Aiight newbie biatch heres da lowdown
no d/r hate crew or any of dat bullshit
10 lines
No feedin (You want to feed got to MCDOnalds)
5 votes to win
Check in And I'll spit by 24 hours later. After i Drop you got 24 hours to drop.
Can't lay it down tonite goin to werk soon.

THats it

~Third Degree~

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y a ni99az need to hurr up n battle shyt ya take madd long lolz jp but battle already fa realz

You need to stop free posting before I get strobe on this thread

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Aiight heres ma freestyle

Ridin "Mens Cocks" the only way you could be an "MC"//
Like throwin beer cans, ya punches don't land cuz there empty//
Call ya self "Al Gore", because you won't win this "Lyrical election"//
Ya weak and ya ain't straight, like a Dysfunctional Erection//
So Ya made ya first crew, Whos dick did you have to suck?//
ya flows Like kids before "puberty", you don't know "fuck"//
Ya lines are "Short", and they more than a "little bit"//
Do you battle with cottonmouth? CUz u never spit shit//
Mah Rhymes like "Car Crashes", I be givin you Whiplash//
Pourin Bleach into da garbage cans, you just white trash//

Aiight that took like 2 minutes ( a new record 4 me)

PEace and Props

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Blah...

I got this bitch worried no doubt & I've been here a week
Duke beat 5 shitty heads & gets excited about a winning streak
^^Things like that prove to me you're a fag craving cock
Homo gets angry over head cause somebody fucked his thought
FateForum.com never devoloped talent so why flaunt that image
This is just a lyrcal scrimage you flipped the coin now ya finished
Fuck Ill Intentionz ya phoney lryical assassins aint holden a clutch
Kid has to learn the hard way..but shit...get off whats above my nuts
Damn you jumped to conclusions shouldn'a called me out..
...from G-town to east coast I like to smoke herb..
^^Once i'm at 5 votes..you'll understand what i'm talking about

This battle was aight..but what killed it is the mistakes

Personally I rather read some wack or filler lines then to read someone throw in a line that isn't part of a bar (ex....from G-town to east coast I like to smoke herb..) or a line that doesn't make sense b/c it was forced (ex. ya flows Like kids before "puberty", you don't know "fuck"//) I read that like 10 times and it still didn't make sense...I know what you were TRYING to say but damn!

breakdown

Personals: Eclapt 5/10
Punches: Eclapt 5/10 since you only had one good punch
Structure: Eclapt 7/10
Flows: Eclapt 5/10

both yall could def. improve..HeLL ON EARTH your flows was aight, but why don't you take longer than 2 minutes if you don't want to lose

v/Eclapt

I don't understand, both had pretty good flow, but neither had any good punches. In my opionion HellonEarth had the best flo, so my vote goes to him.

Now vote on this
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126491

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Eclapt...straight up betta and way mo' skilled. Aiyo..those rhymes were ill...other dude was too simple

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aiyo man now vote honesly on dizz battler hurr

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127208

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Unexplained votes^^^^^^
I'll talk to strobe later.
Uppin fer votes

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hellonearth won this betta verse period

vote hellonearth

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return the fava battles are on my sig

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