you know the rules 6 lines only etc.......

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the young pimps 1st battle so youll be the first victim
the kid get more head than monica and bill clinton
im a pimp so ill beat you like im iceberg slim
ill stomp all over you like a new pair of tims
now you mad that the kids here and im rippin tracks
cause ill roll like mcdonalds i stay with a big mac

to tell the truth homey to you my rhymes are superior//
stuff you in a car to die as if you was the interior//
imma hit chu up with some superior to you wordplay //
bash your skull you'll have text wounds today//
you not tight you the whackest thing since MC AK//
put up trashy beats & your the one thrown-away//

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ok we both dropped uppin 4 votes don't sleep on this people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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to tell the truth homey to you my rhymes are superior//
stuff you in a car to die as if you was the interior//
imma hit chu up with something superior to you.wordplay //
bash your skull you'll have text wounds today//
you not tight you the whackest thing since MC AK//
put up trashy beats & your the one thrown-away//

screwed up a lil

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forgot to put the "thing" in something......................................... ..........

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vote Immortal_Souljah04 .......

he had better lines.........young u need 2 elev8........

but if this is ur "first battle" like u say.....u'll get a lot better long the way!

h0lla..
& young if u don't like the vote....................set it up....

theres not really much 2 explain....

vote=Immortal_Souljah04

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SPINN

FOLK

my AK smiles @ slobks

Immortal_Souljah04 took this easily. better verse period, step up your lyrics though. nice punches and flow.young pimp you need to pimp so talent so you can say at least i got somethin. come on man you gotta come harder than that lil homey.return the fava: lyricalmethod vs. potential

vote=Immortal_Souljah04

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

v/Flames

you had better punches and i liked your structure better.......your flow was good and your punches hit hard........you couold use some rewording a little bit but other then that you should be allset.....you got some mad potential man......keep it up E-Z

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thanks for the votes ya'll well anywayz uppin 4 votes looking to murder
this cat in dis battle

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flames had better punches I agree. He had a good opening, and his closure was good so my vote goes to flames.