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06-01-04, 07:02 PM
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Flyweight
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SmArTzZ vs. Lil-trip
IP: 7BE2 A0A1
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no dr votes no hate votes explain votes u post ya verse first
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!! <img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I AM THE CHAMP!!!! <img src="http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1773/impossibleisnothing.gif" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT |
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06-01-04, 07:19 PM
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IP: 3240 794D
checkin in
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!! <img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I AM THE CHAMP!!!! <img src="http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1773/impossibleisnothing.gif" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT |
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06-01-04, 08:10 PM
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aight.."Checked in..'
IP: C359 7D74
Smartzz if yo the best rapper than i spit poorly drunk off a forty
Homie only way youd be better than me is if you post before me! Dad said not bein born outta yo moms "Lips of laughter" makes u a panther? Mus' be tuff bein born backwards n always askin yo baby mamma fo answers Im a "Positive" fact not only "Minus" talent n skills you continue to lack stop dis bitch u jus love "Crack", member given life out it don make u black" Only grinnin as yo spittin God made a commandment which lies include sinnin stick to fistin cus right from the beginnin you never came close to winnin yo spits got no gas like yo name itll jus drop or jus pass there is no relapse as a trip i spit fast you have a "Trip-Acid" Flashback sorry homie "I" Jus Last Wit these lyrics im jus killin em pop yo lips like records n keep spinnin em called it yo Boys "Cinnamon" dis Homie Brings a "Gay" Meanin to Synonym my lines he starts jackin em when they yell fairies unite they start tappin em This spit is jus smackin em he aint no M-A-N n thats my Mixed up Acronym aight, holla back peace..
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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams. Tupac Shakur No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year... Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it... - Lil Trip Top 3 Battles Currently Needin Votes http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127742 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127560 |
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06-01-04, 08:56 PM
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IP: 4289 77F4
g"l
ima be *engravin*loser in ya chest,cuz u *facin*the best,the lyrics u posted well im not *impressed* got me *chasing*thiz*pest*,lyrical flames *embracing*but i dunno wat i *possessed* faggot u not *behavion*so ya dome ima *cave in*or put u under *arrest* flamez melting catz like the *rest*,u not on my level so i take u as an *unwelcomed guest* the kid iz *blessed*a ghost writer u should*request*cuz ur raps iz sloopy and its makin a*mess* juss anotha loss on ya record and itz not a *progress*elevating wise u juss goin down like food u *digest* rippin threw ya *flesh*makin thiz dog eat hiz own bonez go in *fetch*u not gettin betta u juss goin down a *step* so im juss gonna end *you*,and hope my raps offemd *you*,and make you feel*blue* and destroying u like dandruff washed away by *shampoo*l leaving you wit a forever scar like a *tattoo*everything u says iz *untrue* u got a 1.0 for ur *review*,meaning u suk *dude*talk slick shot a leave a pocket in ya stomache like a *kangaroo*
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06-01-04, 08:59 PM
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IP: 4289 77F4
iight uppin good battle
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!! <img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I AM THE CHAMP!!!! <img src="http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1773/impossibleisnothing.gif" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT |
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06-01-04, 09:01 PM
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deadly when confronted
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IP: FE43 899A
well this was a close battle.... structure goes to lil trip his was easier to read... but punches... goes to smartzz... and like i always say punches win battles.. soo smartzz get it in a close battle
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06-01-04, 09:17 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 4289 77F4
iight thanx 4 votes uupin please
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!! <img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I AM THE CHAMP!!!! <img src="http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1773/impossibleisnothing.gif" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT |
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06-01-04, 09:39 PM
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IP: 826C 4C70
A'ight...this was actually a decent battle.
Lil-trip...I thought ya structure was tite dawg. Pretty good for a flywieght...you had some nice punches, but some shit I jus wans't feelin'. Overall a nice verse, could use some vocabulary werk. 5/10[b] Smartzz...ya verse was pretty dope. Your punches was hittin....your structure was wack as fuck tho. Lines stretched to shit...but punches win battles, and yuo definitely had harder punches. [b]5.5 Close battle. Vote- Smartzz No hate. |
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06-01-04, 09:43 PM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 4289 77F4
man oh man some of smartzz stuff was whack and he put it all away with his game but some of his stuff was hard to flow. his opener was awesome and his lyrics where crazy, and his closure finished it all up very well. so my vote goes to smartzz
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06-01-04, 10:07 PM
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New to RV
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IP: BCDF FE3C
i definely liked smartzz better, i jsut liek the way he over all raps better. lil trip had some good stuff dont get me wrong, but i think that smartzz came away with taht. i like smartzz opener****
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06-02-04, 01:10 AM
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Middle Weight
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aight..
IP: C359 7D74
Lets close this shit niggas, cats are gettin records for losses when shit jus needs to be closed, uppin this...
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The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams. Tupac Shakur No longer living in fear, my pistol close in hand, Convinced this is my year... Death is only as big as you make it, treat it as if its from Harlem n learn to Shake it... - Lil Trip Top 3 Battles Currently Needin Votes http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127582 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127742 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127560 |
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06-02-04, 06:30 AM
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Flyweight
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IP: 4289 77F4
iight thanz 4 the votez uppin
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!! <img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I AM THE CHAMP!!!! <img src="http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1773/impossibleisnothing.gif" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT |
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06-02-04, 03:12 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: C1DA C961
can sum1 vote please
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!! <img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I AM THE CHAMP!!!! <img src="http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1773/impossibleisnothing.gif" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT |
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06-02-04, 06:28 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: C1DA C961
canu vote on thiz battle please
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FLOAT LIKE A BUTTERFLY..STING LIKE A BEE..YOUR HANDS CANT HIT..WHAT YA EYEZ CANT SEE!!!!! <img src="http://img36.imageshack.us/img36/8295/jonezsig.jpg" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I AM THE CHAMP!!!! <img src="http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/1773/impossibleisnothing.gif" alt="Image Hosted by ImageShack.us" /> I DONT CARE WHO THEY BRING I DONT LOOSE I DONT DO THAT |
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06-02-04, 09:09 PM
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IP: A9A5 2BC6
close battle.......smarts dont up 6 times or you will be dqued but yeah
smartzz takes this becuase his punches was better.......lil trip elevate.....your ish was okay but it wasnt as gud as smartzz.......but yo smartzz you need to take out all the ***'s and shit outa your verse it makes it look really messy and takes away from the flow also work on your structure so your lines are all one line v/smartzz
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