aight man 10 lines aka 5 barz no dr votes spit 35 mins after check in aight ima go get a drink then spit aight

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aight man checkin in i just gotta get a drink then i'll get rite to spiten gl

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This is my check in

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me vs V.I.P

u shouldnt have got me ~started are u crazy/
i blame your momma for haven a ~retarted baby/
your fuckin rhymes are wat u fuckin ~lack shady/ (he calls himself shady)
i pitty your momma for haven a ~crack baby/
i wish u would just kill yourself an get it over/
i'm battlen a fuckin retard who looks like a ogar/ (ogar is a ugly creture)
suddenly a fuckin board just cracks over your head/
just be a suicide from tha drug facts i placed in your bed/
take tha bat and break your upper hip/
somethin smells must be your upper lip/

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V.I.P

You can dish it out but can you take it//
you think you can rap but you cant even fake it//
Scientist study to see if your a him or a her//
your lyrics are hot...like DQs freezer//(dairy Queen)
You say your ghetto but its all just an act//
u couldn't out rap an old lad, you gotta face all the facts//
Your name is retarded and your lyrics are WACK//
all of your tough talk is nothing but a hack//
why do you even try spittin without rhymes like these//
i can't understand you like your spittin in Japenese//
So just go out and bite some more rhymes//
by accepting this battle your just wasting your time//
so go out to bye a new CD and bite of off it//
you think you can beat me, cause your a fuckin' idiot//

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yo man u spit 11 instead of ten but thats aight uppin for votes

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uppin fo votes

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we uppin for votes don't sleep on use

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aight not the greatest but has potential..

suddenly a fuckin board just cracks over your head/
just be a suicide from tha drug facts i placed in your bed/
first of all this line dosent make any sence at all,or the one under it
vip ya gotta pratice ya personals n flow,or else ya'll never win,ya gotta get his name in there for some wordplay(tutorial)

spitz ya flow was good n ya had some punches that destroyed what he had ya on the right track just try n get more complex wit ya ryme scheems n stretch the shit out a bit more(tutorial) ican't stress how much ya can learn if ya just keep readin them.
breakdown
punches/spits
flow/spits
multis/none
creativity/spits
vocab/spits
overall/spits honest vote/spits

my vote goes 2 spitz, sorry vip i was jst feelin his more ya know. spitz- lyrics were tight, flow was pretty smooth, yer like i sed, i was feelin it. all in all, id say 6-7/10

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vip, your verse was prett basic, not many punches and rookie flow. elevate yo, you got the ideas down n shit... keep practicing

killin, took it, better flow, better punches, better pretty much everything. you have a sense of rhythm, but needs more multies n all that shit...


sorry for no breakdown but i gotta get goin

return the favour, im in a battle me vs sorel...

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ya ya
Krusty has been retarded out from the amount the word got used in the battle.

VIP - nice flow
kinda basic, but I luv basic, now Krusty iz basic but original. work on sum harder punches ta go w/ tha flo

i didn't really understand this line


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very weak closer
ya started off hard then trailed


Spits - again sum basic rhymes just kind of takin ya where THEY go, not you takin the basic rhymes where YOU want them to go. That is called set-up. I rhyme basic because I tell stories and take them rhymes right where I want them to go throughout. I liked this line



Ya both did good my vote goes to Spits cuz he came a bit harder.
keep doin whut yur doin cuz its fun

Peace out ta both of you

I got 4 battles dat needs closed
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drop honest luv and I'll hit up every single battle you 2 got open

Peace fiends

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A Tru Dirty OG

THIS BATTLE WAS WHACKKKKK!!! both need elavating and V.I.P u lost it dude ur rhymez where whack Punchs where WEak Try USeing Personals and shit next battle Good Try tho now Killin'Spitz.... on the Other side had a More Elavated Verse BUT YET Still VERRY Weak u need more Punches A Couple of Played out ass Lines and u need to elavate both u need a more Elavated Verse that GOs for Both
But i gotta Vote and its goin
for

V/Killin, Spitz

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yo ima give this one to v.i.p i thought in my eyes that he came harder than the other doo he had some good punches and flow he just stomped the other doo
v/v.i.p