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ink 5 100.00%
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Old 07-01-04, 05:20 AM   #1
ink
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Poetic Justice vs. Ink

IP: 6114 59E3

10 line verses...
...im up first cuz this lil pussy aint ready.

no hate, no crew, no feeding, no biting, no d/r

i check in, you check in, i get 30 mins to drop, once im finished you check and ge 30 too...

dont get loaked !
 
Old 07-01-04, 05:22 AM   #2
PoEtIc JuStIcE
poetically and justifiably sick
 
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From: england
yo

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im here....spit in 15 mins.....dnt need all day...im off out soon so hurry up n get merked....CHK IN N DRP..FUKIN HURRY UP
 
Old 07-01-04, 05:27 AM   #3
ink
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check
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Old 07-01-04, 05:42 AM   #4
PoEtIc JuStIcE
poetically and justifiably sick
 
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From: england
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yawn.............................................. ...............
 
Old 07-01-04, 05:45 AM   #5
Scriptive
Flyweight
 
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lol sorry for the freepost n all but ink your battlin me aswell ive posted my verse you need to post yours good luck both of you ill vote on this when i can lol peace...
 
Old 07-01-04, 05:47 AM   #6
PoEtIc JuStIcE
poetically and justifiably sick
 
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From: england
pants

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d/q...........u a loss/..haha............................................ ................................
 
Old 07-01-04, 05:52 AM   #7
ink
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IP: 6114 59E3

i got tha critics on der toes as i grip a mic, i spit menu...
...your not cut out for this game, like gatorade , is it in you? /1
ill predict this kats coming played, and todays my first...
...call me sprite remix, cuz ill make dis bitch "obey my verse" /2
you facade, step to the mic and testify what god blessed you with...
...my case you catch will rest your lips, dont delay... or its best you quit /3
if you wanna come hard you better feed from my text...
...I-net geek, youd prolly put weed in front of sex /4
ill have you addicted to my flow til tha point you cant think...
...so the only way your mouth opens, is if you spittin BLACK INK /5
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Old 07-01-04, 05:54 AM   #8
ink
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nah fool , i put 30 mins to drop , lke it or not...

... key your verse cuZ
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Old 07-01-04, 06:05 AM   #9
Scriptive
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ink you battlein me the battle in in front lines ive posted my verse.... peace. that was some nice shit...
 
Old 07-01-04, 06:22 AM   #10
ink
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freeposting kicks ass... ay poetic bitch key your shit cuZ
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Old 07-01-04, 08:44 AM   #11
PoEtIc JuStIcE
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From: england
ha

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why u cumin on here trin 2 get cats a fucking?
bitch u a chicken..takin 30 mins..so start the clucking
i came b4 u like adam and eve..u cnt hit heavy weight so leave
u lost like holy-field...this site aint 4 an adam lookin 4 a steve
think b4 u print..fukin cross dresser in pink..aint no pimp
ur pen wobble wit a limp..surely u gona blot out that miss print ink?
u cudnt de-feat me....if i woz a dissabled athlete....
i knock u off ya feat leave u cryin like simba on tha retreat
ur style drownin ,only way u above water is wen u pay a toll (on a bridge)
u number 2..coz shits all u drop..but u cudnt flow in a toilet bowl
 
Old 07-01-04, 08:58 AM   #12
Scriptive
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damnnnnnnnnnnn that was some nice shit right there, if i had to give it to some 1 it would be poetic justice because he had better punches and alot more personals that battle was pretty tight...

v/ poetic justice. ill vote as soon as i get 20 posts
 
Old 07-01-04, 02:42 PM   #13
PoEtIc JuStIcE
poetically and justifiably sick
 
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From: england
yo

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ok thanx for tha feedback...uppin.................................. ...............................
 
Old 07-01-04, 03:58 PM   #14
femcee
Flyweight
 
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public knowledge:

scriptive / poetic justice got in an argument with ink, as you see (fucking) link in poets verse.

well they got each other to vote for each other, and other members as well.

a real vote:

punches:ink
structureoet
creativity:ink
wordplay:ink
personals:no body
originality:ink

vote: obviously ink, any not blind newb, herb, vet or fam can see that ink definatley had a better verse, more comdey more landed punches, more personals..

vote: ink
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Old 07-01-04, 04:09 PM   #15
DeLeon
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From: Sa-Town
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Ink
i got tha critics on der toes as i grip a mic, i spit menu...
...your not cut out for this game, like gatorade , is it in you? /1
ok
ill predict this kats coming played, and todays my first...
...call me sprite remix, cuz ill make dis bitch "obey my verse" /2
ha ha..ok
you facade, step to the mic and testify what god blessed you with...
...my case you catch will rest your lips, dont delay... or its best you quit /3
aight..
if you wanna come hard you better feed from my text...
...I-net geek, youd prolly put weed in front of sex /4
aight...
ill have you addicted to my flow til tha point you cant think...
...so the only way your mouth opens, is if you spittin BLACK INK /5
ha ha...aight ok closer

nice flow...you had some punches work on using personals

overall:6.5/10

PJ
why u cumin on here trin 2 get cats a fucking?
bitch u a chicken..takin 30 mins..so start the clucking
no...
i came b4 u like adam and eve..u cnt hit heavy weight so leave
u lost like holy-field...this site aint 4 an adam lookin 4 a steve
again...wack
think b4 u print..fukin cross dresser in pink..aint no pimp
ur pen wobble wit a limp..surely u gona blot out that miss print ink?
ok....nice one...NOT!
u cudnt de-feat me....if i woz a dissabled athlete....
i knock u off ya feat leave u cryin like simba on tha retreat
...O-K
ur style drownin ,only way u above water is wen u pay a toll (on a bridge)
u number 2..coz shits all u drop..but u cudnt flow in a toilet bowl
ok..this was you only decent line

you had a bad verse...no punches except for 1 or 2 struc was ok
but most of your shit was wack


overall:5.0/10

Vote: Ink
 
 


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