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Old 06-24-04, 11:42 PM   #1
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::::..Rules..::::

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Check In By 6-26-04
Spits Due By 6-28-04
Votes End 6-30-04

Topic: Bombing on a Plane

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Old 06-25-04, 01:44 AM   #2
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wow, 3-open battles wit L.I. lol We got 2 topicals and one audio. weerd, prepare to lose L.I. This is my first topical.

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Old 06-25-04, 08:08 PM   #3
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lol exactly...this is your first topical....be prepared to lose......check in...
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Old 06-25-04, 08:37 PM   #4
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nah, I'm gonna bring my A-plus game fashos. Also, I can't see yo sig.
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Old 06-27-04, 10:23 PM   #5
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Intro…

Bags crammed with clothes as we run through the airport…
Make sure I have everything, confirmed plenty of spare shorts…
From Philly to Florida, damn this shit will be tight…
Made it to the plane on time and sat down for the flight…
Fastened our seatbelts as the propellers started to rotate…
Next hour would have never been predicted in my own fate…
Shit came as a surprise, all went from fun to hell…
Now that your interested, here’s the story to tell…

Painful Remembrance…

Seatbelts click and the plane starts moving, everything seemed fine…
Wheels leaving the ground while starting northward into sunshine…
Sitting with my little brother he points to the sky fascinated…
Out of no where a gun shot rings out, flight attendant assassinated…
Two masked men take over the plane and threaten us all…
They were Muslim obviously…but weren’t that tall…
Had us put in to bunches and held guns to our heads…
Some started to get rowdy and they put them to rest…
My bro started to cry and let out a quick scream…
I covered his mouth and wished it was just a dream…
They walk over and yell at me to shut the kid up or he dies…
Couldn’t believe what he said, there was only evil in his eyes…
They didn’t give a fuck about us, they liked to cause us pain…
Adrenaline rushed and blood was seaming throughout my veins…

They told us the deal and how to survive if we wanted to live…
They would harm us if we disobeyed and it was our life we’d give…
Hour went by and sweat was drenching our clothes…
I figured I’d die no matter what decision they chose…
Running low on fuel the terrorists threatened and shot 6 for the hell of it…
Wanted to know where my brother was but I just wasn’t telling it…
Sent him to bathroom to hide safe from the guns…
Grabbed me by the hair and told me I was done…
Stated they have bombs set and will be detonated within 3 minutes…
Our chances were slim and none and we were basically finished…
I rallied out a scream and tackled on of them and stole his weapon…
Shot him out and told the other he better get to stepping…
Blew off his head, now we were safe from those bitches…
My brother was still hiding, scared into stitches…
30 Seconds till it went off all I could do was pray…
10 Tics to go, nothing else left to even say…
3 2 1…click a bang goes off but an engulfing blow…
The bomb was a dud, my hope began to flow…
Went to go check where it was placed, the path of doom…
My heart stopped when I saw smoke coming out the bathroom…
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Old 06-28-04, 01:31 AM   #6
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^tight drop. Yea, I am gonna drop by tommorow. But I was wonderin', does this have to go on record? Cuz I only entered this to try it ouit for fun. So I could learn how to do it and shit. Cuz I thought tourney matches didn't count on reocrd. That's what was wit the text tourney. But whatever, I'll drop tommorow night, well actually tonight, cuz it's 1:30 A.M.
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Old 06-28-04, 07:19 PM   #7
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ok, first ever Topical, here goes nothin':

Bombing In a Plane

My family and I arrive at the airport, waitin’ for our plane
Hopin’ we didn’t make this one hour trip, jus in vain
Goin’ from Boston to London, was our master plan
We said a few prayers, so disaster wouldn’t land
I got up to the window, to see if it was good weather to fly
The day looked nice outside, not a cloud in the sky
A grin slid across my face, cuz I knew what this meant
I would get to see Ashley again, my dreams were not bent
I then remembered that awful day, May 5th, the day she left
It has been exactly 6 months, in my heart, there was a cleft
I went back to my seat, wit a big smile, and sat next to my brother
I wanted to get out of this horrid place, cuz in my heart, there was no other

*One hour passes by*

I looked at my watch, both hands were exactly on the 12
In exactly 30 minutes, we would be escaping, like a bat out of hell
I felt a groan in my stomach, I was hungry. I needed to eat
Halloween had jus passed, I then looked down at my brothers feet
A big orange bag stood there, my brother’s hand was half-way in
I looked a bit further, and I could see tons of wrappers in the bin
My brother was swallowin’ them whole, like a cat does a bird
He was chewin’ down the bars… without even sayin’ a word
I leaned over to take a piece, but before I took one, he stood up
He was holdin’ his stomach… then all of a sudden he threw up
My dad ran over… and rushed him out of sight
I took a look at my watch, only 2 minutes till our flight
I felt a rage of fury, I then kicked the bag across the floor
I looked towards the rest room, but only my dad came out the door
My brother had stomach problems, but right then, I didn’t care
I was too busy lookin’ at our plane take off, but now it wasn’t there

*20 minutes pass*

As the airport was hectic, my brother came out, and I gave him a hug
Cuz our plane had jus exploded, thanks to him, we weren’t goin’ up above

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Old 06-29-04, 10:21 PM   #8
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yea, seriously L.I., el eye, L.I, whatever you wanna be called, do you actually read rules? no hate, but I guess you didn't read it this time. Maximum 30 lines. It jus pisses me off how both times we battle, you always fuck it up by not followin' rules. But whatever. Uppin' for votes.
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Old 06-29-04, 10:26 PM   #9
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lmao...i didnt notice....u can dq me...i really dont give a fuck...
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Old 06-30-04, 02:15 AM   #10
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Dope drop. - Spul is right with the rules though - it was mad over limit. Both were aight for topicals, ya'll coulda both came alot harder - I sure hope ya'll were both saving some of ya real game for the later rounds, cause I know you both can bring ALOT more heat than this battle. Spul's had a dope ending, L.I. had some strong lines for sure, and this is a nice battle. I would say L.I. wins cause of his damn sig, but I think Spul edged this shit out. Good looking for you first battle dun, you better bring some fucking fiyah in the next rounds. L.I. - if you win, good lookin out fam, your verse was good, but I thought you had a few weak lines too, and goin over was no good. But the ass in your pic is soooo fine. LMAO
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Old 06-30-04, 07:41 AM   #11
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^ lol its straight...i dont give a fuck about this stupid little tourny....i spit that shit quick cuz i have so much shit to do....but good spit spul....go ahead and dq me b/c i dont even give a fuck....
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Old 06-30-04, 01:58 PM   #12
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yea, man, I don't like DQing people, so I don't really care. Uppin' for votes.
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Old 06-30-04, 04:17 PM   #13
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Old 07-01-04, 04:27 AM   #14
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wow only one vote. What a way to win a battle. 1-0 lol
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Old 07-02-04, 02:50 AM   #15
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OOoohhh....this was a hot topical. SPuL...for ya first...you spit some nice shit. Imagery was good...flow and vocab was tite. If El Eye wasn't so fuckin good at topicals...you woulda had this shit. El Eye had the imagery...the story...good god, NOT THE LITTLE BROTHER!?!?!...Haha...anyway...L.I has this for an overall better topical verse...SPuL...keept at it tho. Peep my match in this tourny. Thanks.

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