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Old 06-13-04, 09:02 PM   #1
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complex illness vs. killah bowy

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Old 06-13-04, 10:34 PM   #2
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Old 06-16-04, 12:47 PM   #3
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iight if killah Bwoy dont Checkin today i win cause i atleast Checked in right i need to know if i have to spit...?

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Old 06-16-04, 04:59 PM   #4
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checkin in........................tough luck fam
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Old 06-16-04, 05:18 PM   #5
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Fam..This Kids Wack..Said One Weak Line and the kids like DAMN!!!
go figures..look at this kids sig..
Quote:
=my punch will hit you with the damage of a couple of slam's


Complex? naww..i jus can't understand how you became so wack...
Spit A line right through you...complex said "my aim was off track..
But da hole in your stomache indicates I hit you with full contact..
Kid Signed the same deal as William Hung Did,
and considered it a good contract.....
You Need contacts?..or can you finally see that you Lost....
Im clearly ontop of you..Like The government's Boss.....
Kid You Wack..You Lost, Now Stop Cryin Like A Baby....
Or i can dangle you over the belcony, like michael jackson's kid, G.....
The Only thing you preachin' is the fact that you got merked...
Rhymes Hit you So hard..even your mom at Home was Hurt...
Like a blind dentists..with sharp objects..i'll leave you with no teeth...
Kids tryin to start somethin' but even mcdonalds has more beef...


LIKe Mortal Combat Imma Finish Him...Kids About to get merked...
Complex: HEY MOM I GOT A RAP SHOW ON Tonight,
Mom: sorry son..im Gon' Be In the front row..C-walkin..at Killah bwoys Concert
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Old 06-17-04, 11:21 PM   #6
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Yo he Thinks he Good he Getz Banged up and High....
This Killah Bwoys out of Shape Jumped up n got stuck in the SKy....
Now u aint gonna cry,cause in u i think theres a lil Wise....
He Said Fuck women and Watch ya behind all you Guyz....
In THis Process of beatin this Wackk Kid is nuttin....
He Say he not a Virgin when Choaclete Glazed Donuts what he Fuckin....
Man Dont Step up And Drull on ma Style in Denile....
Police Was Scared of ya face and Burned up ur File....
SO Let Complex Handle this Fool Get him Banned for Life....
He gone now whats he like, he can't even have sex wit his own Wife....
I Won Dis Shit Get The Fuck up out of herre Bitch....
Have'ing 2 Cans of Tuna Fish and 1 Cent is Bein Rich....
To dis Bitch,dat Talks shit,Not Bent up n e more Afraid of Clit....
YO here is where i leave Message Dont Go out no more....
Cause i punch this Fuckin Coward so hard his face Met the FLOOR....
Make a Shot wont score it,Now u gothic bitch Get ya ass 2 ( Torrid )...
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Old 06-18-04, 09:00 AM   #7
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Killah Bwoy
Fam..This Kids Wack..Said One Weak Line and the kids like DAMN!!!
go figures..look at this kids sig..

Basic opener but good

Complex? naww..i jus can't understand how you became so wack...
Spit A line right through you...complex said "my aim was off track..
If you spit a line through him..thats NOT off track because u hit him

But da hole in your stomache indicates I hit you with full contact..
Kid Signed the same deal as William Hung Did,
and considered it a good contract.....
This was ok

You Need contacts?..or can you finally see that you Lost....
Im clearly ontop of you..Like The government's Boss.....
On top of u lines are played

Kid You Wack..You Lost, Now Stop Cryin Like A Baby....
Or i can dangle you over the belcony, like michael jackson's kid, G.....
Been done before and not even kid

The Only thing you preachin' is the fact that you got merked...
Rhymes Hit you So hard..even your mom at Home was Hurt...
Pretty good

Like a blind dentists..with sharp objects..i'll leave you with no teeth...
Kids tryin to start somethin' but even mcdonalds has more beef...
omg that 2nd line is SOOOOOO played

LIKe Mortal Combat Imma Finish Him...Kids About to get merked...
Complex: HEY MOM I GOT A RAP SHOW ON Tonight,
Mom: sorry son..im Gon' Be In the front row..C-walkin..at Killah bwoys Concert
Pretty funny


Overall this had played concepts and was pretty basic. It didnt have much with or any personals and the wordplay are like "sooooo 2 years ago".


Quote:
Originally Posted by Complex Illness
Yo he Thinks he Good he Getz Banged up and High....
This Killah Bwoys out of Shape Jumped up n got stuck in the SKy....
This is a played joke that u and ur friends would say. Its not ur own concept so PLAYED

Now u aint gonna cry,cause in u i think theres a lil Wise....
He Said Fuck women and Watch ya behind all you Guyz....
ok? not feelin it

In THis Process of beatin this Wackk Kid is nuttin....
He Say he not a Virgin when Choaclete Glazed Donuts what he Fuckin....
Wack

Man Dont Step up And Drull on ma Style in Denile....
Police Was Scared of ya face and Burned up ur File....
This was sorta witty

SO Let Complex Handle this Fool Get him Banned for Life....
He gone now whats he like, he can't even have sex wit his own Wife....
This was bollox

I Won Dis Shit Get The Fuck up out of herre Bitch....
Have'ing 2 Cans of Tuna Fish and 1 Cent is Bein Rich....
Not good

To dis Bitch,dat Talks shit,Not Bent up n e more Afraid of Clit....
Who does this line belong to, you lsot ur flow and rhyme scheme. Basic anyways.

YO here is where i leave Message Dont Go out no more....
Cause i punch this Fuckin Coward so hard his face Met the FLOOR....
Basic

Make a Shot wont score it,Now u gothic bitch Get ya ass 2 ( Torrid )...
not good


This verse was SOOOOOo basic that is what a newbie would say. You had no wit...well that [police line was ok. You had no personals and no good hard hittin complex punches. Your name does not suit ur skill.

V/Killah Bwoy not a good battle.
 
Old 06-18-04, 09:47 AM   #8
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killa bwoy:
Fam..This Kids Wack..Said One Weak Line and the kids like DAMN!!!
go figures..look at this kids sig..
Quote:
=my punch will hit you with the damage of a couple of slam's

...funnny personal..nice punch

But da hole in your stomache indicates I hit you with full contact..
Kid Signed the same deal as William Hung Did,
and considered it a good contract.....

nice...funny

LIKe Mortal Combat Imma Finish Him...Kids About to get merked...
Complex: HEY MOM I GOT A RAP SHOW ON Tonight,
Mom: sorry son..im Gon' Be In the front row..C-walkin..at Killah

cool..name play n lil personal(even tho it was a mom joke)

Complex Illness:

Yo he Thinks he Good he Getz Banged up and High....
This Killah Bwoys out of Shape Jumped up n got stuck in the SKy

...funny

here's my take neither had good wordplay..simple rhyme schemes..complex's punches sounded like a bunch of third grade jokes sometimes..vote killa
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Old 06-18-04, 11:08 AM   #10
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Killah

Fam..This Kids Wack..Said One Weak Line and the kids like DAMN!!!
go figures..look at this kids sig..

ha ha...nice personal

Complex? naww..i jus can't understand how you became so wack...
Spit A line right through you...complex said "my aim was off track..
If you spit a line through him..thats NOT off track because u hit him
aight.....could of done better with this line

But da hole in your stomache indicates I hit you with full contact..
Kid Signed the same deal as William Hung Did,
and considered it a good contract.....
aight....again could of done better with this bar

You Need contacts?..or can you finally see that you Lost....
Im clearly ontop of you..Like The government's Boss.....
ha ha.....ok good punch

Kid You Wack..You Lost, Now Stop Cryin Like A Baby....
Or i can dangle you over the belcony, like michael jackson's kid, G.....
ha ha ok

The Only thing you preachin' is the fact that you got merked...
Rhymes Hit you So hard..even your mom at Home was Hurt...
Pretty good one here

Like a blind dentists..with sharp objects..i'll leave you with no teeth...
Kids tryin to start somethin' but even mcdonalds has more beef...
nice line......2nd one is played though

LIKe Mortal Combat Imma Finish Him...Kids About to get merked...
Complex: HEY MOM I GOT A RAP SHOW ON Tonight,
Mom: sorry son..im Gon' Be In the front row..C-walkin..at Killah bwoys Concert

this line took the battle........shits funny ha ha
overall nice verse some of the lines could have been better but they
hit harder than complex's and you threw in some personals in there

overall-7.0/10

Complex-

Yo he Thinks he Good he Getz Banged up and High....
This Killah Bwoys out of Shape Jumped up n got stuck in the SKy....
this line was kinda wack......2nd line is played
Now u aint gonna cry,cause in u i think theres a lil Wise....
He Said Fuck women and Watch ya behind all you Guyz....
could of done better with this....A LoT better..

In THis Process of beatin this Wackk Kid is nuttin....
He Say he not a Virgin when Choaclete Glazed Donuts what he Fuckin....
WACK

Man Dont Step up And Drull on ma Style in Denile....
Police Was Scared of ya face and Burned up ur File....
ok......not feelin this one

SO Let Complex Handle this Fool Get him Banned for Life....
He gone now whats he like, he can't even have sex wit his own Wife....
this was ok.....2nd line is kinda basic

I Won Dis Shit Get The Fuck up out of herre Bitch....
Have'ing 2 Cans of Tuna Fish and 1 Cent is Bein Rich....
another wack line

To dis Bitch,dat Talks shit,Not Bent up n e more Afraid of Clit....
i think you forgot a line......fuck up your scheme

YO here is where i leave Message Dont Go out no more....
Cause i punch this Fuckin Coward so hard his face Met the FLOOR....
aight.....

Make a Shot wont score it,Now u gothic bitch Get ya ass 2 ( Torrid )...
GAY


you didnt come hard at all, most of your verse was wack or played or basic
and you had lines that you didnt need....

overall-6.0/10

vote-Killah
 
Old 06-18-04, 11:17 AM   #11
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Personally, I don't think either of them had punchlines that really caught my attention, but if I had to choose I'd go for Killah because complex used a lot of sex hits (even though they were funny). Neither one of you were used more than one multi. And the vocabulary was straight.

But I think Complex was more creative, and, if I had to vote for the funniest, it'd be him.

My overal vote goes to Complex.
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Old 06-18-04, 11:21 AM   #12
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Please y'all... Show me the same courtesy by voting on my battle: MC AK vs Miss. Lyricist
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Old 06-18-04, 11:49 AM   #13
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This was one of the weaker battles....................

Both of y'all just weren't into it i don't think, i mean structure wise i wud say u were both even, nuthin special...pretty basic, this gave both y'all sum gud flow but it did go choppy in places. the battle was won on punches and personals which i think killah bwoy took cuz his weren't as basic and played. both were pretty weak in my opinion, nuthin too creative, although killah used some aight wordplay in his drop from time to time. overall it was a weak battle but killah just had slightly better punches and personals so he gets my vote.

V/ - Killah Bwoy
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Old 06-19-04, 05:30 PM   #14
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Weak, but v/ killah bwoy for the reasons listed above. second dude didn't even rhyme, and didnt come close to complex. boo.
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weak battle but Killah Bowy deffintly took this battle.....althought the punches was played and really weak and and the conceptz was played as fuck from both killah deffinly had the btter pucnehs
 
 


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