Aight, 5-10 bars
No d/r or Crew votes, hate neither
Ima spit first, see if I'm "worthy"
You gotta go 20 mins afta.

~CJ~ (Since you took all the fun right outta it)

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Triple_N the first one killed in the Next chapter of Jay,
Here's a Triple_N, beat me, Never, No-how, No-way,
Yeah you beat me once, you must have big balls,
You talk madd shit, and still carry dick-riders and all,
Should turn your back on the game, need to stop frontin',
I see your lines is madd long, compensatin' for sometin'?
You failin' this course, stay for help once class is over,
Put on a yamica, & stop cryin' about gettn' passed-over,
It's CJ, different name, same game elevate cause you still lame,
Recurrin' theme? I stay servin' niggaz, you just part of da refrain.

~CJ~

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Man you called me out for that shit!!!...this is gon be sadder than I thought

Ya rhymes are named incinerator, they full of more shit than horse stables
Those shitty lyrics wouldn't be "current" even if they were "electric cables"
U was country Jay, but u dropped cuz ya rec shows u were constantly beat
Now u called "Raw Material" cuz ya rhymes generate no heat in da street
This nigga stay claimin' thug, but u ain't street jus cuz u tightly hold a mic
This bitch ain't street, the only hood he's seen was made by "nike"
I spit raw, punches always connect wit ya jaw, cuz they colder than winter
Ya wack ass, couldn't properly dispatch rhymes from a "mission control center"
Cuz you nothin more than a fake nigga that "street dreams" more than "fab"
Fact is u couldn't make one hard punch even if u wrote it in "Bruce Banners lab"

Sorry I had to rip ya so bad, but I didn't want to leave any chance of you winning!

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Damn...

Triple_N: 8/10
Hot Shit Right There, I Think That's The Hottest Shit You Have Dropped. Nice Metaphors and Punches In There. Personals and Everything..Damn. Your Flow Was Decent...But Your Punches Were Hot.

Raw Material: 6/10
Your Punches Were Aight But Didn't Match Triple_Ns'. Your Flow Was Aight, You Had Sum Personals and Your Metas Were Good. But Triple Just Took Everything You Spit To Another Level.

Vote - Triple_N

~R~

word...uppin for FAM...nice creative verse dawg


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You people need to learn what makes a good verse......Creative punches, personals, and flow should be all that you base your votes on, and in my eyes, Raw Material took all of these catagories......

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Triple_N better verse period. Raw Material you got murked. mainly b/c your lines were mad short. Triple_N you spit some hott punches and personals. nice floe, next time just tighten up on the bullshit lines though. just get st8 to the point. Raw Material even if your lines were longer you still lacked punches dawg. no hard fellings but that verse was doo doo. step it up. and i though you were a vet. return the fava.

vote=Triple_N

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

I can't vote...but I absolutely disagree with ENYGMA...Raw's verse was elementary compared to Triples...and I ain't sayin that cuz he crew...it's fact


Tripled punches were way more complex and creative...

The only meta Raw had was the word YAMICA

DQ the B/S vote kid cant evan Explain Himself that is D/R.

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^^ If thats bull shit then Enygmas vote is BULL SHIT cuz its the same thing



ugh...u people suck

No it isnt he Didnt Contridict Himself.

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a yo wuts good nigga dis dat nigga black haze

aiight check this..

raw material: your shit was aiight dawg...basic punches.....no multi's no meta's ok vocab..good flow...good structure..your shit was aiight but it didnt come hard enuff i think you worded it soft..which gave him the advanage

triple: nice shit dawg..your lines were pretty long but it was sick..i was feelin your lines..and you stayed consistant you didnt fall off... that street dreams line was sick fam fo real..i was likin that shit and your punches hit hard..good metas good multi's ok vocab..keep it up

vote: triple

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