Damn Ya Moms Made A Mistake U Should Be The Poster Boy For Birth Control..
Trailer trash Pack All Ya Bags And Smash Ya Flow Smoke U Quick Like Hash And Dro..

..Switch Style Finisher..

Death is the Least of the Fees-Givin when I Release These Heat-Writtens /
The ‘Third’ is to know why This Kid Enygma losses Cuz he about 2 Cease-Livin/
Fuck You And Your crew Should Be Signed To "Faggot record" Cuz Ya'll "Suck-In-A-Bad-Way"/
And Face It You Couldnt "Catch-A-'W' If You Was The "Center-Base-Ball-Player" For "n'W'a"/

Blah!!!

Quick shit...................Keep it Gully.

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wow good battle

flow-deadly
structure-enyg
opener-Tie
closer-Deadly
punches-deadly
personals-deadly
creativity-enyg
enjoyment-both

enygma's best lines

You have no leverage in this battle...can't even crank the fulcrum
One look at his avi and you can tell that he ain't spanking no one
Deadly Vision is blind to the fact that I made his eye big
Only reason he's heard of....is cause his name's in my sig


not a bad verse but you still could elevate.....
developing and Penelope dont rhyme man......you need to work on that shit......your punches could hit harder and you could reword them alot more so that they stick better......your personals lacked and i didnt really like your flow......keep elevating man


deadlyvision's best lines

Cookin up some Hot Shit?Goin NoWhere Wit Ur Shit Betta Bite-Pac's-Battle...
Deleted his Pic Faggot!! A White kid tryin to Rap In Black-Legend's-Shadow..
Crhyme Sin?Ya'll Style's Like "Albino's In Tha Dark" Ya Shits "Plain-Ta-See"...
Im Like A Person,Already Commited Suicide None ya''ll Cant Hang-With-Me..

good verse but not your best.....
I liked your personals they was simple but complex at the same time......they hit hard and they stuck......could use a lil bit of rewording but sall good.......your flow was good but i didnt really like your structure....but its different for this site so not many people will probably like it.....keep it up man good verse

v/deadlyvision

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Aight, break it down like this:

Punches: Deadly. Punches was just more numerous and harder hittin'
Flow/Structure: Enygma, Deadly stretched and went off a coupla parts
Creativity: About even, Deadly changed styles, but I don't like the recycled opener, so even
Personals: Enygma. Tom and Penelope was ill
Multis: Deadly
Vocab: Enygma, a bit better
Opener: Damn, Deadly's was hotter, but recylced. Enygma's was still pretty good though.
Closer: Enygma. Wasn't feelin' the NWA line.

Overall, madd close, two pretty good mcz goin' at it, but I think Enygma edged him slightly. Just try to spit fresh Deadly.

Vote/ Enygma
~CJ~

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aight lets get this going

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ight check

enygma your opener was decent good wordplay just punch and personal didnt really land that hard to me your closer again decent just didnt fell that it didnt hit that hard and overall your verse was consitent with personals and kept punchs comin in every set some weak an some where nice the mecca on your shirt line was prolly the best pretty nice wordplay overall lil above average verse

deadlyv your opener was pretty nice i thought good wordplay and creative nice play off his name on that and your closer was sick lmao damn tight shit creative as hell an the rest of your verse was same as enygmas consitent punchs in every set and constent personals some where weak but the majority of your punchs where pretty nice to me

vote dv

hot battle by both dv had stronger punchs i felt just my oppinion

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DV - 3
Enygma - 1

Lets get some votes from people that understand a good verse......

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I just realized people aren't getting my closer......LOL. What a bunch of herbs. I should have wrote it like this...."Back To Pussy" for you time for another "ReBirth"(Check his sig)......Maybe you still wouldn't have gotten it but the " would have made you think it sounded cool......fuckin newbs

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v/ enygma.

Less played.. harder punches.. personals on point thruout.. some lines stood out.. others were mediocre.. but you were pretty much consistant an hit more effectively.. DV.. iv seen the opener before.. the concept at least.. your lines were mad stretched an made it trickier to follow.. it rhymed ok an flowed to an extent but was still too long.. the only personals you used were played or obvious.. nothin` new in the whole verse.. dissapointed.

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aiight fam break down

enygma: your shit was hot..good flow..i dont think i saw any multi's ...good vocab....good structure...nicely worded...some wordplay.....your shit was nice fam sick some shit i ddint get..you should of showed a link or evidence to make it more clearer...nice

43/50

dV: nice shit i think you hit harder fam..i liked ur structure and you had sick punches and meta''s your didnt fall off braggin bout urself u stayed dissin him...ok word play..good vocab..jus work on the way u word things sometimes..it can change the difference between a weak punch and a good punch..feel me but nice shit
44.5/50

vote: DV

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