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06-23-04, 01:19 PM
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Banned: Biting
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KillaCamFlow vs Virt (Topical)
IP: E3CA 7CA2
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topic- A true major struggle in your life house rules verse due in 24hours.... |
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06-23-04, 01:40 PM
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IP: 0CD4 8C79
Iight my check in first .....topical so let see if wack or not let get this started..Wat good on here
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06-23-04, 01:44 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
ok check
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06-23-04, 07:47 PM
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....Strugles of a father....
IP: EC0B 84C7
This was one of my hardest strugles as of late....Strugles of a father...
You came into my life so uninspectingly... It was like God came before my eyes and said a message to me... "From now till birth, all the bumps and bruises... Scars and nuisances and even contemplating the worse... This is yours, the responsibility begins now and even after she's born"... It was hard, the relationship between me and her mother was already torn... But I'd sworn to make it work... Morbid with smirks, her mother had the upper hand... I'd lose my "Jewel" on demand with repercussion... If I didn't follow every command... So I dealt with it all, winter, spring, summer and fall... Always there for her, the world, the stars, any life... She tops it all, always there for her no matter the call... You came into my life so uninspectingly... It was like God came before my eyes and said a message to me... "From now till birth, all the bumps and bruises... Scars and nuisances and even contemplating the worse... This is yours, the responsibility begins now and even after she's born"... I was takin' to court in a file for custody... Is this what it's come to be?... You or me, the decision of a lifetime... Obviously I chose yours without a second thought for mine... And everyday I live in a struggle... Trying not to lash out on your mother... So I walk away putting on that imaginary muzzle... Again she has the upperhand... Soft melodies heard from an acoustic heard the wind... Humbling myself as tears flow off my skin... One day it'll be me and you, four more years... And back off to court to hear that final decision... The verdicts in, jus as I thought, I win... You came into my life so uninspectingly... It was like God came before my eyes and said a message to me... "From now till birth, all the bumps and bruises... Scars and nuisances and even contemplating the worse... This is yours, the responsibility begins now and even after she's born"... There's nothing more dad can do... Except put up with the bullshit your mother puts me through... Day in day out we bond and emotionally connect... Go to the pond look at the fish, feed the ducks bread... Always thinking I should jus take you and run away... But I hang on dealing with struggles jus another day... Your my life, my world, my moon and sky... Your daddy's gem "Jewel", I'll give all I have to you until the day I die... You came into my life so uninspectingly... It was like God came before my eyes and said a message to me... "From now till birth, all the bumps and bruises... Scars and nuisances and even contemplating the worse... This is yours, the responsibility begins now and even after she's born"... blah...Jewel is my daughter if u didnt pick that up...due november.....these are just thoughts of the futer and emotions that go on and run through my head in a daily basis... was gona be an open mic but this is a beter way to get this out... ....thanks for taking the time to read.... |
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06-24-04, 12:07 PM
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My struggle...kinda new....first time....
IP: 0CD4 8C79
Why people had to arrest me when my son didnt want to see
Why they sayed i had to get 3 years for stealing some rge Why didnt my faimily answer on my only 1 PhoneCall Why didnt i tell my son i wanted him to grow Tall I got along time till i get out and see my kids again I gotta think my Residents for taking care of us like Presidents I gotta ask my moms to make 1 of the hood Sunday Meals I can;t say i love you no more my heart didnt begin to Heal This my last day in the whole and i gotta iight to my Homies I walked to this gay guy,grabbed 2 things sayed Hold These I finnaly got out the Hole.Time to play the Daddy Role This is dedicated to nigga in jail....Rest in Peace on ur Soul! Iight this how i feel this is a strugglei gotta put the rest of the pieces to this so i think it gonna be iight...im gonn lose but in time ill start to get better and start to put a point across....see if u kno the meaning of it
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06-24-04, 01:17 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
uppin for votes
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06-24-04, 08:01 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: EC0B 84C7
uppin for some votes....
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06-25-04, 12:23 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
come on bring the votes...
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07-06-04, 12:23 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: EC0B 84C7
this guy pmed me saying can we call it a draw.....uppin for votes
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07-06-04, 12:27 AM
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That's Gangsta
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IP: 970D 9C87
ill drop a vote if u drop in mines first.............. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133422
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07-06-04, 01:02 AM
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IP: 0CD4 8C79
Virt ill just give u the win alright i know u won this 1..so ill just give it to you tho...but can you vote on this battle tho??alright 1 sec lety me get thsi closed
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07-06-04, 01:03 AM
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IP: 0CD4 8C79
Vote on this battle alright..im giving you the win virt iight..Nice work
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132324
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