iight

10-15 Lines
NO D/R Hate etc Votes plz people
you spit first since i set it up

dis nigga gonna be a breeze,
look at dis nigga alwayz on his knees,
suckin tell they get horny and pee,
dont even act real,cant even spell his name,
hes c-queen,i got cousin that spell betta than u and there only 3,
u 2 dum 2 say ya ABC,tryin 2 be lyke me a true gangsta,
fo u i told 50cent 2 make tha video WANSTA,so dont even act kool,
givin blowjobz when they sit on tha bar stool,so letz get dis battle dun,
u dont measure up 2 me u juzz a average one,
dont even no how 2 hold a gun,hes a bitch azz one!!!

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Jae Dome wreckin mics lyke a bad habit

Im still a free agent from da south

understand your message, what the fuck was you sayin?
i didnt recognize one real verse, dawg you must have been prayin
im like a steam-roller, smashin the tar on a new road
you gettin ate by this snake, ima smash you like a toad
my geometrical designs will shatter and tear you down
youll be countin my decible rhymes that chatter your town
you got no skill son, no RHythimic Process
you think you ill son, you prolly cross-dress
im gona end this shit, by spelin lik u
cuz u stink real bad, n smel like doo-doo

aight niggaz put up votez quick as u can!!!!!!!!!!

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Jae Dome wreckin mics lyke a bad habit

Im still a free agent from da south

iight uppin for votes Plz!! UPpin 4 Votes Vote Vote Vote

Aiiight .. This How This Game Goes lol

Break Down For ..BestHandles:

dis nigga gonna be a breeze,
look at dis nigga alwayz on his knees,
^Weak Opener' ..!!!! 0/10 ?? WTF Was This.. lol

suckin tell they get horny and pee,
dont even act real,cant even spell his name,
^No Rhyme Scheme .... ?? Ummm 'Pure Trash' .. 0/10

hes c-queen,i got cousin that spell betta than u and there only 3,
u 2 dum 2 say ya ABC,tryin 2 be lyke me a true gangsta,
^Again' ... No Rhyme Scheme.. What Do You Call This...

fo u i told 50cent 2 make tha video WANSTA,so dont even act kool,
givin blowjobz when they sit on tha bar stool,so letz get dis battle dun,
^Aint Nothing..!!' .. What Happened You Fell Off In Every Line...!! ?? 0/10

u dont measure up 2 me u juzz a average one,
dont even no how 2 hold a gun,hes a bitch azz one!!!
^Lmfao' .. !! You Stupid For Real .. Playa .. But Since Y0u Put Some Effort Into Your Last Bar.. I Will Cutt You Some Slacck And Give You A 3/10 ..

!! Alright' ...

BreakDown For C-Quence:

understand your message, what the fuck was you sayin?
i didnt recognize one real verse, dawg you must have been prayin
^Already Took This Battle With His First Line' .. And Opener' .... 6/10 Not To Bad' .. But Still Weak!!

im like a steam-roller, smashin the tar on a new road
you gettin ate by this snake, ima smash you like a toad
^Where's The Punch Playa??? 1/10

my geometrical designs will shatter and tear you down
youll be countin my decible rhymes that chatter your town
^Nice Bar' With A Decent Punch!! .. 7/10

you got no skill son, no RHythimic Process
you think you ill son, you prolly cross-dress
^Lol Prolly True' ..!! 9/10 Best Punch Out Of Your Whole Verse' ...

im gona end this shit, by spelin lik u
cuz u stink real bad, n smel like doo-doo
^Weak Closer But I Can Understand Where You Are Coming From lol.. Didn't Even Need To Come With More Then 2Lines' ..!!!

Vote: C-Quence

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vote fo me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Jae Dome wreckin mics lyke a bad habit

Im still a free agent from da south

lets get sum votes up in here and close this out

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uppin 4 sum votes, lets get this one out of here ppl

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Losses:1 to 40 Caliber Hitz
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punches i think best handles but close, he had the spellin your name w/ queen, gotta brother that can spell better only 3
but that was all you had that i liked...
Cbattle this was the line that made me vote for you
you got no skill son, no RHythimic Process
you think you ill son, you prolly cross-dress

dis nigga gonna be a breeze,
look at dis nigga alwayz on his knees,
^Weak Opener' ..!!!! 0/10 ?? WTF Was This.. lol

suckin tell they get horny and pee,
dont even act real,cant even spell his name,
^No Rhyme Scheme .... ?? Ummm 'Pure Trash' .. 0/10

hes c-queen,i got cousin that spell betta than u and there only 3,
u 2 dum 2 say ya ABC,tryin 2 be lyke me a true gangsta,
^Again' ... No Rhyme Scheme.. What Do You Call This...

fo u i told 50cent 2 make tha video WANSTA,so dont even act kool,
givin blowjobz when they sit on tha bar stool,so letz get dis battle dun,
^Aint Nothing..!!' .. What Happened You Fell Off In Every Line...!! ?? 0/10

u dont measure up 2 me u juzz a average one,
dont even no how 2 hold a gun,hes a bitch azz one!!!
^Lmfao' .. !! You Stupid For Real .. Playa .. But Since Y0u Put Some Effort Into Your Last Bar.. I Will Cutt You Some Slacck And Give You A 3/10 ..

!! Alright' ...

BreakDown For C-Quence:

understand your message, what the fuck was you sayin?
i didnt recognize one real verse, dawg you must have been prayin
^Already Took This Battle With His First Line' .. And Opener' .... 6/10 Not To Bad' .. But Still Weak!!

im like a steam-roller, smashin the tar on a new road
you gettin ate by this snake, ima smash you like a toad
^Where's The Punch Playa??? 1/10

my geometrical designs will shatter and tear you down
youll be countin my decible rhymes that chatter your town
^Nice Bar' With A Decent Punch!! .. 7/10

you got no skill son, no RHythimic Process
you think you ill son, you prolly cross-dress
^Lol Prolly True' ..!! 9/10 Best Punch Out Of Your Whole Verse' ...

im gona end this shit, by spelin lik u
cuz u stink real bad, n smel like doo-doo
^Weak Closer But I Can Understand Where You Are Coming From lol.. Didn't Even Need To Come With More Then 2Lines' ..!!!

Vote: C-Quence
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hmm,lets see

besthandle:no offence or anything but your verse was straight ass dogg,your opener was weak and your rhyme scheme was pretty off.you need to work on everything pretty much.so try harder,or if you were doing your best,battle more and elevate

c-quence:your verse wasnt that much better,you crunching him like a toad line was kind of weird but you were better without a doubt.just work on wordplay and maybe structure.

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^thats word cause

" If you disrespect me I'll kill you, slice you with my blade or hit you with my shoe."

"Don't beef or I'll blaze you up like reef."

"I got mo' quotes than sailors got boats."

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