10 lines aka 5 bars
no crew or hate votes
you got 8 min. to spit afta i write

so you can get a quick win

I take a shit right on your face//
I'll put this nigga bitch back in place//
It won't take any thought or time//
it'll only take this player one or two rhymes//
your a poser and your shit is wack//
you get your ass kicked while talking smack//
So come see me if you want to fight give it a try//
you'll be lucky if you don't die//
This guy thinks he can drop the bomb//
but he probly leaves at home with his mom//

big pimpn he's way to far from my range, i was readin his weak battle an caught a migrain//
so disturbin, didn kno it was possible to be that wack, jus by readin ya weak shit i forgot it was rap//
you lookin fo a quick win, well im not tha one fo it, you bout to get ripped again so put cha weak rhymes back in storage//
in this battle you need to do like tha army an b all you can b, cuz id douse ya in hot flames in you still wouldn b hotta than me//
ya so called pimp, i bet cha hoes jus quitted on you, they couldn take tha smell cuz poison jus shitted on you//

im done, 5 lines

uppin for some votes
please vote people
sho us some luv

ight first dude was wack
2nd dude had better shit beter punches, but ya lines are stretched..
\\// posion

just need make ya lines a bit shorter posion and yall be fine ..

Vote=Poison

He just delivered better.

so disturbin, didn kno it was possible to be that wack, jus by readin ya weak shit i forgot it was rap//
^I like that line
Bigpimpin you got it,just need to expand ya more

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thanx for tha advice
still uppin for votes
please vote people

Bigpimpn good battle dawg i aint really tryn to beef wit no one in here, jus tryin to elevate.

i give ya props poision you kicked my ass but thats nothing to really brag about

flow=both
punches=poisen
vocab=poisen
overall=poisen

poisen schooled ur ass

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poison had better punches and good voc.
overall good job
bigpimpin is new so i give him props
overall = poison

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