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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

In.


This prick dont work without the net like an acrobat...

Like a 'still-born baby' you need to 'get yourself a life',
Similar to Jackson 5 - get rid of the Mike!(mic).
A 'sinking' style now your stuck because i cant take these cunts serious,
Leave you like 'girls at that time of the month'...... Period.

Hehe.

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

This Cat About To Be Merked......Watch for the wordplay

Choke On Unspoken Words In Fear Of Throat Cutta/Gloat Ya Broke Ass Verbs When Ya Mutter Stuttas/
(Stuttas=studders)
'Grease Balls' Only Pussy From Gutter Sluts/So You Undastand Why We Call Rookie 'Butternuts'//
(Grease - Butter and Balls - Nuts)
Butt Putter Fill Ya Guts Touch Ya Nutter Butter 'n' Clutter Seamen In Ya Stomach Hut/
(Nuttter Butter=Ya Shit/crap)
Dis Mutts Thoughts Be Utter Smut/ Unlucky Rut Streak Cuz I Sewed Ya Mouth Shut/
Ya Game Gone South But Im Movin Up/ Keepin Peeps Awake Like They Slurpin They Coffee Cup/
(Awake- Coffee Keeps ya awake)

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Lines Crush Ya 'n' Make Ya Appendix Burst In Ya Nutsack, Ya Rhymes Are Crap So I Flush You Like Ya Came From An Ass Crack/

Fourmost aka Verb

yo guys deffintly need to work on strucher both of you

Like a 'still-born baby' you need to 'get yourself a life',
Similar to Jackson 5 - get rid of the Mike!(mic).
A 'sinking' style now your stuck because i cant take these cunts serious,
Leave you like 'girls at that time of the month'...... Period.

/\ass four lines i eveer read/\

this should have been strait up punchline you neeed to both work on those alot i mean alot plus no personal no nothing the only line that sticks out asa good one is the line about the coffee cup

both of you need to take time to elevate ok

v/formost for the one liner

dont forget to return the favor link is in the sig toonice one

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both verses were kinda weak...no personals.....very weak punches.....
ok structure/flow from both
gonna give this to fourmost...he had multis n beta wordplay/creativity
both need 2 come a lot harder/up creativity/metas/multies/punches/personals/wordplay...everything needs elevation...

vote-fourmost

WTF???

5 lines, and whass the fuck going on wit ur verse structure...??

Too many dickriders on this site.

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can any of ya vote on my battle against kash thanx

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5 lines is a wierd number to spitt for.... Ayo... i was feelin both ya verses... both flow and punch wise,,, but seroiusly... where the fuck are the personals??? none of u had em.... cud of been some pre-written shit.... but anyway... since im going for the punches since.. flow./.. i think u were tied.... Fourmost got this by a hair.. cause that mike line was hott... also... if it says no stretching.. stretch ya bars to make some nice punches... include more multis.. cause thats whut i seen missing in both verses....
Anyway good battle

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Vote: 4

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Net ReCoRd===== 19-0-8
rapbattle record== 1-0-1

ian

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10
Humor 7/10

four

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 8/10
Humor 7/10

v/ Four

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ok lets see both lyrics were iight but I have to go with four he had a kick ass intry and his closure put this shit away. but add personels but anywho four got this one.