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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
ink | 2 | 28.57% | |
Scriptive | 5 | 71.43% | |
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07-01-04, 05:26 AM | #1 |
Flyweight
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Scriptive vs. Ink
IP: 6E73 1F7B
ok the rules are:
no feeding no biting no d/r votes no h8 votes no crew votes the usual good luck... |
07-01-04, 05:38 AM | #2 |
Flyweight
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IP: 6E73 1F7B
look...
you think your good, this is where you get ink poisoned, ink- your a gay faggot, his faveourite band is n-sync- why you come up hating in my thread saying you the best- my name is scriptive and your my unwelcome guest- ill take out my glock, pump 5 slugs into your head- you skinny fuck ill snap you like pencil lead- your unknown in this world your never going to make it- i could kill your so easy just like lickety split- this is where the crowd get all exited "ink's gonna choke"- he's gonna black out fall on the floor and have a stroke- i think im about done with this bitch ass wigga- your never coming back to this fool, ive just pulled the trigger- |
07-01-04, 06:19 AM | #3 | |
New to RB
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IP: 6114 59E3
damn... ur shit is funny
(starts off slow) why your text dont even flow, their just complete nonsense... ...only ILL review your verse would get, is ILLigiterate contents /1 you dont make sense, why be independent when you could have simply just bit... Quote:
(things pick up pace) why you think im skinny, do you have to be so judgemental ?.. ( one tear falls ) ...and why you rappin bout pumpin glocks, you just a thug rental /3 i dont wanna put up wit your shit no more , my rhyme is through... ...im sick of educating this herban(urban) dude, now back to tie my shoe /4
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07-01-04, 06:24 AM | #4 | |
.:Grim Reaper:.
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IP: 6E73 1F7B
this battle was pretty close, ink why were you feeding of scriptives lines. any way inks flowed better but i thought scriptive had better punches and it was funnier. no h8 peace out ya'll.
V/ scriptive. |
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07-01-04, 06:34 AM | #5 |
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IP: 6114 59E3
god bless those dick rider votes
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07-01-04, 06:35 AM | #6 |
New to RB
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IP: 6114 59E3
actually ... you are quite right. this bitch should win just cuz its tha funniest verse i have ever read in my life. SHIT
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07-01-04, 06:55 AM | #7 | |||
Flyweight
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Scriptive vs. Ink
IP: A88B F94E
yes the rules... no feeding
should probably just get disqualified -scriptive- your verse was ok. you had some ok punches in there Quote:
this was ok for an opener... it flows but this Quote:
do you mean like likety got killed by rabbit.... -ink- you whole verse was fed by his you even quoted him in a no feed battle you complained bout him callin you skinny it's a fuckin battle hit him back... if you wanna dis him write an open mic vote- scriptive i aint no dickrider and i got no crew... you just fed that battle have another one he got you
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07-01-04, 09:00 AM | #8 |
Flyweight
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IP: 6E73 1F7B
uppinnnnnnnn lets get this over with
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07-01-04, 10:28 AM | #9 |
Flyweight
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IP: 6E73 1F7B
uppinnnnnnnnnnnn
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07-01-04, 02:47 PM | #10 | |
poetically and justifiably sick
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ok
IP: 6AD2 8F43
ink u fed off scriptives verse..........thats against the rules...
apart from that scriptive had beta metas wordplay punches.. scriptive wins...only advice 4 u is to b more original wit ya punches gay jokes..n guns r played...ok spit though...# ink..nice structure...sum gud wordplay..punches were weak n ur personals were all feedin... vote-scriptive |
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07-01-04, 02:48 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: FF18 20BC
damn I need ya'll mafuckas to hurry up and close this battle out 4 me.....Its 3-0 me so far here is the link
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132586 you vote on mine I vote on your scouts honor!!!!!! Lol
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07-01-04, 03:10 PM | #12 |
New to RB
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IP: 5867 FD83
i know you all have relationships outside od RB affair, im reporting d/r on this damn battle, my punches blew him away, his verse was some childish play thing...
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07-01-04, 03:34 PM | #13 | |
Flyweight
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Scriptive vs. Ink
IP: A88B F94E
you fed of his verse man you report and you'll probably get DQ'd
face it...
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07-01-04, 03:45 PM | #14 |
Flyweight
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IP: 5867 FD83
HERES A REAL VOTE
scriptive: you think your good, this is where you get ink poisoned, ink- your a gay faggot, his faveourite band is n-sync- [COLOR=blue][SIZE=1][b]-conry ass opener why you come up hating in my thread saying you the best- my name is scriptive and your my unwelcome guest- -aight, but use some wordplay ill take out my glock, pump 5 slugs into your head- you skinny fuck ill snap you like pencil lead- -dont relate yourself to a gang when your just a white boy with a laptop your unknown in this world your never going to make it- i could kill your so easy just like lickety split- -didnt rhyme, and you should have been banned for a line like this this is where the crowd get all exited "ink's gonna choke"- he's gonna black out fall on the floor and have a stroke- -umm alright, still no wordplay and needs some structure i think im about done with this bitch ass wigga- your never coming back to this fool, ive just pulled the trigger- -again, talking about physically killing when its a verbal battle, closure gets 3/10 ink: (starts off slow) why your text dont even flow, their just complete nonsense... ...only ILL review your verse would get, is ILLigiterate contents /1 -i understand the punch, but it could have hit harder with better structure you dont make sense, why be independent when you could have simply just bit... Quote: Originally Posted by scriptive i could kill you so easy just like lickety split- -its true there is no feeding, but great idea, and great bar (things pick up pace) why you think im skinny, do you have to be so judgemental ?.. ( one tear falls ) ...and why you rappin bout pumpin glocks, you just a thug rental /3 -cmfs, he was being sarcastic, i like this line, i was laughing, i think you were trying to say that scriptive is a wanna be thug, cause scriptives talkin about glocks and triggers. i dont wanna put up wit your shit no more , my rhyme is through... ...im sick of educating this herban(urban) dude, now back to tie my shoe /4 -lol, nice closure, i give it a 7/10 now for the vote: if your talking about the rules, yes ink did feed, but you broke a few rules yourself... 1.hate vote (poetic justice), only voted for you b/c he got in an argument with him as well as you did... 2.dick rider votes, you must have swayed ppl to come and explain these wack votes, cu the only one ive ever seen post in my life before is CMFS, ery one is a suspected dick rider. so he fed, and you have d/r and hate.whats fair? his verse was way better then that humiliation achieved versed you posted. reason: better personals, better punches, his verse rhymed, structure was almost at its top, wordplay was great, creativity was alright, and he made me laugh with a few of his lines. vote: ink |
07-01-04, 03:58 PM | #15 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 6247 B101
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you think your good, this is where you get ink poisoned, ink- your a gay faggot, his faveourite band is n-sync- WACK!!!!! why you come up hating in my thread saying you the best- my name is scriptive and your my unwelcome guest- WACK AGAIN ill take out my glock, pump 5 slugs into your head- you skinny fuck ill snap you like pencil lead- no punch...wack your unknown in this world your never going to make it- i could kill your so easy just like lickety split- doesnt rhyme...wack this is where the crowd get all exited "ink's gonna choke"- he's gonna black out fall on the floor and have a stroke- gay...damn this is herb shit i think im about done with this bitch ass wigga- your never coming back to this fool, ive just pulled the trigger wack closer Your verse speaks for itself...wack wack wack... no punches and no personals flow wasnt good the only thing you had right was your struc 5/10 Ink why your text dont even flow, their just complete nonsense... ...only ILL review your verse would get, is ILLigiterate contents /1 finally a punch you dont make sense, why be independent when you could have simply just bit... Quote: Originally Posted by scriptive i could kill you so easy just like lickety split- ok....not really feedin so good /2 (things pick up pace) why you think im skinny, do you have to be so judgemental ?.. ( one tear falls ) ...and why you rappin bout pumpin glocks, you just a thug rental /3 ha ha..ok could of done better with this one i dont wanna put up wit your shit no more , my rhyme is through... ...im sick of educating this herban(urban) dude, now back to tie my shoe /4 ok closer could of done a little better nice flow...you HAD punches no personals but a better flow that S 7/10 vote=ink S you got d/r's to vote cuz if they were honest...they would say your verse was just herbish |
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