deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

Checckin in...


And Rememba ma name iz cHAnge'd

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 iight 1

DAMN Im battlin him lol

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Free Agent

you're a joke kid...i know you're alter ego was fucking banned...you little bitch...

what the fuck i'm fucking 5 and 2 battling this nobody...this leagues WEAK

check...get ready to get merked newb

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Who The Fuck Doesint KNo i got banned for the last time im postin be fore i spit


OK well i might lose but im allready 2-0 thaz not bad so SHUt tHE fuck up

Jpoll u used 2 dick ride me

ooh yo can u PLz Coem Vote on this battle plz plz man dude thanx now u talkin all dat shit i might lose i'll admit it but shit letz see if u can bakk this shit up im not that bad Fuckin dumb Bitch

peace

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Free Agent

when?...when? that's bullshit...you're a bitch...i don't dick ride...because i actually have skill...

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IGht HERes my Spit





Yo This Kids Flowz More Whack Then a Fuck'D up Re-Tard...
If Jpoll Packe'd a 12 Gauge in his punches still whouldint hit me hard...
I Flow Like no other make this Herb Wanna be Vet Re-Tire....
You Lack Like no other mc and only micheal jackson Fan's are In-spired...
Yo Ur Rhymes Are More Comedy then a nice Verse...
This Kid Just Got Kille'd call it early Ma' i think he need a Hearse....
So This is a Lesson For Jpoll u see any dick's u ride'em...
Im Suprised Those Whack Lines u Spit u didint Bite'em...
Pack This Whack Herb Make him Leave wit 6 Holes in his Chest...
For him this was a Accually Spit For me this just was a Season TEST...
I Advise you should Drop rapping go slack and drink some Booze...
You Lost All Your Skill if You Battled Vinman You Probley Whould Lose...
Yo Blue Print Kicked u out so u shouldint Even Rep This...
IF You Tried Out For Dark Knights You WHouldint Get Accepted...
Now Still Talk Shit i Think You JUST GOT MURKED By a N-0-0-B...
See Now The Life on the Down low i ripped him and he had 2 Sue ME...


1~1~1~1~1~ 1~1~1~1~1~ 1~1~1~1~1~


and i Didint Lose To Spiky i got banned it made me Dq'ed

Yo U Did u Got Suspended FOr Biteing or Cheating then they kicked u out and U Cryed Like abitch

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Free Agent

JPoll, fake personals are gay. However, his crew is whack as fuck, and his verse was pretty weak. The major payne line was ok. You can't circle jerk a dog.

Deadly, your lines were just way too stretched, and you really don't have much original to say so its a pain to read your verses.

"
Yo This Kids Flowz More Whack Then a Fuck'D up Re-Tard...
If Jpoll Packe'd a 12 Gauge in his punches still whouldint hit me hard..."

^ i mean come on.

JPoll wins for better flow and more original verse.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

j-poll
average verse
areas that need work....
just knocking people out with stronger punches
worst line:Got caught cheating...yet he still thinks beating me is possible...
HE LOST TO SPIKY2k8...so trust beating me ain't even plausible...
bestline:lookin like he fell through the ice...can't find the hole...
he's lost so many poll's...we might as well call him Bob Dole...
overall *7* nice drop good shit
---------------------------------deadly
you need to come way more original a'ight
cuz i heard some of them lines before in different order
areas that need work:, flow and originality
worstline: Yo Blue Print Kicked u out so u shouldint Even Rep This...
IF You Tried Out For Dark Knights You WHouldint Get Accepted...
wack this?..... accepted they dont rhyme homie
im gonna give you a low *6-------------------------
j-poll won

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BREAKDOWN:

JPoll
u can come stronger than that, compared to some of ure other battles u came pretty weak. fake personals are gay and never work, that was a major let down. u did come with some other gud hard hittin punches and ure verse was way more original than deadly's. ure flow was on, nuthin too stretched so u had a tight structure goin on. pretty average performance for u.
OVERALL 7/10

Deadly Rhymez
playa u came weak as hell in this battle. ure lines were stretched and that fucked up ure flow big-time. ure punches just weren't hittin and u had nuthin that really stood out, it was all pretty basic. u used a few played out punches so ure verse seriously lacked in originality.
OVERALL 5/10

V/ - JPoll

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uppin for more votes...

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breakdown for j-poll:

flow:workin well no problems with it 7/10

volcab:average nothing special 6/10

punches:nice personals here and you stayed on him and didn't stray from dissing him at all good job my fav line,"he's lost so many poll's...we might as well call him Bob Dole..." 8/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for mixxed mc:

flow:not bad i got nothing really to say here 7/10

volcab:basic nothing to write home about 5/10

punches:not too much aside from some played topics try harder here 6/10

overall:18/30

vote--j-poll so maybe the personals aren't real, they still better then those of mixxed mc

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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JPoll dont really like the kid but he def won this...He had a better verse wasnt same played lies i see day after day on here.So depressing anyway.

Flow-J
Punches-J
Overall-J

J=7.323/10
DR01=6.3232/10

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j-poll weak verse but good enough to beat his....u beat his with you complexity of punches....mixxed u've been elevatin but just not enough to beat his verse....weak punches.....work on ya game....both were wack jus j-poll's had more complex punches....
vote - jpoll

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

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