Rules:

10-12 lines
no D/R, crew, hate
no feeding
no biting
no recycling

I'll spit first then...

Checkin' in....

Ok look...

Imma murder you, this is gonna be easy//
Your rhymes will prolly rank "#1 fucken cheesy"//
You bess becareful, cuz battlin' me is proven risky//
I'm a fucken cat, i'm bout's ta get frisky//
Say what? when you speak you seem mutter//
Am i scarin' ya that when you spit you start to stutter?//
There's no way out, you cant escape//
When i'm finished with you, youz gonna be in bad shape//
Imma win this, tell me what did you really expect?//
So get on your knees, bow down, show me some respect//

Okay, check in.

I'm Miss. Lyricist, now let me introduce you to my fist/
Even if you were a bottle cap, I doubt you could top this/
I mean c'mon, this bitch is actin' like he's that bitch Scooby Doo/
Always tryin' to take on fools entirely bigga n you/
You're past tense and yah brain is so motherfuckin dense that I find your incompetence immense
You're nothing but a has been/
But then again, man, you never really were, man!/
Save yah breath, Mr. Tweaza, cus you'll need it for bawling/
You remind me of Alisha Keys cus you keep on falling/
Always comin' up short with your retorts, it's best you abort this mission, and let me resort to batt-lan position/
But let me offer you a proposition, man/
The next time I drop threads, you can be the water boy if yah want, man/

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Hey, Tweeza, I dropped a thread. Weren't you supposed to make a poll so that people could vote, or does someone else do that?

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Yo that wasn't a bad battle but I gotta give it to Miss. Lyracist. She had better rhymes overall. Good structure and she had a better vocabulary. Better punches. But you did ya thing Tweeza. Better luck next time.

Thanks Ill. It's appreciated dog... Anyone else wanna make a comment on this?

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i aint tryna be rude or ne thing... but do to the fact that i didnt liek either verse forreal, ima chose the one that had potential... lyracist won this.. by vocab... flow was off in both verses, and the rhyme scheme i wasent feeling in either one... but lyracist one this one due to her vocab use, which would have been nice if she had decent wordplay...

Vote - Miss

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

Naw, i feel you cuz, i have to give it to miss lyracist too because of vocab and how she bombarded his flow. but that's it, it was cool though

Yea i give this to Miss Lyricist also, the vocab was nice and the word play ya know.

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Ya BiTch FA ShO!

It's coo... I'm new to this, I don't know how to set up polls... Sorry Miss. Lyricist

I agree wit hoops, Ur rymin was not one Id realy be interested in. U did'nt do any real personals, and Ur lines wur to basic, I hate reading shit that sounds like it was written by Run DMC and Big Daddy Kain feel me? Dont be so up tight wit Ur rymes or people'll loose interest in Ur battles and skip U.
Miss. Lyricist did Ok in my View. In most lines she dropped the ball and it land in her mouth though, but it was'nt too bad. Her all out performance needs work too, and if Ur line doesnt ryme, Using a word like man, and huh and all that other shit is not Ok. I remember U said U was from the dirty south were the word crunk is actually in the dictionary but try to make Ur stuff ryme better. It'll take U along way in the futur. as for Tweeza, I expected her to use famouse, Ur masterbate wit Tweeza's punch, but she did'nt, she almost did I guess but she did'nt. any ways, from beginning to the end, Ur verse was Korny and boring. I basically am thinking of reading it to my self just to sleep easier at night. Its better then counting sheeps. Its kewl U keep it real and admit ur knew to this rather than act all smart mouthed like I usually get as U can See. But that isn't included in your verse. all in all U should tryin some one who cant read english or something if U wanna actually win one. Sorry, but yeah it was that bad.

V/ Miss. Lyricist.
P.S. I like Ur name.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

Damn man... You could have least been a little more tactful, but I guess I can't please em all. Anyways, I appreciate your comments, but remember- this was my first battle here. lol

Check out my other battles, if you don't mind. I need a few more votes.

P.S. I'm glad you like something about me, Eye, even if it is just my name. lol

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Thx for the comments. Btw, i'm a gurl, wouldn't it be weird for me to masturbate with *tweeza's* lol...

i'll vote if yall vote here first.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130545

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