Ok 10-16 lines
No h8 crew unexplained or d/r votes (no askin through PM)
Me first and consider this my check in i'll spit when you check in

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Oh and a minimum of 100 posts to vote

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aright bro, i better not see no fuckn dick riding votes i know u a vet and im sure u got friends , ill no one if i see that shit

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checking in

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spit dogg i aint tryn to fuckn chill till 6 am

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U consider me a vet??? Thanx but that dont mean i aint gonn go easy on yo punk ass Crawley in this 10-16 lines dope rhymes? We'll see Lets get it crackin...

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Tell me dawg i got 1 question...why you called SiccWitIt?/
U get beaten worse than a housewife and u dont make up rhymes they all bit/

Quit playin dawg this aint a circus no cheap tricks up in here/
This here's a tightrope walk...see u slip slice in half and watch the crowd cheer/

You couldn't breakdown rhymes if it was hammer time coz all i see/
Iz a guy who lacks lines and times off cant rhyme HA you aint all u claim 2 be/

Please all you sic wit is the WACK RAP DISEASE/
Dont make no come back coz peeps'll be like this CATS BACK PLEASE/

This here's a classic some would say all 1 sided/
You the type to hide in fear and let yo crew do all the riding/

I had enough of this cat from now on ima call you a mouse/
The closest u'll be to a cat is a PUSSY u crazy man u belong in the nuthouse/

A CRIMINAL na MORE LAW abiding than a straight cop wit a commendation/
U SYNICAL a WHORE break u like a JIGSAW death of u is my only reccomendation/

14 lines im done waitin on you

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Yo my bad i though u was a VET, Ur Rymes looked smooth but they must of been wet/
cause when i look up close they aint shit//
Make room In the Fagget Line maddoggs got2 fit//
Better yet Just sit ,the only thing this doggs bit was some large ass dick//
This ho couldnt flow if he had and open stream//
I damn his shit up and his fagget ass team(d2r)//
I paste this hater cream on real think, so u can like it off,and mistakenly eat the candle stick//
NOw ur rymes are really WAXX,u payn to take emc lessons and even they u gettn charged tax//
U gotta relax so high strung,wHats the matter pup cat got ya tounge//
Im about to end shit cause im drained//
I doged all ur bullets like a western flick ur ass got JOHN Whayned//
So as long as im inflecting the pain//
Ima Stop on this track like a fuckn train//

Aright im high as fuck and im tired , my shit was crazy and im blazed holla at ya boi

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Uppin This Ma Fuckin Thread, For Them Ma Fuckin Votes.

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aight this was a pretty close battle... both of yall had equaly good punches and personals... very few multis all the way arround... imma have to go with Mad Dog on this one because i liked his structure a little more and his flow was pretty much on lock for the most part. no hate tho, just my oppinion...

VOTE- Mad Dog

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Uppin this ma fuckin thread 4 them ma fuckin votes

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/\ again

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Uppin again for the votes which would be very nice

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aight... when i read the first verse, the lines were a little stretched, but it had some ok punches.. and a nice personal about this guys name..

Mad: lol i dont liek your structure .. but aside from that, i think you won this one..

sic:you beat around the bush.. sometimes i thought i saw a set-up, but then you didnt even capatalize on it.. just work on using more punches man.. honestly i dont think one hit hard.. good try tho, keep it up

v/Mad Dog


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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132624

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mad dog u did good dawg well pretty good with ya punches but they seem to not be hitting that hard as i thought they would

sicwitit dawg hard landing punches u came good u had some humor in your verse to and thas what i like punches and humor
v/sicwitit

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131634

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