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damaged1 | 4 | 44.44% | |
-NERVEZ- | 5 | 55.56% | |
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll |
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06-21-04, 04:38 PM | #1 | ||
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-NERVEZ v damaged1
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10 line anything goes due by tonite
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06-21-04, 04:42 PM | #2 | ||
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IP:
check . i'll spit after you ...
good luck
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06-21-04, 05:37 PM | #3 | ||
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All hatin gonna stop this instant]
Damaged got hit from a distance cuz my dawgs r persistent] Dont get caught up in the moment, or shot up down in Oakland] Damaged1 da product of a smoker, and killin dis bitch is my motive] One been damaged gettin ravishd by faggots] liquid courage is the only reason that this bitch act like a savage] Damaged1 think he the shit but he no competition] so i put a whole up in his spine like fuk sendin shivers] This hoes flows are garbage so that makes me da thrashman] He be that fag up in the club pussy poppin on a handstand] tour turn.......spit |
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06-21-04, 05:40 PM | #4 | ||
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oops i spelld hole wrong[whole]oh well yall get da pic ........
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06-21-04, 06:30 PM | #5 | ||
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great,I don’t have to come that hard
anyway,check it … Why waste good bars on this clown? it’s obvious this kat’s rhymes is .shook. … Don’t tell kats you’re from Oakland,how da fuck u think that’ll make me .look. … ? Im the .illest lyricst. Rippin niggas like 4 stabs with a .switch blade. … Cuasin an urban distrurbance so the people .lurkin. can realize that yo .shits played. … -hmmmm,lets switch style- Yes Verse Lased Wit Linez,Like Throwin Toxic Clockz In Thrash Dis Battle Jus A Waste Of Tyme. … Lyrical Explosion Of lines Is Tha Face Of Mine,My Inclind Mind, Rewindz Time, To Reverse Ya Hexed Nine,Den Bless Ya Spine. … I’ll Drop Yo Rhymes From Heavy .Weights. Like Anorizic Kids Liftin Hundred Platez. … Forget The .Rates.,When Your Life’s At .Stake. I got Plenty .Traits. To Make The Endin on this battle no .Debate. … That’s all on my doin … looking for votes …
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06-21-04, 06:37 PM | #6 | ||
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IP:
wher in da town u from damage1.
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06-21-04, 06:37 PM | #7 | ||
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NERVEZ: You need to elevate on your vocabulary, you need a dictionary bro.
5/10 I have seen better from you, practice! Damage1: Your flow wasn't as good, but since your punches were way better than Nervez, you take the win. Vote: Damage1 PLease return the favors. THANK YOU! http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130763 |
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06-21-04, 06:40 PM | #8 | ||
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thanks for the vote ... i wasnt concentrating on a flow on this one ... just getting this battle out the way ...
good battle dawg , and ya'll niggas need to spell my name right , it's .... damaged1 ....
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06-21-04, 06:48 PM | #9 | |
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this battle was extremely weak....
Nerves you text like you're freestyling, focused on mutli's and palyed disses, with no original material at all.... try using a punch here and there, works good for battles... you really should seek elevation help to get up to par. You have some skillz, but text is different and you need to approach it different. Use witty wordplay and puns to create a punch and an "oooh" effect. Your shit was basic. damage - not much better, but i see a hint of wit in your verse... all that 'nine' and 'bless ya spine' shit needs to go, it's garbage, but this line: "Why waste good bars on this clown? it’s obvious this kat’s rhymes is .shook. … Don’t tell kats you’re from Oakland,how da fuck u think that’ll make me .look. … ?" shows you know how to use sarcasm to hurt your opponent. Weak battle guys, but damage gets my vote. For one punch. I can help both of you reach potential, just hit me up. pz
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06-21-04, 06:52 PM | #10 | ||
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Vote: -NERVEZ-
Reasons: 1. Hella More Vocab, Not As Simple As damaged1 2. Had Slightly Iller Punches (No Eye Openers) 3. -NERVEZ- bars flowed better, easier flow..feel me Overall This Wasn't A Good Battle, Nothin Great.
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06-21-04, 06:53 PM | #11 | ||
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lol ... this is the wackest battle ... but keep the votes commin
i had no reason to come hard ...
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06-21-04, 06:59 PM | #12 | ||
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hmmm,maybe we cna get this battle done if the peple voting had 20 posts ...
but keep em commin... oh and nice verse Nervez ....
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06-21-04, 07:52 PM | #13 | ||
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ya thx u toop but u still aint said where u from in oakland blood......i did freestyle i spent no time on it
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06-21-04, 09:01 PM | #14 | ||
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listen from what i ~seen~ your both doing your {thing.}
Punch lines comming from both sides..making me {bleed.} Testing my wings, God give me the judgment to {proceed} I loved the battle both opponents had words to show {me} but since this is a rap site i'll do it through my {flowing} First of all nerve I cant take nothing from you,... You spit /nice/ This is 5mic and im gone tell you shit /right/ I like how you started out in the begining using (persistent) kind of reminds me of how i do when im on a (mission) Your flowing tactic still got room to grow ,so you can /build up/ Im not trying to diss you with time son you will be /iller/ But I understood what you wrote so keep your/ shield up/ and never drop your [guard]...Its haters out there waiting for the [star] <meaning you> These are words from my ~heart~ And Damaged1, I cant take nothing from you /niether./ I read your flow and had to step back an take a /breather./ ~Wondering~, Your punch lines where hoter then the sun combined with a {comet.} Your flowing wasn't as strong,but you know it's always {something.} The words you used in this battle could have been spit different, or /rearanged/ Dont get mad at the mic son you got more to /gain/. knowledge is what you get when you drop your pride and {sweat} To your chest to let the whole world know you gone be the {best} Im not here to diss any one ,Both your flows were weak But the best punch lines came from damaged1 {verdict} damaged1
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06-22-04, 04:44 AM | #15 | ||
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Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote Vote>........................
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